Does anyone want to partner and make a story/review my story from time to time?


#1

Hi!
This is the story for now.

INT. BLACK - DAY

    NARRATOR
| color:pink, italic, bold | The story is beginning.

EXT. CAFE - DAY

@transition fade in black 3

@SONG SEUNG HEON changes into SONG SEUNG HEON_default

@pan to zone 2

@REBEKAH changes into REBEKAH_default

@pan to zone 1

sound ambient_birds

    NARRATOR
| color:pink, italic, bold | It is a beautiful day outside. The time is 7am and the birds are chirping.

    NARRATOR
| color:pink, bold | *imitates birds*

music ambient_birds

@SONG SEUNG HEON enters from left to spot 1.280 209 18

@SONG SEUNG HEON faces left

@pause for a beat

@REBEKAH enters from left to screen left

@REBEKAH is blush_shy

    SONG SEUNG HEON (talk_armscrossed_neutral_loop)
I keep telling you that your pomsky is cute but you don't believe it and always take her out to tease me!

    REBEKAH (talk_apathetic)
If you want to pet her, just say it! You don't have to act so macho.

    REBEKAH (talk_handsopen_happy_loop)
Here, hold this bag.

@SONG SEUNG HEON changes into SONG SEUNG HEON_puppydefault

@REBEKAH changes into REBEKAH_nopuppydefault

@SONG SEUNG HEON is admire_happy

@SONG SEUNG HEON faces left

    SONG SEUNG HEON (admire_happy)
She's so.. so.. um.. CUTE!!

    NARRATOR
Sadly, our handsome boy cannot move his head to look at Rebekah's pomsky. Neither can Rebekah. The author is annoyed.

@REBEKAH is laugh_giggle

@transition fade out black 3

EXT. HOTAIR BALLOON OL - DAY

@REBEKAH changes into REBEKAH_datenight

@SONG SEUNG HEON changes into SONG SEUNG HEON_casual

@REBEKAH spot 1.280 183 -27

@REBEKAH faces left

@SONG SEUNG HEON spot 1.280 95 -14

@pause for a beat

@pause for a beat

@transition fade out black 3

EXT. CHESTNUT HILL DOWNTOWN 2 - NIGHT

@REBEKAH changes into REBEKAH_secondtrimester

@SONG SEUNG HEON changes into SONG SEUNG HEON_withjacket

@cut to zone 3

@SONG SEUNG HEON spot 0.551 192 243

@REBEKAH spot 0.542 122 246

@SONG SEUNG HEON faces left

    SONG SEUNG HEON (talk_neutral_loop)
It's already Christmas, but it still feels like autumn.

    REBEKAH (talk_neutral_loop)
Heh.

@REBEKAH is rear

@REBEKAH is idle_shiver_cold_loop

    SONG SEUNG HEON (talk_handsopen_happy_loop)
Here, wear my jacket.

@SONG SEUNG HEON changes into SONG SEUNG HEON_withoutjacket

@REBEKAH changes into REBEKAH_withjacket

    REBEKAH (idle_blowhands_cold_loop)
Thanks sweetie.

    SONG SEUNG HEON (talk_neutral_loop)
No problem.

EXT. SNOWY LANE - DAY with effect LIGHT SNOW

@transition fade in black 3

@pan to zone 2

@pan to zone 3

@pan to zone 2

@REBEKAH changes into REBEKAH_winter

@SONG SEUNG HEON changes into SONG SEUNG HEON_winter

sound running_heels

@REBEKAH walks to spot 1.280 271 -12 AND REBEKAH is run_athletic_neutral_loop

@REBEKAH faces left

@pause for a beat

@SONG SEUNG HEON enters from left to screen center AND SONG SEUNG HEON is run_athletic_neutral_loop

@REBEKAH is laugh_giggle

    SONG SEUNG HEON (talk_handsonhips_neutral)
Be careful. You're the one that's pregnant, you know.

    REBEKAH (eyeroll_sarcastic)
Fine, fine.

EXT. GALAXY - DAY

@transition fade in black 3

@REBEKAH changes into REBEKAH_datenight

Avatar - Female {

@REBEKAH enters from left to screen center
NARRATOR
Please put Rebekah as your name. The author is not familiar enough with donacode to know how to remove this option. Please. She’s begging you.
label first_name_input
input What’s Your First Name?|What’s Your First Name?|Done(NAME)
if (NAME is “”) {
NARRATOR
You do need a name.
goto first_name_input
} else {
continue
}

label avatar_0
@zoom reset
@speechbubble reset
NARRATOR
So, [NAME], what’s your look?
choice
“Skin Tone” {
goto bodyColor_0
}“Hair” {
goto hair_0
}“Eyes” {
goto eyes_0
}“Eyebrows” {
goto brows_0
}“Face Shape”{
goto face_0
}“Nose” {
goto nose_0
}“Mouth” {
goto mouth_0
} “This is perfect!” {
goto avatar_end
}

