Original:
Sarina Parker Miller can see the future. No one really wants to be friends with her. After a week, she just up and moved. At least that’s what they thought happened.Sarina wasn’t the only one who could see the future. And that’s not the only thing she do. In fact her sister Siena Miller can see the future too. Together they are unstoppable, or so they thought.
@higgy_wiggy’s version:
Sarina Parker Miller and her sister Siena can see the future. Together they are unstoppable, or so they thought.
No problem, someone might be able to spice it up a bit more than I can. I think there are threads on here for people who actually help with story descriptions!
I know you need to leave some element of mystery, but there’s really not that much information. I would prefer to know what I’m getting into before I start reading. Maybe the cover would give more details, but I just think the second sentence
Orignal trial improvement:
Sarina Parker Miller can see the future. No one really wants to be friends with her. After a week, she just up and moved. At least that’s what they thought happened. Sarina wasn’t the only one who could see the future. And that’s not the only thing she do. In fact her sister Siena Miller can see the future too. Together they are unstoppable. Unbreakable, unbeatable. Or so they had thought. Until they met Hunter Willows.
@higgy_wiggy’s trial improvement:
Sarina Parker Miller and her sister Siena can see the future. Together they are unstoppable. Unbreakable, unbeatable.
Unstoppable sisters that can see the future, sounds pretty cool. But when your considered supernatural freaks to the world. Everything changes, can they be stopped?Please respond to our group PM.
