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Wow! Thank you so much! That’s such a nice review. Thank you!! :heart:.blush:

~ Winter :snowflake:


No problem!

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Hello @Menia
I like your story a lot! You have great directing, it is extremely clean and a pleasure to tap through. Also I really like how choices determine how charcters interact.
Overall, your directing is wonderful. I wish I could code that good! Your storyline is also good. I love how each chapter ends with a mystery. It makes you want to read more. :smiley:
However, their are a few places you could improve.
~Charcters : I think you could make them more complex. Also you could work on speech and dialouge a little.
~Spelling A few minor spelling and grammar errors in your story. But they could easily be fixed.
Overall, you have written an excellent story! Keep it up :wink:

Directing : 10/10
Plot Flow ; 10/10
Spelling ; 9/10
Charcters : 8/10

Good job!

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Hey, thank you so much. Yeah, I’m not a native speaker :confused: I’ll try to minimize errors.
There will be more information about the character throughout the story, but I’ll try to improve it. Thanks for pointing that out and thanks for taking the time to read my story! :blush:

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No problem! Btw, for a non-native speaker, your English is amazing :smiley:

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Title: Cupid’s Arrow: Love Gone Wrong
Episodes 4 (on going) 5, 6 & 7 are not out yet
Genres: Romance, Drama and Fantasy
(Notes: If you notice any spot direction errors or anything, could you let me know where and the scene please?, thanks in advance :wink: )
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5759154808684544

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Thank you. :blush:

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Hi @Gina123
If you are still taking requests, it would mean the world to me if you checked out my story:
Title: H & V: Lie to me
Author: Alexandra Mar
Chapters: 4 (ongoing)
Style: Ink
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6378501067505664

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Hi Lizard! Your review should be up at 3:30 pm at latest :smiley:
(Australian time)

Hey @Lizard
I really liked your story. It was very unique and interesting!
Sucide is a tough subjcet, and I think you handled it very well. I also like your author’s message at the front~It was a good warning.
In terms of characters, The best friend and the MC were both unique and interesting. I liked how the best friend wasn’t just some pink-haired rebel; who just tells the mc do do stuff. She had feelings, and major role in the story.
Your directing is good, but I think you could work on @pans. Instead of @pan to zone 2, maybe you could use @pan to zone 2 in 3 (just an example). Slower pans can be more-eye pleasing, for me at least. All your other directing was excellent. Also, there were a few minor grammar errors
, but other than that your story was great. overall, a wonderful book ! :wink:

Directing : 9/10
Plot Flow : 10/10
Spelling :9/10
Charcters :10/10
Great Job :blush:


Thanks Ryan :smiley:

Hi I hope you can review my story.
Story: KING: Inception
Author: Jenny J.
Chapters: 3
Style: ink
Genre: Romance
Description:All is perfect when Rose finds love. Unfortunately a dark secret rips them apart. Years later Rose finds Mr. Perfect. What happens when old love returns?
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6102962879725568

Thank you!!!

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Story name: Under Construction

Author name: Nika Tyler

Number of episode: 3 and ongoing

Style: INK

Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5265835262607360

Thank you very much! :blush:

Hi @Dr.Smile07
I really liked your story, From hero to zero. It was really, really funny! It made me laugh alot.
I loved all your characters, and it was great that you had a disabled mc! I have never seen anything like that on episode before! :):grinning:
The comedy in your story was so funny! But It also dealt with real life issues such as loss of parents when you are young and disablity. Also I thought it was cool how the main charcter got his superpowers- and funny, too!
:grin: Your spelling and grammar was perfcet, and I loved your direction.You can code excellently! :slight_smile:
Overall, a really good story. Good work!
Directing : 10\10
Plot Flow : 10\10
Spelling : 10/10
Characters: 10\10
Nice job :stuck_out_tongue:

I really hope you read my story!
Title: Revelations
Author: HuwaydaA.Z.
Description: With your miserable past, you think you know all that was to it. But what happens when you find out that someone else may know about it more than you do?
Episode: 3 or 4 (Ongoing)
Genre: Drama.
Style: Ink
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4871236977557504

Hey! I would like a review! Its my first story on Episode

Thanks :heart:

Story title : Sandy and her Quadruplets
Author : R.J.
Genre : Comedy (INK)
Completed : No (I wrote 9 episodes) :slightly_smiling_face:
Description : How can she survive with noisy and disobedient quadruplets? Will she finally find the father of her sons ? Here’s the crazy life of Sandy and her quadruplets!
Link : http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5337323130716160


Here is my story
Title: Break Down My Walls
Author: @moonlight123.episode
Genre: Action
Style: Ink
Description:You have your walls up. And no one ever comes in. But when you join a rebel gang, you feel attracted to the handsome leader. Can he melt your heart? Love, danger, lust awaits…
link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4509103137619968
Thank you!

Thank you thank you thank you. I really appreciate you taking the time to do this review, and I’m so happy you enjoyed my story. :scream::heart:

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Hey guys,
It’s Gina123 and I’m sorry I’m a bit behind on the reviews!
School is really taking over my life right now, and also I am focusing on writing and reading wattpad more. I am sorry that It’s taking a bit of time but I will read your stories, I promise! :slight_smile: However it may take a little longer than before.
Thank u for understanding’~Gina123

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I generally just want as much feedback as I can possibly get, so…
Name: Being Me.
Chapters: 1
Style: INK.