label bodyColor_0
@zoom on 155 0 to 120% in 0
#@zoom on 455 0 to 120% in 0
#@zoom on 765 0 to 120% in 0
@REBEKAH starts idle_loop
NARRATOR
What skin color would you like?
choice
“Fair Warm”{
@REBEKAH changes bodyColor into Fair Warm
goto bodyColor_0
}“Fair Gold”{
@REBEKAH changes bodyColor into Fair Gold
goto bodyColor_0
}“Beige Light Neutral”{
@REBEKAH changes bodyColor into Beige Light Neutral
goto bodyColor_0
}“Fair Neutral”{
@REBEKAH changes bodyColor into Fair Neutral
goto bodyColor_0
}“Beige Light Rose”{
@REBEKAH changes bodyColor into Beige Light Rose
goto bodyColor_0
}“Fair Rose”{
@REBEKAH changes bodyColor into Fair Rose
goto bodyColor_0
}“Beige Light Gold”{
@REBEKAH changes bodyColor into Beige Light Gold
goto bodyColor_0
}“Beige Rose”{
@REBEKAH changes bodyColor into Beige Rose
goto bodyColor_0
}“Beige Gold”{
@REBEKAH changes bodyColor into Beige Gold
goto bodyColor_0
}“Tan Neutral”{
@REBEKAH changes bodyColor into Tan Neutral
goto bodyColor_0
}“Next Page >>”{
goto bodyColor_1
}“This looks good!”{
@REBEKAH starts idle_happy_loop
goto avatar_0
}

label bodyColor_1
@REBEKAH starts idle_loop
NARRATOR
What skin color would you like?
choice
“Beige Deep Gold”{
@REBEKAH changes bodyColor into Beige Deep Gold
goto bodyColor_1
}“Beige Deep Neutral”{
@REBEKAH changes bodyColor into Beige DeepNeutral
goto bodyColor_1
}“Beige Neutral”{
@REBEKAH changes bodyColor into Beige Neutral
goto bodyColor_1
}“Tan Gold”{
@REBEKAH changes bodyColor into Tan Gold
goto bodyColor_1
}“Beige Deep Rose”{
@REBEKAH changes bodyColor into Beige Deep Rose
goto bodyColor_1
}“Tan Rose”{
@REBEKAH changes bodyColor into Tan Rose
goto bodyColor_1
}“Tan Deep Gold”{
@REBEKAH changes bodyColor into Tan Deep Gold
goto bodyColor_1
}“Tan Deep Rose”{
@REBEKAH changes bodyColor into Tan Deep Rose
goto bodyColor_1
}“Tan Deep Neutral”{
@REBEKAH changes bodyColor into Tan Deep Neutral
goto bodyColor_1
}“Next Page >>”{
goto bodyColor_2
}"<< Previous Page"{
goto bodyColor_0
}“This looks good!”{
@REBEKAH starts idle_happy_loop
goto avatar_0
}

label bodyColor_2
@REBEKAH starts idle_loop
NARRATOR
What skin color would you like?
choice
“Brown Gold”{
@REBEKAH changes bodyColor into Brown Gold
goto bodyColor_2
}“Brown Neutral”{
@REBEKAH changes bodyColor into Brown Neutral
goto bodyColor_2
}“Brown Rose”{
@REBEKAH changes bodyColor into Brown Rose
goto bodyColor_2
}“Brown Deep Rose”{
@REBEKAH changes bodyColor into Brown Deep Rose
goto bodyColor_2
}“Brown Deep Gold”{
@REBEKAH changes bodyColor into Brown Deep Gold
goto bodyColor_2
}“Brown Deep Neutral”{
@REBEKAH changes bodyColor into Brown Deep Neutral
goto bodyColor_2
}“Beige Green Light”{
@REBEKAH changes bodyColor into Beige Green Light
goto bodyColor_2
}“Green”{
@REBEKAH changes bodyColor into Green
goto bodyColor_2
}“Light Blue”{
@REBEKAH changes bodyColor into Light Blue
goto bodyColor_2
}“Blue”{
@REBEKAH changes bodyColor into Blue
goto bodyColor_2
}"<< Previous Page"{
goto bodyColor_1
}“This looks good!”{
@REBEKAH starts idle_happy_loop
goto avatar_0
}

label brows_0
@zoom on 150 320 to 165% in 0
#@zoom on 470 320 to 165% in 0
#@zoom on 785 320 to 165% in 0
@REBEKAH starts idle_loop
NARRATOR
What eyebrow shape would you like?
choice
“Arched Natural”{
@REBEKAH changes eyebrows into Arched Natural
goto brows_0
}“Arched Thick Styled”{
@REBEKAH changes eyebrows into Arched Thick Styled
goto brows_0
}“Arched Thin”{
@REBEKAH changes eyebrows into Arched Thin
goto brows_0
}“Arched Thin High”{
@REBEKAH changes eyebrows into Arched Thin High
goto brows_0
}“Round Medium”{
@REBEKAH changes eyebrows into Round Medium
goto brows_0
}“Round Thick”{
@REBEKAH changes eyebrows into Round Thick
goto brows_0
}“Round Thin High”{
@REBEKAH changes eyebrows into Round Thin High
goto brows_0
}“Straight Medium”{
@REBEKAH changes eyebrows into Straight Medium
goto brows_0
}“Select a color.”{
goto browsColor_0
} “Looks good!”{
goto avatar_0
}

