Doing reviews for beginners

I just got me unlimited passes!
Drop your story down below for me to read it.
Along with your instagram for your review…
Let’s start.


Hi, @episode.luqman!

Thank you very much for creating this thread, this is very kind of you! Constructive criticism is exactly what I am looking for!

If you are interested in reading a story with several mini-games and where CHOICES REALLY MATTER then, please, give my story a try. This is my first story ever but I have put a lot of effort in it and would highly appreciate any feedback! I promise, the story will keep you hooked :blush:

My story details:

Name of story: H & V: Fate
Author: Alex Af
Genre: Thriller
Episodes: 4 (completed)
Summary of story: Young ambitious journalist hunting down a powerful tycoon who has made a fortune based on lies. But who really is a villain here? Choices matter.
Link to story:

Hi, I would love the support and a reading!
Story title: Breaking the Cycle & Breaking the Cycle 2: Loyalty
Author: Making
Genre: Romance/Drama
Style: Ink
Instagram: Mz.kingtko
Episodes: Season 1 (15) Season 2(3)
Story Description: Saniyah finally is getting her life on track and heading towards the right direction. Will she be able to succeed successfully and will she have someone to make new memories with? Find out if her past comes to taunt her or do she thrive on everything that stands in her way. 16+ (This story have choices)

Heres my story

Story Title : The Art of The Deal
Author : GraceX
Episodes :
18 ongoing
Action/Comedy/Slight Romance
Romance, betrayal and secrets. What will happen when Isobel gets involved in the black market of the art world and a sexy gang leader?
Insta: epy.gracex

Hey, I would love for you to give my story a chance, but since I don’t have instagram, perhaps you could message me with your review. :slight_smile:
Here’s the details to my story in case you want to check it out.
Title: Shattered Souls
Genre: Romance
Style: Ink

I just created a story using my phone, and it already has 12 episodes.
I would love you to read some on them (all of it if you like it ? Lol) to tell me what you think about it. I don’t have and instagram for the story yet, you could maybe just comment your thoughts ?

Title : Stockholm syndrom : the broken one
Author : Dr Joje.


Hi, this is so kind of you! I’d love a review, here are my story details:

Title: Reformed
Author: Cordelia M
Description: Violet gave up a life of petty crime and way too much black leather over a year ago. New bad boy Carter can’t seem to resist trying to uncover her dark past. Is she truly reformed?

And my IG is @cordeliam.episode

Thank you! :yellow_heart:

Hey, I would love for you to read my story as well.
And I would also appreciate if you could also give me some pointers on how I can improve.
Title : Love Is Blind
Author : Eyesaremylens

Hi there! Thanks for supporting! Here’s my story : )

Author: E.Z.
Genre: Fantasy
Style: Ink
Chapters: 8 (on going)
Instagram: @e.z.episode
Description: He starved himself for three hundred years in order to abide by a woman’s promise. Everyone in Devildom is waiting for him to die.

Hi thank you for this!

TITLE: For my sister.
AUTHOR: Plamedi Hakim
DESCRIPTION: Seeking revenge for your sister’s death leads you in the arms of the killer’s son.
Can love conquer it all or …?
Genre: Drama, romance and adventure.
Style: Limelight
INSTAGRAM: Plm.episode
Story: Sealed With A Kiss
Author: Ana Marquez
Please check it out and let me know what you think!

Title: H & V: From Zero to Hero
Author: Dr.Smile
Description: Jax is the disabled loser of Mediocreopolis High, but one odd day, his life is completely transformed by a–burrito?! Drama, choices, romance, evil, and deception await.
Thank you if you gave my story a try!

Thanks @episode.luqman for this thread! But I don’t have an instagram! So u can pm me on here if ya want @Chay

Title: First Love
Author: Chanell
Gerne: Romance
Style: Limeight
Description: Love, Lies and Betrayl, Chay will face it all while finding and losing her First Love!


Thank you so much for this.

Title - I am Dating a Liar
Author - Amiara
Genre - Drama
Description - Ava had horrible past so she is afraid to date anyone. She started working in new company where her boss try to get her so she lied to ignore her boss that she is already dating.

Link -

IG- @sandy_candy6238

Hey @episode.luqman ,

I just published 3 episodes of my first story!

I would really appreciate it if you would check it out and give me a feedback!

My story details:

Name of story: I hate you, Mr. Carter
Author: Mariposa
Genre: Romance
A job offer changes everything in Marisol Rodriguez’ life. Will she be able to resist her charming and sexy boss? Or will all end in more drama after she lost the love of her life?

My Instagram account: mariposa_episode

Thank you for creating this thread!

Hi, very appreciate for your time and passes and try to read my story :sparkling_heart:
Name Rose
Author Jojo
Genre Romance
Description Already struggling with her past, Rose falls into some more drama and romance mystery, what adventure and heartbreak will she face next?
Instagram @Fongjoline

hello, heres my story.
Title: Read my mind
genre: Romance
Author: Irenereid00
Description: Noelle never thought she would fall for a criminal after becoming a psychiatrist for NYPD that was until she met Jax wilder - a bad boy who doesn’t want his mind read.
Charcters: Ink
Instagram: episode.readmymind
Thank you, hope tohear from you soon.

Hi there!
Thank you for creating this thread. I am a first time author and would really appreacite some feedback.
Title: H & V: Lie to me
Author: Alexandra Mar
Genre: Drama/Mystery with romantic subplots
Description: After only serving 3 years of a 25 to life sentence, Aiden Suarez is mysteriously released. But wait, what’s that? Oh right, “Aiden Suarez” no longer exists.
Instagram: alexandramar.episode

Hey, this is my first story and I hope you could give it a read!
Author: feck.b
Instagram: feck.bx (feck.b is my old account and I have no access to it.)
Category: action/adventure
Description: She runs in tears, bumping into a “school friend” stabbing someone. Forced to join in a British gang,What Will Haunt Her Now?

Title: Sweet 16
Genre: Romance
Description: Maya has a few days left until turning 16,will you have the best year, or does fate have other plans…
Style: INK
Author: ChristineHZ