Do's and Dont's of my story

What do you think of it, and what should I do with it, and what should I not do with it?

Tyler is a millionare. Except for the fact that the money is stolen. How can he slip by without the police on his trail?

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when writhing, dont try to write a book. your are not . you are writhing a manuscript. we dont need details about how placess look how people look and how they fell we can see that.

books explain what is going on because the text is evrything we have. episode run under the movie rules. where we can see . dont tell us she was hurt. show it. dont tell us they are friends show it.

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