label browsColor_0
@zoom on 150 320 to 165% in 0
#@zoom on 470 320 to 165% in 0
#@zoom on 785 320 to 165% in 0
@REBEKAH starts idle_loop
NARRATOR
What color should your eyebrows be?
choice
“Black Dark”{
@REBEKAH changes eyebrowsColor into Black Dark
goto browsColor_0
}“Black Jet”{
@REBEKAH changes eyebrowsColor into blackJet
goto browsColor_0
}“Deep Brown”{
@REBEKAH changes eyebrowsColor into Deep Brown
goto browsColor_0
}“Dark Brown”{
@REBEKAH changes eyebrowsColor into Dark Brown
goto browsColor_0
}“Chestnut Brown”{
@REBEKAH changes eyebrowsColor into Chestnut Brown
goto browsColor_0
}“Medium Warm Brown”{
@REBEKAH changes eyebrowsColor into Medium Warm Brown
goto browsColor_0
}“Light Brown”{
@REBEKAH changes eyebrowsColor into Light Brown
goto browsColor_0
}“Blonde Medium”{
@REBEKAH changes eyebrowsColor into Blonde Medium
goto browsColor_0
}“Dirty Blonde”{
@REBEKAH changes eyebrowsColor into Dirty Blonde
goto browsColor_0
}“Honey Blonde”{
@REBEKAH changes eyebrowsColor into Honey Blonde
goto browsColor_0
}“Platinum Blonde”{
@REBEKAH changes eyebrowsColor into Platinum Blonde
goto browsColor_0
}“Next Page >>”{
goto browsColor_1
}“Change eyebrow shape.”{
goto brows_0
}“Looks good!”{
goto avatar_0
}

label browsColor_1
@zoom on 150 320 to 165% in 0
#@zoom on 470 320 to 165% in 0
#@zoom on 785 320 to 165% in 0
@REBEKAH starts idle_loop
NARRATOR
What color should your eyebrows be?
choice
“Strawberry Blonde”{
@REBEKAH changes eyebrowsColor into Strawberry Blonde
goto browsColor_1
}“Gray”{
@REBEKAH changes eyebrowsColor into Gray
goto browsColor_1
}“Cool Gray”{
@REBEKAH changes eyebrowsColor into Cool Gray
goto browsColor_1
}“Warm White”{
@REBEKAH changes eyebrowsColor into Warm White
goto browsColor_1
}“Copper Red”{
@REBEKAH changes eyebrowsColor into Copper Red
goto browsColor_1
}“Ginger Red”{
@REBEKAH changes eyebrowsColor into Ginger Red
goto browsColor_1
}“Green Mint”{
@REBEKAH changes eyebrowsColor into Green Mint
goto browsColor_1
}“Pink Light”{
@REBEKAH changes eyebrowsColor into Pink Lt
goto browsColor_1
}“Purple Lilac”{
@REBEKAH changes eyebrowsColor into Purple Lilac
goto browsColor_1
}"<< Previous Page"{
goto browsColor_0
}“Change eyebrow shape.”{
goto brows_0
}“Looks good!”{
goto avatar_0
}

label face_0
@zoom on 150 350 to 165% in 0
#@zoom on 470 350 to 165% in 0
#@zoom on 785 350 to 165% in 0
@REBEKAH starts idle_loop
NARRATOR
What face shape would you like?
choice
“Diamond Long”{
@REBEKAH changes face into Diamond Long
goto face_0
}“Diamond”{
@REBEKAH changes face into Diamond
goto face_0
}“Heart Defined”{
@REBEKAH changes face into Heart Defined
goto face_0
}“Heart Mature”{
@REBEKAH changes face into Heart Mature
goto face_0
}“Heart Soft”{
@REBEKAH changes face into Heart Soft
goto face_0
}“Round Soft”{
@REBEKAH changes face into Round Soft
goto face_0
}“Square Mature”{
@REBEKAH changes face into Square Mature
goto face_0
}“Triangle Defined”{
@REBEKAH changes face into Triangle Defined
goto face_0
}“Looks good!”{
goto avatar_0
}

label eyes_0
@zoom on 165 350 to 165% in 0
#@zoom on 470 350 to 165% in 0
#@zoom on 785 350 to 165% in 0
@REBEKAH starts idle_loop
NARRATOR
What eye shape would you like?
choice
“Deepset Downturned” {
@REBEKAH changes eyes into Deepset Downturned
goto eyes_0
}“Deepset Mature” {
@REBEKAH changes eyes into Deepset Mature
goto eyes_0
}“Deepset Almond” {
@REBEKAH changes eyes into Deepset Almond
goto eyes_0
}“Sharp Almond” {
@REBEKAH changes eyes into Sharp Almond
goto eyes_0
}“Female Generic” {
@REBEKAH changes eyes into Female Generic
goto eyes_0
}“Monolid Slender” {
@REBEKAH changes eyes into Monolid Slender
goto eyes_0
}“Round Downturned Wide” {
@REBEKAH changes eyes into Round Downturned Wide
goto eyes_0
}“Round Medium” {
@REBEKAH changes eyes into Round Medium
goto eyes_0
}“Select a color.”{
goto eyesColor_0
}“Looks good!”{
goto avatar_0
}

label eyesColor_0
@zoom on 165 350 to 165% in 0
#@zoom on 470 350 to 165% in 0
#@zoom on 785 350 to 165% in 0
@REBEKAH starts idle_loop
NARRATOR
What color should your eyes be?
choice
“Brown Black” {
@REBEKAH changes eyesColor into Brown Black
goto eyesColor_0
}“Brown Dark” {
@REBEKAH changes eyesColor into Brown Dark
goto eyesColor_0
}“Brown Light” {
@REBEKAH changes eyesColor into Brown Light
goto eyesColor_0
}“Grey Cool” {
@REBEKAH changes eyesColor into Grey Cool
goto eyesColor_0
}“Blue Deep” {
@REBEKAH changes eyesColor into Blue Deep
goto eyesColor_0
}“Blue Aqua” {
@REBEKAH changes eyesColor into Blue Aqua
goto eyesColor_0
}“Hazel” {
@REBEKAH changes eyesColor into Hazel
goto eyesColor_0
}“Green Emerald” {
@REBEKAH changes eyesColor into Green Emerald
goto eyesColor_0
}“Red” {
@REBEKAH changes eyesColor into Red
goto eyesColor_0
}“Violet” {
@REBEKAH changes eyesColor into Violet
goto eyesColor_0
}“Change eye shape.”{
goto eyes_0
}“Looks good!”{
goto avatar_0
}

