Edited story review


#1

I have edited my story so if anyone is interested, I would love you to review it. Thanks!
:blush:


#2

What’s the story called and who’s the author?


#3

I’m the author and my story is called A Wish Come True.


Here is the link.


#4

Duh lol


#5

Lol. Thanks for reviewing it! I want to make sure I don’t miss anything before I publish it.


#6

I’ll take a look. If you could take look at mine too it’d be helpful.


#7

Sure! I’ll take a look!


#8

Everything pretty much looks good to me. Good luck with your story!


#9

Thank you! Do I need to make any more edits or do you think I should just publish it?


#10

I personally like episode longer. But its still really good. Your story doesn’t really interest me, not to be rude. But I the story is really good. I would publish though!


#11

Ok! Thank you!


#12

No problem. I wasn’t being rude right?


#13

No! not at all


#14

Okay phew! :grin: I get alot of anxiety when I think Im might be to straight forward or rude lol Idk why!


#15

I like your story. The concept is really interesting but the episodes are way too short and the characters don’t talk so I would work on that. There was a couple of grammar mistakes but I didn’t see any punctuation missing. Overall it was a good story!


#16

Thank you very much I appreciate that. I enjoyed you story as well it’s quite well thought out and very interesting, I think you should go ahead and publish.


#17

OK! Thank you!


#18

You’re welcome