Hello, DA PIE here. I think it is because all of your speech is in capital letters. Try having only the first letter of each line (in speech) capital and the rest lowercase. Let me know if that helps
I would love a review of my story if you are still accepting them!
Story Name: The Genuine Fake
Genre: Drama
Chapters: 6
Story Description: No friends no problem! Fake Friends 4 Hire help the socially awkward in Chicago find real friendships but you didn’t expect to fall for one of the actors. Is he really just acting?
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5290289552293888
All of the people in this group are currently reviewing story’s so it might be a little bit of a wait but don’t worry your story will still be reviewed:)