Do you need someone to help proof read and give real feedback on your stories?


Do you need hep proof reading, corrections and feedback on your stories? i dont really know how we will do the proof reading/corrections but we’ll have to arrange that i have no social media but this is something im deaply intrested in doing and helping the episode community.
All you have to do is give me the name of the story and i can write it in the fanmail or in the comments of the forum whichever you decide
It will take me a few days to write reviews on all the stories so please be patient


Hey, this is so nice of you. I would like some feedback on my published story please. I’d like the feedback sent as a PM to me on here if that’s okay with you.

~Story Details~

Title: Soccer Moms: Blast to the Future
Author: Winter05 with Episode Royalty
Style: INK
Genre: Drama
Description: All it takes is one shot to change your whole life. Win or lose, nothing will ever be the same. [INK]
Instagram: @winter05.episode

Feel free to leave a nice fanmail. :wink:

Winter :snowflake:


ok thank you i’ll get to it


Title: Break Down My Walls
Author: @moonlight123.episode
Genre: Drama
Style: Ink
Description: In a hopeless world, you never thought you can feel love. But when you join a rebel gang, you feel attracted to the leader. Will he break your walls or will you break down his? (theres a lot more to my story than the description :wink: )
Hey I just published my first story so any feedback whether negative or positive would be a huge help to me. :slight_smile:
i don’t really need help with proofreading but hearing feedback is important :smile:


ok i’ll get on it


Thank you again! :smile:


no problem


thanks :slight_smile:


I would like real feedback!
Title: Shape Shifting Madness
Author: Dasha
Style: Ink
DM me on Episode Forums! :grin::ok_hand:


Ok I’ll get to it


Please check my story, I need help with it.

Title: Stained love

Thank you


Hi, @Xoxobear!

Thank you very much for creating this thread, this is very kind of you! Constructive criticism is exactly what I am looking for!

If you are interested in reading a story with several mini-games and where CHOICES REALLY MATTER then, please, give my story a try. I promise, the story will keep you hooked :blush:

My story details:

Name of story: H & V: Fate
Author: Alex Af
Genre: Thriller
Episodes: 4 (completed)
Summary of story: Young ambitious journalist hunting down a powerful tycoon who has made a fortune based on lies. But who really is a villain here? Choices matter.
Link to story:


Ok I’ll get to it


Ok I’ll get to it right away


Thank you very much!



Thank you sooo much


Hi! I just published my first story and would like to get some feedback if you are still up for it.
You can DM me here.
Thank you

Title: Tall Dark Stranger
Author: esbiz
Style: Ink
Genre: Romance
Episodes: 3 (more coming soon)
Description: You meet tall dark stranger and everything goes smoothly with him and you find yourself falling for him but is it going to last?
Character customization
Instagram: @esbiz.episode


Please PM me the review
Title: Niklaus’s Grandchildren
Author: Jazmend esparza
Genre : Drama
Description: Meet Niklaus grandchildren all 7 of them. turns out hope was the first born after all. Or was she?
Style: INK
Episodes Released: 10 (ongoing)



Title: Good Behavior
Author: Elaf
Genre: Drama
Chapters: 4 revamped.
Description: Being independent is all what Silver believed in, “never trust anyone” is her #1 rule, but rules were made to be broken, right?
A pm would be nice lol


I’ll get on it soon