label mouth_0
@zoom on 155 310 to 165% in 0
#@zoom on 470 310 to 165% in 0
#@zoom on 785 310 to 165% in 0
@REBEKAH starts idle_loop
NARRATOR
What mouth shape would you like?
choice
“Full Heart Pouty” {
@REBEKAH changes mouth into Full Heart Pouty
goto mouth_0
}“Medium Heart Natural” {
@REBEKAH changes mouth into Medium Heart Natural
goto mouth_0
}“Medium Thin” {
@REBEKAH changes mouth into Medium Thin
goto mouth_0
}“Thin Heart” {
@REBEKAH changes mouth into Thin Heart
goto mouth_0
}“Select color.”{
goto mouthColor_0
}“Looks good!”{
goto avatar_0
}

label mouthColor_0
NARRATOR
What color lips would you like?
choice
“Natural”{
goto mouthNatural0
}“Bright Colored”{
goto mouthMakeup0
}“Dark Colored”{
goto mouthMakeupDark0
}“Change lip shape.”{
goto mouth_0
}“This looks good!”{
goto avatar_0
}

label mouthNatural0
NARRATOR
What natural lip color would you like?
choice
“Fair Rose Matte” {
@REBEKAH changes mouthColor into Fair Rose Matte
goto mouthNatural0
}“Fair Neutral Matte” {
@REBEKAH changes mouthColor into Fair Neutral Matte
goto mouthNatural0
}“Beige Light Gold Matte” {
@REBEKAH changes mouthColor into Beige Light Gold Matte
goto mouthNatural0
}“Fair Gold Matte” {
@REBEKAH changes mouthColor into Fair Gold Matte
goto mouthNatural0
}“Beige Rose” {
@REBEKAH changes mouthColor into Beige Rose
goto mouthNatural0
}“Beige Gold Matte” {
@REBEKAH changes mouthColor into Beige Gold Matte
goto mouthNatural0
}“Beige Deep Neutral” {
@REBEKAH changes mouthColor into Beige Deep Neutral
goto mouthNatural0
}“Next Page >>”{
goto mouthNatural1
}“Try other colors.”{
goto mouthColor_0
}“Change lip shape.”{
goto mouth_0
}“Looks good!”{
goto avatar_0
}

label mouthNatural1
NARRATOR
What natural lip color would you like?
choice
“Tan Deep Gold” {
@REBEKAH changes mouthColor into Tan Deep Gold
goto mouthNatural1
}“Tan Deep Neutral” {
@REBEKAH changes mouthColor into Tan Deep Neutral
goto mouthNatural1
}“Brown Gold” {
@REBEKAH changes mouthColor into Brown Gold
goto mouthNatural1
}“Brown Neutral” {
@REBEKAH changes mouthColor into Brown Neutral
goto mouthNatural1
}“Brown Deep Rose” {
@REBEKAH changes mouthColor into Brown Deep Rose
goto mouthNatural1
}“Brown Deep Gold” {
@REBEKAH changes mouthColor into Brown Deep Gold
goto mouthNatural1
}"<< Previous Page"{
goto mouthNatural0
}“Try other colors.”{
goto mouthColor_0
}“Change lip shape.”{
goto mouth_0
}“Looks good!”{
goto avatar_0
}

label mouthMakeup0
NARRATOR
What lip color would you like?
choice
“Pink Peach Light Gloss” {
@REBEKAH changes mouthColor into Pink Peach Light Gloss
goto mouthMakeup0
}“Pink Peach Lt Gloss” {
@REBEKAH changes mouthColor into Pink Peach Lt Gloss
goto mouthMakeup0
}“Pink Peach Light Matte” {
@REBEKAH changes mouthColor into Pink Peach Light Matte
goto mouthMakeup0
}“Peach Gloss” {
@REBEKAH changes mouthColor into Peach Gloss
goto mouthMakeup0
}“Peach Matte” {
@REBEKAH changes mouthColor into Peach Matte
goto mouthMakeup0
}“Pink Beige Gloss” {
@REBEKAH changes mouthColor into Pink Beige Gloss
goto mouthMakeup0
}“Pink Beige Matte” {
@REBEKAH changes mouthColor into Pink Beige Matte
goto mouthMakeup0
}“Pink Medium Gloss” {
@REBEKAH changes mouthColor into Pink Medium Gloss
goto mouthMakeup0
}“Pink Medium Matte” {
@REBEKAH changes mouthColor into Pink Medium Matte
goto mouthMakeup0
}“Next Page >>”{
goto mouthMakeup1
}“Try other colors.”{
goto mouthColor_0
}“Change lip shape.”{
goto mouth_0
}“Looks good!”{
goto avatar_0
}

