Episode is life!

Hi guys! First season of Sol, The Slayer is OUT!
It’s my first story :upside_down_face::star_struck:

I want feedback, please…

Just with your help and criticism I can do better …

Love,

Vero di Santo

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Mm, I’ll read it tomorrow, if you want. :slight_smile:

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Yes, please! :v: weeeeee :kiss:

I’ll check it out in a few hours, remind me to read it :angel::angel:

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Don’t forget! Thanks Sanityyy :blush::kiss:

I could probs read it tomorrow and give feedback :grin:

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Thanks! :blush: I will appreciate it! :kiss:

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Thanks @Sydney_H! :slight_smile:

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ummm so your stories pretty good, personally fantasy isn’t always my first preference for a story to read. but …

  • um so I know English isn’t your first language but ur pretty good, in the first episode I did see though that you say ‘wright’ instead of ‘write’.

  • you should also drag the convos between characters on a bit more, it’ll make your episodes longer.

:smile:

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Thanks @Episode_forlife_xx … I will start to do it. Precious words! :heart_eyes::kiss::v:

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