Doing Story Reviews :) [CLOSED]


Hi @Sanityyy,

I ask the you do a review for my new story, “Our Galaxies Intertwined!” I published the first 3 chapters last night and I would really appreciate your thoughts, feedback, and support!!


Episode link:

Checkout this story, on the Episode App! If you like it, support the story by passing it along!

Please read and let me know what you think!!

Here the info below:

Story Bio:
When danger comes to Earth in the form of a sexy alien, intrigue and drama follow when he falls for shy girl, Genevieve.


Natty James


So this is my 1st story:
Name: Dear Lilly
Author: Mónica Cristina
Description: After waking up in the hospital with no recollection of her life, Lilly tries to remember her old life with the help of her friends and family. Will her S.O.'s methods to jog her memory work? Or will they end up pushing her away?
Episodes: 7 (ongoing)
Style: Ink
Focus: Directing
Link: Dear Lilly

Thank you :slight_smile:


Will do.


Name of the story:
Left BreathLess
The Author:
Lizzie C
Description/ Synopsis:
Bria wants her fairytale man. What happens when the fairytale man is the mafia leader? Will Bria be happy?Will anxiety win?or the mafia takeover her soul?
Episodes: (How many episodes you’d like me to read.)
Cover: (Optional, you can even ask me to review your art if you’d like :slight_smile: )

Focus: (Optional, I can check your story for specific things like grammar/ spelling mistakes or even directing mistakes.)
This is my first story so everything if you don’t mind .
The Link: (Optional, if you haven’t published your story yet.)


Oh my god sorry I didn’t see your story lol I’m blind, your cover is amazing btw. I’ll get to you as soon as I get through to the others.


That’s okay and thank you, I didn’t make them but they are amazing right? Lol


Definitttely, who’s the artist?




@Koolgal77 you got sum mf skills.


Aww, thanks. I try :smile:


Name of the story: Sophisticated & Deceived
The Author: Briana M.
Description/ Synopsis: Ashden, a 26 year old young woman learns that life isn’t about being emotionless and too sophisticated. Will a guy help her explore her emotions in life?
Episodes: 6 (if that’s okay with you)

Focus: Plot & Directing
The Link:
Thank you!


Be as harsh as you can.
I don’t have problems with waiting.
I’d like you to focus on characters, their relationship with each other, dialogues and their backstories.

Story title - Midnight Memories
Author - Evija
Style - Limelight
Genre - Romance
Episodes - 18 (more coming soon)
Description - Ayla flies all the way from Ireland to somewhere in America, when she’s supposed to spend a summer in some kind of rehabilitation center for people with anorexia.
My instagram - episode.evija



Name of the story: Hale Huna
The Author: Anonymous Author
Description/ Synopsis: Kendall’s dad decides to move her and her brothers to Hawaii. She soon discovers she has the key to a world beyond her imagination…and secrets about who her mother really is…
Episodes: At least 5, but if you enjoy it, please read more!


Focus: anything??
The Link:


This is my story :blush::

Name: Coincidence or Destiny


Aurora loved her life, but during the summer she met a boy and her life starts to change completely

The meeting was coincidence or destiny?

Chapters: 12

Genre: Drama

Style: Ink

Instagram: kateb_episode




My story: Thriller: Tribe of Malapinchi
Author: Jannah Jackson
Genre: Thriller
Story style: All the 3 episode characters types: LIMELIGHT, INK & ORIGINAL
Description: Toss into a land of the sun, magic, lies and dark secrets. Can you make sense of the havoc you were tossed into and save everyone before it’s too late? CharacterCustomization
Episodes: 4
Instagram: @jannahjackson