label mouthMakeup1
NARRATOR
What lip color would you like?
choice
“Pink Hot Gloss” {
@REBEKAH changes mouthColor into Pink Hot Gloss
goto mouthMakeup1
}“Pink Hot Matte” {
@REBEKAH changes mouthColor into Pink Hot Matte
goto mouthMakeup1
}“Pink Deep Gloss” {
@REBEKAH changes mouthColor into Pink Deep Gloss
goto mouthMakeup1
}“Pink Deep Matte” {
@REBEKAH changes mouthColor into Pink Deep Matte
goto mouthMakeup1
}“Purple Pastel Gloss” {
@REBEKAH changes mouthColor into Purple Pastel Gloss
goto mouthMakeup1
}“Purple Pastel Matte” {
@REBEKAH changes mouthColor into Purple Pastel Matte
goto mouthMakeup1
}“Pink Warm Gloss” {
@REBEKAH changes mouthColor into Pink Warm Gloss
goto mouthMakeup1
}“Pink Warm Matte” {
@REBEKAH changes mouthColor into Pink Warm Matte
goto mouthMakeup1
}"<< Previous Page"{
goto mouthMakeup0
}“Try other colors.”{
goto mouthColor_0
}“Change lip shape.”{
goto mouth_0
}“Looks good!”{
goto avatar_0
}

label mouthMakeupDark0
NARRATOR
What lip color would you like?
choice
“Red Gloss”{
@REBEKAH changes mouthColor into Red Gloss
goto mouthMakeupDark0
}“Red Matte”{
@REBEKAH changes mouthColor into Red Matte
goto mouthMakeupDark0
}“Rose Gloss”{
@REBEKAH changes mouthColor into Rose Gloss
goto mouthMakeupDark0
}“Rose Matte”{
@REBEKAH changes mouthColor into Rose Matte
goto mouthMakeupDark0
}“Red Deep Gloss”{
@REBEKAH changes mouthColor into Red Deep Gloss
goto mouthMakeupDark0
}“Red Deep Matte”{
@REBEKAH changes mouthColor into Red Deep Matte
goto mouthMakeupDark0
}“Violet Gloss”{
@REBEKAH changes mouthColor into Violet Gloss
goto mouthMakeupDark0
}“Violet Matte”{
@REBEKAH changes mouthColor into Violet Matte
goto mouthMakeupDark0
}“Next Page >>”{
goto mouthMakeupDark1
}“Try other colors.”{
goto mouthColor_0
}“Change lip shape.”{
goto mouth_0
}“Looks good!”{
goto avatar_0
}

label mouthMakeupDark1
NARRATOR
What lip color would you like?
choice
“Mauve Gloss”{
@REBEKAH changes mouthColor into Mauve Gloss
goto mouthMakeupDark1
}“Mauve Matte”{
@REBEKAH changes mouthColor into Mauve Matte
goto mouthMakeupDark1
}“Plum Gloss”{
@REBEKAH changes mouthColor into Plum Gloss
goto mouthMakeupDark1
}“Plum Matte”{
@REBEKAH changes mouthColor into Plum Matte
goto mouthMakeupDark1
}“Black Gloss”{
@REBEKAH changes mouthColor into Black Gloss
goto mouthMakeupDark1
}“Black Matte”{
@REBEKAH changes mouthColor into Black Matte
goto mouthMakeupDark1
}"<< Previous Page"{
goto mouthMakeupDark0
}“Try other colors.”{
goto mouthColor_0
}“Change lip shape.”{
goto mouth_0
}“Looks good!”{
goto avatar_0
}

label hair_0
@zoom on 150 275 to 155% in 0
#@zoom on 480 275 to 155% in 0
#@zoom on 800 275 to 155% in 0
@REBEKAH starts admire_happy
NARRATOR
There are tons of hairstyles to choose from! Which styles would you like to browse?
choice
“Short Hair Styles”{
goto hairShort
}“Mid-length Hair Styles”{
goto hairMedium
}“Long Hair Styles”{
goto hairLong
}“Tied-Up Hair Styles”{
goto hairUp
}“Change Color.”{
goto hairColor_0
}“This looks good!”{
goto avatar_0
}

label hairShort
NARRATOR
What short hair style would you like?
choice
“Short Curly Fade” {
@REBEKAH changes hair into Short Curly Fade
@REBEKAH starts primp_neutral
goto hairShort
}“Short Pixie” {
@REBEKAH changes hair into Short Pixie
@REBEKAH starts primp_neutral
goto hairShort
}“Punk Pixie” {
@REBEKAH changes hair into Punk Pixie
@REBEKAH starts primp_neutral
goto hairShort
}“Classic Bob” {
@REBEKAH changes hair into Classic Bob
@REBEKAH starts primp_neutral
goto hairShort
}“Short Wavy Hair Solid” {
@REBEKAH changes hair into Short Wavy Hair Solid
@REBEKAH starts primp_neutral
goto hairShort
}“Curly Bob” {
@REBEKAH changes hair into Curly Bob
@REBEKAH starts primp_neutral
goto hairShort
}“Blunt Bangs Short” {
@REBEKAH changes hair into Blunt Bangs Short
@REBEKAH starts primp_neutral
goto hairShort
}“Long Faux Hawk Solid” {
@REBEKAH changes hair into Long Faux Hawk Solid
@REBEKAH starts primp_neutral
goto hairShort
}“Change Length.”{
goto hair_0
}“Change Color.”{
goto hairColor_0
}“This looks good!”{
goto avatar_0
}

