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Welcome to Episode Library!:books::pencil2:

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what will we be doing:
β€’reading your stories
β€’reviewing them
β€’putting it on our bookshelf

(One review is going to take 2 - 3 days so think about that before requesting!)

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rules:
β€’use password: Epi LibraryπŸ“š
β€’be patient and kind
β€’fill out the form correctly

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form:
β€’story title:
β€’author:
β€’description:
β€’link to story:

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@mateepi

waiting list:
β€’ @braily
β€’ @lqwalter
β€’ @episode_katherinee

@episodenoelle

waiting list:
β€’ @S_Unique
β€’ @Nency_episode
β€’ @kay.episode

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hiring form:
β€’which job (reader or reviewer):
β€’how many people on waiting list can you have:

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Forbidden Love

Author: @LiliStar
Description:: Princess Amanda never thought that she would have feelings for a girl, which is forbidden. Until she met Vanessa, the gorgeous sister of prince Roberto who she has to marry.
Ratings: Story is well written, coding and directing is basic (which I like) and grammar is good. The idea is very creative and I love how author put a part of them in the story. There are some really funny moments and overall the story is amazing.

Into My Heart

Author:@Amberlyn
Description: Everyone around you is pressurising you to settle down. You’ve been on several dates but nothing is working out. What happens when you meet HIM?
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5646952234680320
Rating:
β€’ Coding and directing – Coding and directing is really nice especially the clothing game. Overall it’s not really complicated which I like because I always say that better be simple than complicated if you don’t know how to do it because than it doesn’t look very good sometimes. I noticed that on some scenes where characters aren’t directly in front of β€žcameraβ€œ you can notice that we can see part of character’s foot and we can’t see the other part. It’s not really a mistake but I think if it would look better that we can see the whole foot or we can’t see foot at all. Everything else was pretty good and I didn’t notice any other mistakes.

β€’ Grammar – Grammar is really good. There aren’t any grammar mistakes and you described everything that happened with wide vocabulary. You used words like dude and bro to describe how someone’s talking and it really has important part because we got that vibe of character.

β€’ Overall – Idea of story is pretty good and I like that kind of stories. The scene where Deola got kidnapped is really well written and I really like it. We can already connect with characters which is great, storyline is not rushed and we can see you really planned this out. I really enjoyed reading it and I will definetley continue! Good luck!

