OMG I READ THE FIRST FOUR CHAPTERS AND ITS AMAZING. I love the fact how it has a bit of comedy in it, how there’s also a bit of mystery about the MC true identity, and how the MC is a kick-a*s woman becuase we usually dont see much of that.
The directing and the overlays tho… HOW DID YOU GET THEM SO INCREDIBLE IM SCREAMING.
Overall, i really love your story so far, and I think it’s amazing, especially because it is your first story. I love it