label hairMedium
NARRATOR
What medium length hair style would you like?
choice
“Straight Medium”{
@REBEKAH changes hair into Straight Medium
@REBEKAH starts primp_neutral
goto hairMedium
}“Short Wavy Ombre” {
@REBEKAH changes hair into Short Wavy Ombre
@REBEKAH starts primp_neutral
goto hairMedium
}“Hair Flip” {
@REBEKAH changes hair into Hair Flip
@REBEKAH starts primp_neutral
goto hairMedium
}“Medium Curly Solid”{
@REBEKAH changes hair into Medium Curly Solid
@REBEKAH starts primp_neutral
goto hairMedium
}“Afro”{
@REBEKAH changes hair into Afro
@REBEKAH starts primp_neutral
goto hairMedium
}“Medium Braided” {
@REBEKAH changes hair into Medium Braided
@REBEKAH starts primp_neutral
goto hairMedium
}“Medium Dreadlocks” {
@REBEKAH changes hair into Medium Dreadlocks
@REBEKAH starts primp_neutral
goto hairMedium
}“Change Length.”{
goto hair_0
}“Change Color.”{
goto hairColor_0
}“This looks good!”{
goto avatar_0
}

label hairLong
NARRATOR
What long hairstyle would you like?
choice
“Beach Wave Hair” {
@REBEKAH changes hair into Beach Wave Hair
@REBEKAH starts primp_neutral
goto hairLong
}“Long Feathered” {
@REBEKAH changes hair into Long Feathered
@REBEKAH starts primp_neutral
goto hairLong
}“Long Straight Loose Solid” {
@REBEKAH changes hair into Long Straight Loose Solid
@REBEKAH starts primp_neutral
goto hairLong
}“Long Straight Loose Bangs Blunt Solid” {
@REBEKAH changes hair into Long Straight Loose Bangs Blunt Solid
@REBEKAH starts primp_neutral
goto hairLong
}“Long Straight Loose Bangs Sideswept Solid” {
@REBEKAH changes hair into Long Straight Loose Bangs Sideswept Solid
@REBEKAH starts primp_neutral
goto hairLong
}“Long Braided” {
@REBEKAH changes hair into Long Braided
@REBEKAH starts primp_neutral
goto hairLong
}“Long Dreadlocks” {
@REBEKAH changes hair into Long Dreadlocks
@REBEKAH starts primp_neutral
goto hairLong
}“Change Length.”{
goto hair_0
}“Change Color.”{
goto hairColor_0
}“This looks good!”{
goto avatar_0
}

label hairUp
NARRATOR
What tied-up style would you like?
choice
“Morning Updo” {
@REBEKAH changes hair into Morning Updo
@REBEKAH starts primp_neutral
goto hairUp
}“Short High Ponytail” {
@REBEKAH changes hair into Short High Ponytail
@REBEKAH starts primp_neutral
goto hairUp
}“Long High Ponytail” {
@REBEKAH changes hair into Long High Ponytail
@REBEKAH starts primp_neutral
goto hairUp
}“Braided Bun” {
@REBEKAH changes hair into Braided Bun
@REBEKAH starts primp_neutral
goto hairUp
}“Change Length.”{
goto hair_0
}“Change Color.”{
goto hairColor_0
}“This looks good!”{
goto avatar_0
}

label hairColor_0
@REBEKAH starts idle_loop
NARRATOR
What hair color would you like?
choice
“Black Dark” {
@REBEKAH changes hairColor into Black Dark
goto hairColor_0
}“Black Jet” {
@REBEKAH changes hairColor into Black Jet
goto hairColor_0
}“Deep Brown” {
@REBEKAH changes hairColor into Deep Brown
goto hairColor_0
}“Dark Brown” {
@REBEKAH changes hairColor into Dark Brown
goto hairColor_0
}“Chestnut Brown” {
@REBEKAH changes hairColor into Chestnut Brown
goto hairColor_0
}“Medium Warm Brown” {
@REBEKAH changes hairColor into Medium Warm Brown
goto hairColor_0
}“Light Brown” {
@REBEKAH changes hairColor into Light Brown
goto hairColor_0
}“Next Page >>”{
goto hairColor_1
}“Change Style.”{
goto hair_0
}“Looks good!”{
goto avatar_0
}

label hairColor_1
@REBEKAH starts idle_loop
NARRATOR
What hair color would you like?
choice
“Yellow” {
@REBEKAH changes hairColor into Yellow
goto hairColor_1
}“Honey Blonde” {
@REBEKAH changes hairColor into Honey Blonde
goto hairColor_1
}“Blonde Medium” {
@REBEKAH changes hairColor into Blonde Medium
goto hairColor_1
}“Dirty Blonde” {
@REBEKAH changes hairColor into Dirty Blonde
goto hairColor_1
}“Ash Blonde” {
@REBEKAH changes hairColor into Ash Blonde
goto hairColor_1
}“Platinum Blonde” {
@REBEKAH changes hairColor into Platinum Blonde
goto hairColor_1
}“Warm White” {
@REBEKAH changes hairColor into Warm White
goto hairColor_1
}“Aqua Gray” {
@REBEKAH changes hairColor into Aqua Gray
goto hairColor_1
}“Cool Gray” {
@REBEKAH changes hairColor into Cool Gray
goto hairColor_1
}“Gray” {
@REBEKAH changes hairColor into Gray
goto hairColor_1
}“Next Page >>”{
goto hairColor_2
}"<< Previous Page"{
goto hairColor_0
}“Change Style.”{
goto hair_0
}“Looks good!”{
goto avatar_0
}