My Neighbor Is A Mobster

Author:@sonder.author
Descrption: 𝑀𝑒𝑒𝑑 π‘€π‘–π‘‘π˜© πΏπ‘’π‘›π‘˜π‘Ž π‘…π‘’π‘‘π‘ π‘‘π‘œπ‘›π‘’ π‘Žπ‘›π‘‘ π‘π‘Œ π‘šπ‘œπ‘π‘ π‘‘π‘’π‘Ÿ π‘π‘–π‘˜π‘™π‘Žπ‘’π‘  𝑅𝑒𝑒𝑐𝑒. πΏπ‘’π‘›π‘˜π‘Ž 𝑖𝑠 π‘Ž π‘ π‘‘π‘Ÿπ‘œπ‘›π‘” π‘€π‘œπ‘šπ‘Žπ‘› π‘€π‘–π‘‘π˜© π‘Ž π‘”π‘œπ‘œπ‘‘ π‘π‘Žπ‘π‘˜π‘”π‘Ÿπ‘œπ‘’π‘›π‘‘ π‘Žπ‘›π‘‘ π‘π‘–π‘˜π‘™π‘Žπ‘’π‘  𝑖𝑠 π‘Ž π˜©π‘Žπ‘Ÿπ‘‘ π‘šπ‘Žπ‘› π‘‘π‘œ π‘Ÿπ‘’π‘Žπ‘‘. π‘Šπ˜©π‘’π‘› πΏπ‘’π‘›π‘˜π‘Ž π‘Ÿπ‘Žπ‘› π‘Žπ‘€π‘Žπ‘¦ π‘“π‘Ÿπ‘œπ‘š π˜©π‘’π‘Ÿ π‘‚π‘Šπ‘ π‘’π‘›π‘”π‘Žπ‘”π‘’π‘šπ‘’π‘›π‘‘ π‘π‘Žπ‘Ÿπ‘‘π‘¦ π‘‘π˜©π‘’π‘¦ π‘“π‘–π‘›π‘Žπ‘™π‘™π‘¦ π‘šπ‘’π‘’π‘‘. 𝐴𝑛𝑑 π‘‘π˜©π‘’ π‘šπ‘Žπ‘› π‘™π‘œπ‘ π‘’π‘  π˜©π‘–π‘šπ‘ π‘’π‘™π‘“ 𝑖𝑛 π˜©π‘’π‘Ÿ 𝑠𝑐𝑒𝑛𝑑. (𝐿𝐿) πΆπ˜©π‘œπ‘–π‘π‘’π‘  𝑀𝑖𝑙𝑙 𝑏𝑒 π‘šπ‘Žπ‘‘π‘‘π‘’π‘Ÿ π‘Žπ‘›π‘‘ π‘‘π˜©π‘’π‘Ÿπ‘’ 𝑀𝑖𝑙𝑙 𝑏𝑒 π‘œπ‘›π‘™π‘¦ π‘œπ‘›π‘’ π‘™π‘œπ‘£π‘’ π‘–π‘›π‘‘π‘’π‘Ÿπ‘’π‘ π‘‘. (𝐼 𝑓𝑖𝑛𝑑 π‘ π‘‘π‘œπ‘Ÿπ‘–π‘’π‘  π‘€π‘–π‘‘π˜© π‘šπ‘’π‘™π‘‘π‘–π‘π‘™π‘’ π‘™π‘œπ‘£π‘’ π‘–π‘›π‘‘π‘’π‘Ÿπ‘’π‘ π‘‘π‘  π‘’π‘›π‘Ÿπ‘’π‘Žπ‘™π‘–π‘ π‘‘π‘–π‘.)
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4728753642864640)http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4728753642864640
Rating:
β€’ Coding and directing – First of all, I really like point system. It shows that you put a lot of work in your story and It’s pretty well done. In some parts of the story text is not followed by animation but that’s really small mistake and I noticed it because I’m writing this and reading at the same time. On some scenes characters walk out smallar and get bigger as they walk. I know how to fix it so if you need any help feel free to ask. I noticed that on scene where Hilda shows up after Lance leaves in 1st chapter she walks in really, really fast and gets bigger. Again, if you need any help I’m here.

β€’ Grammar – There aren’t any grammar mistakes and you described charaters pretty good based on how they talked. There are not really much things to say about grammar.

β€’ Overall – I noticed that there are a lot bolded black lines so maybe you should just bold the most important lines. I love how you used sound and it really added the vibe to some scenes.

Arena Of Pride

Author: @jellyepi11211
Description: After a tragedy, Layla gets dragged deep down in the mafia world. Little did she know that the leader of Morocco’s black market - Oscar Kebryak, would put her under his protection.
Rating:
β€’ Coding and directing – I really enjoyed how you overall coded. I really liked when the character was about to walk on screen, and the characters in front of her would go off to the side. I saw this quite a lot, and I thought it was really smart. Directing wise, I also enjoyed it. I liked the zooms, and I thought your transitions were nice. The only thing I saw that I thought could improve, was the speech bubbles. Sometimes they wouldn’t be on the character that was speaking, or they would be closer to the ground instead of on the character. But other than that, I thought everything was perfect!

β€’ Grammar – You had little to no spelling/punctuation mistakes, and it was very easy to read. I also enjoyed how you’d introduce the characters as it gave an overview of who they are, and how they may be like.

β€’ Overall – Your story seemed really thought out, and I may keep reading it! I loved the cover of your story, and the overall theme of it (personally, I’m a sucker for romance.) I started falling in love with some of the characters, and I hope to keep reading more. I wish you the best on your writing journey!

