hi @meadowh! i’ve taken the the time to review your story, here is my review on Trapped!


Story Title: Trapped
Author: @meadowh
Plot Rating: 9/10
Directing Rating: 9/10
What I Liked About Your Story: I really liked the plot of your story! You did a very nice job making the story flow. I also like that you introduced the character’s traits through their actions and what they say instead of just having a long narration bubble explaining every detail. Will be reading more! Job well done. :+1:t4:
What I Disliked About Your Story: Only one instance where the spot directing was weird. When the MC first arrived at the campus in the limo, she walked in front of the limo first, then she disappeared, teleported back, and re entered but this time behind the limo. Also when the characters are walking to a spot placement, they walk pretty fast, almost like they’re too teleporting to the spot. Try adding a time to when they walk so it seems more natural. :slight_smile:
Overall Opinion: Love the plot idea! I found everything overall good about your story, just wish there were some choices. :smiley:
Overall Rating: 9/10

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Hi! thanks for this thread and your time :slight_smile: this is my story:

Story Title: Game Of Disguises
Story Genre: Drama/Action
Story Description: Two best friends have fun by disguising themselves as other people and attend luxurious and fancy events, but what happens when they find themselves in the wrong place and at the wrong time?
Author Name: Bonnie Dundee
Episodes: 6


Playing With Fire
Author: SarahDoodles
Genre: Drama
Style: Ink
Description: Savannah has a storied past - but has reinvented herself. She moves to a new city and is finally happy for the first time in her life. But will it all come crashing down? CC
Episodes: 3 (Ongoing)
Instagram: @sarahdoodles_episode


Thank you so much I’ll be sure to take your feedback into consideration :two_hearts:

Thank you so much! :smile:

Story Title: Did You Stalk Me?
Story Genre: Thriller
Story Description: Kyle is in love with Wendy, but his love is only passion, and his romance is dangerous, will Wendy find out that Kyle has been stalking her since the day they met, or will she stay in this abusive, crazy relationship for life?
Author Name: Treasure M.D. Jackson & God

Of Episodes: 1




Style: Classic | Type: Cinematic

I may use spotlight, MAYBE. In the future. Tell me if you read it so that I can know.

Choices Heavily matter, no CC, Arm overlays are used.

Both points and gains are put into this story to make the choices matter.

Will update when I get the right materials, :expressionless: Anyone knows where I can find an ext. And int. + day and night versions of a warehouse? Please, help me. -_-" And Both Tablet + iPhone compatible! (I worked hard on this story…)

Hello hello, are you still doing honest reviews? I would love some feedback if you have the time :slight_smile:

Title: Loving You Again
Author: Fluffy Rice
Style: Limelight
Chapters: 6 (Ongoing)
Genre: Romantic Comedy
Description: Childhood friends reunited after 10 years. Both Sierra and Peter are unaware that they knew each other from the past.

This story is based on a true story, my life actually. Haha.

Instagram: @fluffyrice.episode

(This story is a re-vamp from my INK style one, but the INK style never got completed. )



i just need to catch up on the reviews i haven’t done since they are piling up. i will reopen once i’ve caught up. (:

- Dona :tulip:

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Story Genre: THRILLER
Story Description: Rose lived a simple life with her grandfather until she started working for the Peterson’s.Rose was killed by her boss, she resurrected as Kim. Now, Rose is determined to get revenge

Of Episodes: 14(STILL GOING)


Story name: Crossed Paths
Amount of episodes: 3
Description: Mindy’s life is filled with fun and joy but is haunted by heartbreak. What happens when Derek comes crashing into her life trying to change the way she sees things?

This for when you’ve caught up with your reviews :heart:

I would love to get an honest review from you when you’re open again & I think it’s a wonderful idea what you’re doing!

Story Title: Brothers of Sin
Story Genre: Romance
Story Description: The irresistible, billionaire Barrington brothers hire three girls to go undercover in their club, House of Sin. Will they ever be free from the tentacles of this dangerous family?
Author Name: Amephira
# Of Episodes: 3
A xo

Title: Hale Huna
Genre: Fantasy/Romance
Desc: Kendall’s dad decides to move her and her brothers to Hawaii. She soon discovers she has the key to a world beyond her imagination…and secrets about who her mother really is…
Author: Anonymous Author
# of episodes: 5 (ongoing)

Thank you so much!

This is great, I’m looking for feedback on my first story.
Story Title: The Take
Story Genre: Adventure / Romance
Story Description: In an homage to classic heist films, a guy and a girl team up for the score of a lifetime. Complications- and sparks- ensue.
Author Name: lizzolam
Number of Episodes: 3 (will be 5 in total)

Thank you!

Moved to Share Feedback since it’s about reviews. Make sure to check out our Forum Tutorial for more info about where to correctly create topics. :wink:

I would love you to take a look at my story. It is my very first experience with Episode writing so any feedback is great!

Title: Teacher or Queen? (Drama)
Author: Mystique

Extra comment: I have only published the first episode to get first impression feedback. There is no description or cover - I will add everything later when I know if the story is worthy continuing or if I need to make any major changes. I believe that the first chapter is the most important one so I want to make it perfect.

Thank you!

I would love a review if you have the time! Here is my story information:
Title: In the County
Author: Mimi Brix
Genre: Comedy

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Thank you so much for doing this!
Story Title: Shifter
Story Genre: Fantasy
Story Description: How does the story of an unwanted orphan placed in the foster home of an eccentric doctor end up so packed with romance, drama, and the supernatural? YOU decide!
Author Name: Aurrorah
Number of Episodes: 10

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1.Story title- KILL YOUR DREAMS
2.Short description - Anne lives the same day again and in the end she gets killed. Now she tries to find the killer. Story is filled with drama and romance.
3.Genre - Thriller
4.Author name- Anna
5.Chapters - 3

Hi @Dona_H! Can you please give my story a review, too? Hoping you’ll like it. :blush::wink:

Story Title: Puppy Love
Story Genre: Fantasy/Romance
Story Description: Jason caught himself in a CRAZY, complicated situation. Watch out on how he will handle his true feelings for Alli. Will he fall in love with his DOG??
Author Name: Lou
# Of Episodes: 5 ongoing

**Story Title: The Inmates
**Story Genre: Drama
**Story Description: Karlee somehow ends up in prison. What will happen when she meets a group of inmates and makes a plan to escape? Will their plan work or will they never see life outside bars…
**Author Name: Carsyn
**# Of Episodes:2