Direction help please urgent xxx

they are entering one from left one from the right and bump into each other but I get an error, also there is something not working on this scene, can someone try it on his portal please:

script:

EXT. CAMPUS QUAD RED - DAY
@pan to zone 2
@LEXA enters from right to spot 1.280 122 7 in 3
@AXEL enters from left to spot 1.250 218 24 5 in 5
&AXEL starts run_fall AND LEXA starts run_fall
@pause for a beat

@AXEL spot 1.280 122 7 AND AXEL is stand_up
@LEXA spot 1.250 218 24 AND LEXA is stand_up

&AXEL is dustoff_loop
&LEXA is dustoff_loop

@pause for a beat

@LEXA starts idle_awkward

    AXEL (talk_angry)
YOU! Watch it!
Stay out of my way.

@LEXA starts idle_terrified
@pause for a beat

@AXEL starts think

@pause for a beat
AXEL (laugh_chuckle)
Damn right, you should be scared.
@AXEL exits right

sound schoolbell
LEXA (deepbreath)
(It’s ok Lexa, just breathe.)
(That’s it. In and out, in and out.)

@LEXA starts startled_surprised

@pause for a beat

    LEXA (deepbreath)
(Time for lessons.)

@transition fade out black 3

please someone help me …
thanks x

There’s an extra number. @AXEL enters from left to spot 1.250 218 24 (5) in 5.
It should be this way:
@AXEL enters from left to spot 1.250 218 24 in 5
or
@AXEL enters from left to spot 1.250 218 5 in 5

You have to spot direct them off screen and a longer pause after they run_fall maybe use @ instead of &

Can u type that please x

EXT. CAMPUS QUAD RED - DAY
@pan to zone 2
@LEXA spot 1.280 450 3 AND AXEL spot 1.250 -150 7
@LEXA walks to spot 1.280 218 3 in 3 AND AXEL walks to spot 1.250 150 7 in 3 THEN LEXA is run_fall AND AXEL is run_fall
@pause for a beat

@AXEL spot 1.280 122 7 AND AXEL is stand_up
@LEXA spot 1.250 218 3 AND LEXA is stand_up

&AXEL is dustoff_loop
&LEXA is dustoff_loop

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WoW it is perfect can i text you when i have other problems xxx

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Sure :slight_smile:

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thanks dear x

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