Does anyone need help with their story?

Hi everyone! I’m reposting this old thread of mine (from when I first started going on the forums lol) so that I can help some more people! Just pm if you need any help :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:


Hey! So I can Pm you if I need any help?

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Yep! I can help with basically anything except coding lol

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Hey! Could you proofread my story? English is not my first language and I’m afraid to have grammar mistakes or that some sentences might look messy and won’t be easy to understand :sweat_smile:

I keep getting an error that there is a { without a matching } and to me the coding looks just fine, but I’m working on my very first story, so I’m not exactly an expert
Here’s what I’ve got:

    GRACE (talk_afraid)
I'm a...

GRACE (talk_afraid)
I’m a witch. I was practicing…
GRACE (talk_think_neutral)
GRACE (talk_armsraised_neutral)
Divination! And I had a vision that I was supposed to come here, so I did.
&GRACE is idle_sad_timid_loop
HENRY (talk_armscrossed_angry_loop)
A witch?
I’ve heard enough.
&zoom reset
&GUARD starts react_startled_subtle and GRACE starts react_startled_surprised
HENRY (talk_armscrossed_angry_loop)
Take her away!
&guard walks to back right then GRACE faces right
@HENRY exits left
GUARD (tinker_stand_neutral_loop_rear)
Come on, you’re coming with me.
@GRACE exits left and GRACE does it while walk_handcuffed_sad_loop and GUARD exits left
transition fade out
goto burn_the_witch

(also I just noticed that on one of the lines the character’s name wasn’t capitalized, and I fixed that, even though that wasn’t the problem I was experiencing)