~Elizabeth’s Episode Reviews~
Hi everyone! I’m opening a review workshop! I’ve perused some of the other review workshops in this section and I think I could provide some helpful criticism to anyone who is interested as well.
About me: I have studied English literature. I’m probably better at reading and analyzing than writing lol. I am a stickler for grammar, so if that’s something you think you struggle with, I can definitely help.
About my reviews: In my reviews, I intend to be very honest with any criticisms. I do not plan on sugar coating anything. If I don’t tell you what you need to work on, how can you improve with my review? I am not, however, going into the review with the intention to be mean or cruel. If you think that I was disrespectful or that I crossed some sort of line, please PM me so we can talk about it and go over what made you upset.
I will only review your first three chapters maximum. However If you story is COMPLETE at 4 or 5 chapters, let me know. I may review all of it if you let me know.
It will take me about 2-3 days per review, just depending on my free time so please be patient.
I will review in order by who completes the form first.
I’m really excited to read your stories and I hope I find some great new stories to read!
What I am reviewing:
- Grammar and punctuation
- Plot intricacy and narration
- Readability (did the plot make sense, was it easy to follow, was I being held up by any big errors in grammar, spelling, or plot holes?)
- Characters (concept and depth)
- Extras (CC, diversity, teasers, music, art scenes, etc.)
- If you created your own world Immersion (Can I believe in this world you created? Does it make sense? Are there a lot of elements used to create this world?)
- First Impressions
- Bright spots
- Would I recommend this story?
- Overall impression
Please fill this out in order for me to review :)
How many episodes you would like me to review:
What are you most proud of with your story?
What do you think are some of your pitfalls?
What do you want me to pay the most attention to?
What is your goal for the story?
What made you want to write this story/where did your inspiration come from?
Is there anything I should be aware of going into your story?
I.e. English isn’t your first language, it’s your first story, you had difficulty with directing, etc.