Does this look good or need more improvement


#1

Hey so i started making this and I would like some feedback

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#2

Im not good at art, but personally I think the outline looks really good. But it could use some work.


#3

Looks pretty good… a little work with the hands maybe… or it might be something about the face… not sure but something looks off


#4

I’m not an artist (I’m sure I can get @ChaoticDeluge to comment at some point though), but I’d say watch out for the chin. It’s looking a bit big on the left side.


#5

This is how it looks now lol


#6

Her left eye could be tweaked a bit, it doesn’t align with the right eye


#7

That’s what was off… thanks… lol coloring looks good so far


#8

Its looks bad my magic wand wont work took me about an hour just to color it


#9

I can help you tweak the eye in procreate if you want.


#10

How do you use a magic wand?? Lol maybe that’s what I need for my art… haha but idk how to use it


#11

That be awesome


#12

Its easy to use


#13

I’ll get to work on it then!


#14

You just need to change the size if it gets all over the place


#15

Your so awesome lol


#16

I don’t know anything about it… lol


#17

Send me some screen shots of what happens when you press it


#18

I have only done it once and didn’t understand… lol I use ibisPaint


#19

Yeah same


#20

Is this better?