Also when I let the reader customize their brother it goes all wrong. When I click customize a character and I am done the MC comes in again then it repeats and also when I am done customizing the brother it sends me to the MC place. I actually do not know how to explain it so
INT. BLACK - NIGHT
#MUM stands screen center in zone 3
#DAD stands screen center in zone 3
@YOU changes into YOU_default
@cut to zone 2
@YOU stands screen center AND YOU faces left
NARRATOR
So… what’s your name?
label first_name_input
input What’s Your First Name?|What’s Your First Name?|Done(NAME)
if (NAME is “”) {
NARRATOR
You do need a name.
goto first_name_input
} else {
continue
}
label changing_appearance
NARRATOR
So [NAME], what's your look?
choice
“Customize character”{
@YOU goes to character avatar
goto changing_appearance
}
“Use profile avatar”{
@YOU becomes female profile
goto changing_appearance
}
“I look perfect”{
}
@YOU exits right
@pause for a beat
@CHARLIE enters from right to screen center
NARRATOR
[NAME], Can you customize your brother too make him look like you
choice
“Customize character”{
@CHARLIE goes to character avatar
goto changing_appearance
}
“He looks perfect”{
}
@MUM becomes YOU
@MUM changes eyebrows into Arched Natural
@MUM changes face into Heart Mature
@MUM changes eyes into Deepset Downturned
@MUM changes mouth into Medium Heart Natural
@MUM changes hair into Classic Bob
@MUM changes nose into Grecian Soft
@MUM changes into MUM_default
@DAD becomes CHARLIE
@DAD changes eyebrows into Round Soft
@DAD changes face into Chiseled Square Stubble Shaved
@DAD changes eyes into Male Deep Sunken
@DAD changes mouth into Medium Straight Natural
@DAD changes hair into Tousled Loose Curls Long
@DAD changes nose into Hooked Grecian
@DAD changes into DAD_default
@CHARLIE exits left
@transition fade out black 1