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Thank you for this! Here are my details.

story title: Into my Heart
author: Amberlyn
description: Everyone around you is pressurising you to settle down. You’ve been on several dates but nothing is working out. What happens when you meet HIM?
link to story: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5646952234680320
do you want art scene: yes, please
Password: Epi Library:books:

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Thank you so much for requesting!:heart:
I will give my best to complete your request as soon as possible!:pencil2:
You can credit me by my forum name!
Thank you in advance!:books:

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Title: π•Έπ–ž π•Ήπ–Šπ–Žπ–Œπ–π–‡π–”π–— π–Žπ–˜ 𝖆 π•Έπ–”π–‡π–˜π–™π–Šπ–—.
Author: Sonder. :woman_technologist:t2:
Instagram: @sonder.episode
Genre: Drama, Romance
Style: Limelight
Story Description: 𝑀𝑒𝑒𝑑 π‘€π‘–π‘‘π˜© πΏπ‘’π‘›π‘˜π‘Ž π‘…π‘’π‘‘π‘ π‘‘π‘œπ‘›π‘’ π‘Žπ‘›π‘‘ π‘π‘Œ π‘šπ‘œπ‘π‘ π‘‘π‘’π‘Ÿ π‘π‘–π‘˜π‘™π‘Žπ‘’π‘  𝑅𝑒𝑒𝑐𝑒. πΏπ‘’π‘›π‘˜π‘Ž 𝑖𝑠 π‘Ž π‘ π‘‘π‘Ÿπ‘œπ‘›π‘” π‘€π‘œπ‘šπ‘Žπ‘› π‘€π‘–π‘‘π˜© π‘Ž π‘”π‘œπ‘œπ‘‘ π‘π‘Žπ‘π‘˜π‘”π‘Ÿπ‘œπ‘’π‘›π‘‘ π‘Žπ‘›π‘‘ π‘π‘–π‘˜π‘™π‘Žπ‘’π‘  𝑖𝑠 π‘Ž π˜©π‘Žπ‘Ÿπ‘‘ π‘šπ‘Žπ‘› π‘‘π‘œ π‘Ÿπ‘’π‘Žπ‘‘. π‘Šπ˜©π‘’π‘› πΏπ‘’π‘›π‘˜π‘Ž π‘Ÿπ‘Žπ‘› π‘Žπ‘€π‘Žπ‘¦ π‘“π‘Ÿπ‘œπ‘š π˜©π‘’π‘Ÿ π‘‚π‘Šπ‘ π‘’π‘›π‘”π‘Žπ‘”π‘’π‘šπ‘’π‘›π‘‘ π‘π‘Žπ‘Ÿπ‘‘π‘¦ π‘‘π˜©π‘’π‘¦ π‘“π‘–π‘›π‘Žπ‘™π‘™π‘¦ π‘šπ‘’π‘’π‘‘. 𝐴𝑛𝑑 π‘‘π˜©π‘’ π‘šπ‘Žπ‘› π‘™π‘œπ‘ π‘’π‘  π˜©π‘–π‘šπ‘ π‘’π‘™π‘“ 𝑖𝑛 π˜©π‘’π‘Ÿ 𝑠𝑐𝑒𝑛𝑑. (𝐿𝐿) πΆπ˜©π‘œπ‘–π‘π‘’π‘  𝑀𝑖𝑙𝑙 𝑏𝑒 π‘šπ‘Žπ‘‘π‘‘π‘’π‘Ÿ π‘Žπ‘›π‘‘ π‘‘π˜©π‘’π‘Ÿπ‘’ 𝑀𝑖𝑙𝑙 𝑏𝑒 π‘œπ‘›π‘™π‘¦ π‘œπ‘›π‘’ π‘™π‘œπ‘£π‘’ π‘–π‘›π‘‘π‘’π‘Ÿπ‘’π‘ π‘‘. (𝐼 𝑓𝑖𝑛𝑑 π‘ π‘‘π‘œπ‘Ÿπ‘–π‘’π‘  π‘€π‘–π‘‘π˜© π‘šπ‘’π‘™π‘‘π‘–π‘π‘™π‘’ π‘™π‘œπ‘£π‘’ π‘–π‘›π‘‘π‘’π‘Ÿπ‘’π‘ π‘‘π‘  π‘’π‘›π‘Ÿπ‘’π‘Žπ‘™π‘–π‘ π‘‘π‘–π‘.)

