@marcosimp omg yes! I so totally get that! That moment of everything breaking down to build up into breakthrough is everything!
Thanks for the links, I’ll check then out! Is your story out yet?
@CovfefeBoss yes! I understand what you mean. Sometimes characters don’t grieve and dive into the investigation directly. I’m glad I’m not the only one who’s bugged by it.
The last line ended me, haha.
@iDiOt_SaNdWhIcH I could not agree more!! I recently finished a mystery story, and it had so many unanswered questions, so many plot holes, it bugged me for days!
And yes, it is kind of enticing how suddenly a good character turns evil. It makes you question all of their actions leading upto that point and haha, you just inspired me!!