label hairColor_2
@REBEKAH starts idle_loop
NARRATOR
What hair color would you like?
choice
“Burgundy Red” {
@REBEKAH changes hairColor into Burgundy Red
goto hairColor_2
}“Copper Red” {
@REBEKAH changes hairColor into Copper Red
goto hairColor_2
}“Red” {
@REBEKAH changes hairColor into Red
goto hairColor_2
}“Ginger Red” {
@REBEKAH changes hairColor into Ginger Red
goto hairColor_2
}“Strawberry Blonde” {
@REBEKAH changes hairColor into Strawberry Blonde
goto hairColor_2
}“Orange” {
@REBEKAH changes hairColor into Orange
goto hairColor_2
}“Peach Blonde” {
@REBEKAH changes hairColor into Peach Blonde
goto hairColor_2
}“Next Page >>”{
goto hairColor_3
}"<< Previous Page"{
goto hairColor_1
}“Change Style.”{
goto hair_0
}“Looks good!”{
goto avatar_0
}

label hairColor_3
@REBEKAH starts idle_loop
NARRATOR
What hair color would you like?
choice
“Grievance Green” {
@REBEKAH changes hairColor into Grievance Green
goto hairColor_3
}“Aqua Green” {
@REBEKAH changes hairColor into Aqua Green
goto hairColor_3
}“Green Mint” {
@REBEKAH changes hairColor into Green Mint
goto hairColor_3
}“Yellow Green” {
@REBEKAH changes hairColor into Yellow Green
goto hairColor_3
}“Blue Black” {
@REBEKAH changes hairColor into Blue Black
goto hairColor_3
}“Blue” {
@REBEKAH changes hairColor into Blue
goto hairColor_3
}“Aqua Blue” {
@REBEKAH changes hairColor into Aqua Blue
goto hairColor_3
}“Cornflower Blue” {
@REBEKAH changes hairColor into Cornflower Blue
goto hairColor_3
}“Next Page >>”{
goto hairColor_4
}"<< Previous Page"{
goto hairColor_2
}“Change Style.”{
goto hair_0
}“Looks good!”{
goto avatar_0
}

label hairColor_4
@REBEKAH starts idle_loop
NARRATOR
What hair color would you like?
choice
"Plum " {
@REBEKAH changes hairColor into Plum
goto hairColor_4
}"Purple " {
@REBEKAH changes hairColor into Purple
goto hairColor_4
}"Red Purple " {
@REBEKAH changes hairColor into Red Purple
goto hairColor_4
}“Purple Lilac” {
@REBEKAH changes hairColor into Purple Lilac
goto hairColor_4
}“Pop Pink " {
@REBEKAH changes hairColor into Pop Pink
goto hairColor_4
}“Hot Pink " {
@REBEKAH changes hairColor into Hot Pink
goto hairColor_4
}“Pink Light” {
@REBEKAH changes hairColor into Pink Lt
goto hairColor_4
}”<< Previous Page”{
goto hairColor_3
}“Change Style.”{
goto hair_0
}“Looks good!”{
goto avatar_0
}

label nose_0
@zoom on 155 310 to 165% in 0
#@zoom on 465 310 to 165% in 0
#@zoom on 785 310 to 165% in 0
@REBEKAH starts idle_loop
NARRATOR
What nose would you like?
choice
“Defined Natural” {
@REBEKAH changes nose into Defined Natural
goto nose_0
}“Grecian Soft” {
@REBEKAH changes nose into Grecian Soft
goto nose_0
}“Round Broad” {
@REBEKAH changes nose into Round Broad
goto nose_0
}“Round Button” {
@REBEKAH changes nose into Round Button
goto nose_0
}“Round Button Upturned” {
@REBEKAH changes nose into Round Button Upturned
goto nose_0
}“Round Downturned” {
@REBEKAH changes nose into Round Downturned
goto nose_0
}"Round Flared Upturned " {
@REBEKAH changes nose into Round Flared Upturned
goto nose_0
}“Looks good!”{
goto avatar_0
}

label avatar_end
@zoom reset
NARRATOR
Are you sure?
choice
“Yes, this is great!”{
#@remove FAMILYMEMBER1
&REBEKAH exits right
@transition fade out 2
goto story_start
} “Wait, let me go back please!”{
goto avatar_0
}
#}

label story_start

    NARRATOR
| color:pink, italic, bold | You're done? Wow, that took..

    NARRATOR
| color:red , italic | so

    NARRATOR
| color:pink, italic, bold | long.

    NARRATOR
| color:pink, italic, bold | if you put your name as Rebekah, thank you :D

INT. NEWS OFFICE - NIGHT

@SONG SEUNG HEON changes into SONG SEUNG HEON_casual

@cut to zone 2

@SONG SEUNG HEON spot 1.280 197 77

    SONG SEUNG HEON (talk_phone_neutral_loop)
Hey, babe?

INT. LA CONDO - DAY

@cut to zone 3

@REBEKAH changes into REBEKAH_child

@REBEKAH stands screen left AND REBEKAH faces right

@add Baby Swaddle Pink Blanket to REBEKAH

sound baby_crying

    REBEKAH (talk_baby_coo_atbaby)
Yeah? I've got you on speaker!

INT. NEWS OFFICE - NIGHT

    SONG SEUNG HEON (talk_phone_surprised)
Madison a real screamer, eh?

    SONG SEUNG HEON (talk_read_phone_neutral)
Anyway, I was just calling to tell you I'm coming home- tell baby Madison that daddy is coming home too!

INT. LA CONDO - DAY

@cut to zone 3

@REBEKAH stands screen center AND REBEKAH does it while talk_baby_coo_atbaby

    REBEKAH (talk_baby_happy)
I will, babe! I'm gonna end the call now!

