read my first episode and tell me what you think
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I will read it now!!
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I finished your story girl
It’s a great story for your first episode you really got some talent!!
But just one thing:
She must get after the table you can ask someone to do that because I don’t really know how you do get her after the table!!
But I really enjoyed your story!! Your a great writer!!
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thank you only my first episode but im getting there
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I’m currently reading your story… Here’s something I have to say. In the beginning, you talked about yourself and mentioned that it’s your first story. It would’ve been better if you just started your story. Other than that loved it!!
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i needed something to start the story with thats why i put it there
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No worries, the story overall is great!
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im working on that obvs my first story so i dont have a clue plus they have different hair colours i suppose i could do what i did with Arianna and let you decide how you want her to look but the hair colours need to stay the same
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thank you im in the middle of doing episode 2 right now
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Good luck!
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Definitelyy
i redid the episode on a different portal
no cc on this episode as it was too long
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No prob I will read it!!
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