i’ve been making this for at least a week and i’m not expert so i’m not sure if it looks ok , also sorry for the massive watermark i just really don’t want it stolen hehe. but does this look ok?
(btw he has fangs and she has a bite mark in her neck you just can’t see her bite mark cos the watermark is covering it)
The eyes should look more to the other person in the drawing, now it looks like they’re both looking to the sides. (Like it should be a little more in perspective)
And shading could do wonders (as said above)
Like the arm of the girl, make a little bit of a sleeve, you can’t really see where her arm/hand is coming from.
Also maybe a little bit of texture on the hair:) (could be done with shading)