INT. NEWS OFFICE - NIGHT

@cut to zone 2

@follow SONG SEUNG HEON to screen center in zone 3

@SONG SEUNG HEON stands screen center

@SONG SEUNG HEON is read_phone_neutral_loop

@SONG SEUNG HEON is text_phone_neutral_loop

INT. LA CONDO - DAY

@cut to zone 3

@REBEKAH stands screen center

@add Baby Swaddle Pink Blanket to Rebekah

@REBEKAH is talk_baby_coo_atbaby

    REBEKAH (talk_baby_coo_atbaby)
Ssh now Madison, daddy's coming home!

INT. CELLPHONE - DAY

    NARRATOR
New message from <3 Darling <3, click to reply

    NARRATOR (SONG SEUNG HEON)
I'll reach in about 10 mins, yeah?

    NARRATOR (REBEKAH)
Hmm.. what shall I text him?

choice “See you then, my handsome boy :P” {

    NARRATOR
See you then, my handsome boy :P

@pause for a beat

@pause for a beat

    NARRATOR
New message from <3 Darling <3, click to reply

    NARRATOR (SONG SEUNG HEON)
See you ;P

} “Kk” {

    NARRATOR
Kk

@pause for a beat

@pause for a beat

@pause for a beat

@pause for a beat

    NARRATOR
New message from <3 Darling <3, click to reply.

    NARRATOR
Can't wait to see you :P

}

INT. LA CONDO - DAY

@add Baby Swaddle Pink Blanket to REBEKAH

@cut to zone 3

@REBEKAH enters from left to screen center and REBEKAH does it while walk_baby_neutral_loop

EXT. CITY HIGHWAY LOOP - NIGHT with CAR ANGLE BROWN

music car_motor

@zoom reset

@overlay CAR ANGLE BROWN shifts to -311 0 in zone 1
@overlay CAR ANGLE BROWN scales to 1.000 1.000

@DRIVER spot 0.848 219 89 AND DRIVER faces right

@SONG SEUNG HEON spot 0.866 126 83 AND SONG SEUNG HEON faces right

@DRIVER starts idle_book_open_neutral_loop

@SONG SEUNG HEON starts idle_armscrossed_neutral_loop

&zoom on 183 146 to 172% in 7

@transition fade in black 3

@pause for 4

@speechbubble is 185 207 to 100% with tail_top_right

    DRIVER (talk_book_open_neutral)
Going home?

@DRIVER starts idle_book_open_neutral_loop

@speechbubble is 129 188 to 100% with tail_top_left

    SONG SEUNG HEON (talk_armsraised_neutral)
Yes. If I may ask, how long do you work?

@speechbubble is 202 205 to 100% with tail_top_left

@zoom on 249 228 to 383% in 0

    DRIVER (talk_book_open_neutral)
Usually till 11pm. So both my wife and my two kids are asleep when I get home.

@DRIVER starts idle_book_open_neutral_loop

@zoom on 120 223 to 383% in 0

@speechbubble is 193 169 to 100% with tail_top_left

    SONG SEUNG HEON (talk_think_neutral)
Oh. Did you ever want to switch jobs?

@zoom on 183 146 to 172% in 0

@pause for 3

    DRIVER (talk_book_open_neutral)
Tis only because I got no choice. You think |italic | anyone

    DRIVER (talk_book_open_neutral)
Would want to do this when there was a better option?

    SONG SEUNG HEON (talk_armsraised_neutral)
No. Especially me. So.. you look pretty young to me to have kids.

    DRIVER (talk_book_open_neutral)
Teen pregnancy and all that.

    SONG SEUNG HEON (talk_armscrossed_neutral_loop)
I wish I could buy you a drink right now.

    DRIVER (talk_book_open_neutral)
Yeah, you can do that by paying me when you leave.

    SONG SEUNG HEON
I will. I will.

@transition fade out black 3

INT. BAKERY - NIGHT

@pan to zone 2

@pan to zone 1

@SONG SEUNG HEON enters from left to spot 0.839 148 173

    SONG SEUNG HEON (callout_neutral)
Excuse me! Is anyone there?

@pan to zone 3

@pause for a beat

@pause for a beat

@EMPLOYEE enters from right to spot 1.055 71 62

    EMPLOYEE (talk_exhausted)
Yes? Who's there?

@cut to zone 1

    SONG SEUNG HEON (talk_startled_neutral)
Oh! Uh, hi. Can I still get a drink?

@cut to zone 2

    EMPLOYEE (talk_exhausted)
Yeah, sure. What type do you want?

    NARRATOR (SONG SEUNG HEON)
A green tea frappucino, please!

    EMPLOYEE (talk_think_neutral)
It's on its way.

@EMPLOYEE exits right

@pause for a beat

sound clang

@cut to zone 1

@SONG SEUNG HEON is react_startled_subtle

@follow EMPLOYEE to screen right in zone 1

    EMPLOYEE (talk_handsopen_happy_loop)
Here you go.

@add Coffee Cup To Go to SONG SEUNG HEON

    SONG SEUNG HEON (talk_cup_neutral_loop)
Thanks. Here's 3 dollars, keep the change.

@SONG SEUNG HEON is talk_handsopen_happy_loop

    EMPLOYEE (talk_handsopen_happy_loop)
Thank you!

@EMPLOYEE exits right

sound cashregister

@transition fade out black 3


#2

Did you publish this?

Looks good


#3

I did! Thank you :smiley:


#4

what’s it called? I’ll definitely read it :slight_smile:


#5

Hidden in the Shadows, I think :slight_smile: I haven’t been active much lately though


#6