HI! I’m Riley, and i can be a very honest kinda gal. So just ask for my opinion in some of your stories and i will contribute!
Any chance you can read my first episode?
I’ve been working on it for the longest and really need fresh eyes.
I’m worried about spelling, grammar, glitches, and overall flow.
Thanks in advance!
Wow! By the title i already knew it would be an interesting story! Its very unique and i love the characters already, good job. I recommend maybe spot checking just to make sure, or it might be my phone because it works weird on episode. Overall good job!
It’s good! I like it. But I am a little confused on the dead part and angels(etc)
Thanks These characters are all dead and in limbo trying to earn their way into heaven.
Erik is the designated angel to keep an eye on things and push them to the path of good.
He’s basically traveling for work lol He lives in heaven.
I think I should add some angel info in there so it’s more informative.
Thank you! And sure, which parts needed spot checking?
Yeah. Can you put that in there to clarify? Because people might not know stuff like that. I would say explain it more.
Will do, thank you!
Hi Riley! I would love some feedback on my story!
Title: The Unexpected
Author: C. Jade
Chapters: 3 (ongoing)
Summary: Life has not always been kind to Shay. But what happens when she meets a gorgeous stranger than turns her life upside and proposes an offer she can’t refuse?
If you’re free I would like to have some feedback
Title: I made the devil cry
Link : http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5097630993022976
Thank you very much!