Do you guys like this song that I wrote mind and Ankita's story?

So guys, I have written a song for a story that I am writing along with @ankita.illustrates! It’s called Let’s sail down the river by a band called Sailors and it’s their hit song!! Do you you guys think it deserves to be a hit song? :thinking: :sparkles: This song is written entirely by me and I am not a professional so…please give me suggestions :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:!

Let's sail down the river

It have never been easy

Not having you around

It always hurts to know

That you are happy with another guy

He was holding your hands

But let him know that they were once mine

Baby I need you by my side

Wipe my tears while I cry

Sit by me while I try

To be the perfect guy

You deserve….you deserve!

Let’s sail down the river holding hands

At midnight

Underneath a starry sky

………………

Please don’t leave me alone in this darkness

I am afraid of the dark, my love!

This hurts more than I anticipated

I know it’s complicated

But let’s give us one more try

Let’s sail down the river holding hands

At midnight

Underneath a starry sky

Baby I am yours for the rest of my life……

For the rest of my life……

I will find the answers that were always here

I will find the meaning this time

I will fight the end

Till the end is here…

Till’ the end, until the end

Till’ the end of my life, of my life

I will always be yours……

So, Let’s sail down the river holding hands

At midnight

Underneath a starry sky (x2)

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