Doing Story Reviews :) [CLOSED]

Here’s mine:
Title: Dreams and Nightmares
Author: Dreamer
Genre: Romance
Style: Ink
Description: Scarlet had a rough past and it looks like it’s not getting better after she was bought by some mysterious guy. Will she ever turn her life from a nightmare to a dream?
Episodes: 10 (more coming soon, I’m trying to update once a week) Review as many as you want and as many as you have time for :slight_smile: I don’t want to rush you.
Updates to this story: Dreams and Nightmares - my first story
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5452320906543104
Focus: It would be great if you could focus on characters, so their personalities and their development because I put lot of work in those and I’m not sure if the reader really gets them. Maybe also tell me what you thought while reading (what made you laugh/angry/sad/…)

Thanks so much for doing this! :slight_smile:

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