π–³π—π—‚π—Œ π—‚π—Œ π—‡π—ˆπ— 𝖺 π—Žπ—Œπ—Žπ–Ίπ—… π—†π—ˆπ–»π—Œπ—π–Ύπ—‹ / 𝗆𝖺𝖿𝗂𝖺 / π—€π–Ίπ—‡π—€π—Œπ—π–Ύπ—‹ π—Œπ—π—ˆπ—‹π—’. π–³π—π—‚π—Œ π—‚π—Œ π—†π—ˆπ—‹π–Ύ 𝗅𝗂𝗄𝖾 𝖺 π—Œπ—π—ˆπ—‹π—’ π–Ίπ–»π—ˆπ—Žπ— π—π—ˆπ— 𝖼𝖺𝗇 π—π—π—ˆ π—Œπ—π—‹π—ˆπ—‡π—€ π–Όπ—π–Ίπ—‹π–Ίπ–Όπ—π–Ύπ—‹π—Œ 𝖼𝖺𝗇 𝖿𝖺𝗅𝗅 𝗂𝗇 π—…π—ˆπ—π–Ύ 𝖾𝖺𝖼𝗁 π—ˆπ—π—π–Ύπ—‹ 𝖺𝗇𝖽 π—π—ˆπ— π—π—ˆπ—‹π—„π—Œ 𝗍𝗁𝖾𝗂𝗋 π—‹π–Ύπ—…π–Ίπ—π—‚π—ˆπ—‡π—Œπ—π—‚π—‰.

Art Scene: No, thanks.
Password: Epi LibraryπŸ“š

Cover:

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Story Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4728753642864640

Stay safe :butterfly:

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Thank you for requesting!
I’m happy to read your story!:heart:
There is only one question. Do you want art scene included in your request?:books:
You can credit me by my forum name!
Thank you in advance!:pencil2:

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Thank you for this.

Here’s the details:

Title: reveal 9:00 AM to Brooklyn

Author: Braily

Description: Who knew one train to Brooklyn could change your life? Will it change for the better, or worse?

Chapters published: 3

Cover:

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Link:

Do you want art scene? No thank you

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No, thank you!:heart:
I’m happy to read your story and I’m sure I’ll enjoy it!:books:
You can give me credit by my forum name!
Thank you in advance!:memo:

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No, I don’t want an art scene. Thanks

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Here’s mine!
Name: Arena Of Pride
Genre/s: Action filled with drama & romance
Author: Jelly
IG: @jelly.epi
Episodes: 12 (more coming soon)
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6418652016607232
I’d like to get an art scene :heart:

Description:
After a tragedy, Layla gets dragged deep down in the mafia world. Little did she know that the leader of Morocco’s black market - Oscar Kebryak, would put her under his protection.

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Your request will be done by @episodenoelle :heart::books:

You can give me credit by my forum name!:books:
Thank you in advance.:memo:

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I’m really confused, because did I request an art scene and a review or is this just an example? :flushed::joy:
However, wow! Thank you so much for the compliments and the amazing art scene! I’m definitely going to put it in my story (when I have time :sweat_smile:) :heart_eyes::hugs::sparkling_heart:

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You acually didn’t! I just really like your story and it gave me idea for this thread so this was a suprise for you! I might draw Amanda just for practice too! :heart: :books:

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Pass : Epi Library :books:

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Do I want an art scene : I have everything sorted out for now. Can I request one in future?!

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Moved to Share Feedback since this is for story reviews. Keep all art-related projects in Art Resources. Make sure to check out our Forum Tutorial for more info about creating topics, and feel free to PM me if you’ve got questions. :smiley:

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Hello, I’d like to work here!

Details

β€’which job (reader, reviewer or artist): Reader and reviewer
β€’how many people on waiting list can you have: 3

Thank you! :innocent:

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Okay!:heart:
I’ll send you a pm rn!:books:

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Alright!

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Thank you so much for doing this
form:
β€’story title: The Mob Queen
β€’author: S_Unique
β€’ description: As leader of the Triade, Christy knows all about hard choices. But can she make the hardest one of all and enter an arranged marriage to save her empire? CC/LL/Choices
β€’link to story: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5389184804257792

Password: Epi Library

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Hello Roy!
I’m happy to inform you that @episodenoelle is going to review your story!:books:
Thank you for requesting!:heart:

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I feel honored, thank you so much :pleading_face: :sparkling_heart:

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