! Episode new writers! Reviews! (CLOSED)

hello! I am doing story reviews! just make sure to add the following ~
Name of story
How many chapters
Story style

And if you can, add the link and cover art.

Hey @Gina123. Thanks for this!

Story Title: Soccer Moms: Blast to the Future
Author Name: Winter05 with Episode Royalty
Style: INK
Genre: Drama
Chapters: 6 [COMPLETE]
Story Link:

Instagram: winter05.episode

I hope you enjoy my story! :wink:

~ Winter :snowflake:

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Thanks, that’s nice of you!
Here is my story. I’d be happy if you’d review it.
Title: Dark Temptation
Author: Menia
Genre: Fantasy
Episodes: 7
Style: Limelight
Description: Popularity, friends and a hot boyfriend: Lia’s life is nearly perfect. But things take a darker turn when a new guy shows up and with him the truth about Lia’s identity…

Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6523792765616128

Moved to Share Feedback section as that’s where review threads live! :v:t2:

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I’d like a review! Here’s my story:

Title: Over Before You Know It
Author: Lizard
Number of Episodes: 6 and counting
Style: Ink
My instagram: @lizard.episode
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6584190301765632

Hello! My story isn’t up for review yet, (sorry :sweat:) But I need a few ideas on how they could meet! (And it not being cliche.:hugs:)
Here is the description:
Aubrey is living the life of a normal teenage pop star. But what happens when the worlds hottest skateboarder comes into play? Will she be able to resist the temptation?
Please share your ideas, I love to hear everyone’s thoughts and opinions!

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Name of story: From Zero to Hero
How many chapters: 4
Story style: INK
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4697049362202624

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Hey! Really appreciate you creating this thread! Here’s my new story!
Name of story: Submerged Souls
How many chapters: 3 (ongoing)
Story style: Ink

Link: https://www.episodeinteractive.com/write/story/Story_Title_kUsd

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Thanks, I’ll check it out

Thanks! I’m sure to check it out :slight_smile:

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Hello everyone! Thanks for all your replies! <3
I’m checking out all your books now! :smiley:

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Hi, @Gina123!

Thank you very much for creating this thread, this is very kind of you! Constructive criticism is exactly what I am looking for!

If you are interested in reading a story with several mini-games and where CHOICES REALLY MATTER then, please, give my story a try. I promise, the story will keep you hooked :blush:

My story details:

Name of story: H & V: Fate
Author: Alex Af
Genre: Thriller
Episodes: 4 (completed)
Summary of story: Young ambitious journalist hunting down a powerful tycoon who has made a fortune based on lies. But who really is a villain here? Choices matter.
Link to story: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6548486212681728
Instagram: @episode.alex.af

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Hey there, @Gina123! Thank you for creating this thread! I’d love a review! Here are my story details:

Title: Silhouettes
Author: aprilish
Genre: Fantasy/Romance
Style: Ink
Blurb: Arion’s ready to risk it all to make her dreams come true. Leslie sees him every day, yet fails to recognize who he is. Watch them fall in love…without ever meeting each other.
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6116658762874880 1
My Instagram: @aprilish.episode
I don’t have the cover art handy, sorry.

Anyhow, thank you so much! Looking forward to hearing your feedback! :blush::two_hearts:

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Hello @Gina123 ! It’s generous of you to give reviews for us writers. Thank you. I’m hoping you check out mine and give me some feedbacks. :blush::heart:

Title: Puppy Love
Author: Lou
Style: Limelight
Genre: Romance w/ a touch of Fantasy
Episodes: 4 ongoing
Link: https://www.episodeinteractive.com/s/i/5630801559027712
IG: @authorlou.episode

Jason caught himself in a CRAZY, complicated situation. Watch out on how he will handle his true feelings for Alli. Will he fall in love with his DOG??

I’d love to hear your review of my story Fantastical: Nature’s caprices.
Episodes: 3
Genre: Fantasy, Comedy, Romance, Mystery mix
Style: Ink

Thank you. :blush:

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Hey @WinterMoon05
I just finshed reading the first 3 chapters of your story soccer moms: blast to the future. I really liked it. The plot idea is so fresh and honestly one of the best I have seen for a while. Your directions are really crisp and clean, and you have lovely backgrounds and cover art. I can tell alot of work went into this story. I love your characters, especially the Mc(I forgot her name lol), Grayson and the two kids. And the soccer moms are so funny, lol! The only thing you could work on is plot flow. Sometimes it seems a little jumped, but I think that would be for just me. (I am kinda overly picky about plot flow, lol) Overall, a great story.

Directing : 10/10
Plot Flow : 9\10
Spelling : 10\10
Characters : 10\10

Great work! :slight_smile:


This is really nice of you! Here’s my story, I hope you like it:

Title: Over Before You Know It
Author: Lizard
Genre: Drama
Description: You and your best friend make a suicide pact to go to the Grand Canyon and end it all together. Will you both really do it? Or will it be over before you know it?
Number of Episodes: 6 and counting
Style: Ink
My instagram: @lizard.episode
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6584190301765632

I would love a review!

Title: In the County
Author: Mimi B.
Genre: Romance
Description: Alex lives an upscale life, with an upscale attitude. Will Fair County take her down a peg?
Number of Episodes: 3 (4 coming soon)
Style: Ink
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5184933012570112

Hey @brvnda ! I really liked your story, Love Has No Color, It was really good!
The characters are complex and extremely interesting. You also have really good coding and storytelling skills.
I loved every minute of the directing, especially the intro! Did you code that yourself? It’s so so good! :slight_smile:
Also I like how your choices determine the chapter length. That’s a good feature that I don’t really see often. I loved your storyline. It was simply amazing.
It dealt with real issues, such as underage sex and racism. It’s sad that these things still happen, but it’s good to raise awareness about them, and episode is a great place to do it.
You have written a great story! I loved every minute of it. :slight_smile:

Directing : 10/10
Plot Flow : 10/10
Spelling : 10/10
Charcters : 10/10

Excellent Work :stuck_out_tongue:

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