@goth.gaia im done with your review
I feel like its cliche? Since “James” the all perfect guy goes and bangs with other people in public…
To be honest, I would like to see the mc be strong and like shows her feelings and say the truth and all since not all women are weak. Oh and i like that you included customization and not keep the default looks of some background characters
There were a few choices but i dont think it has an impact to the story
You had some splashes and a few custom backgrounda at the beginning, but at the middle of the chapter after that you just used the episode backgrounds
I feel that chapter 1 was waayy to long, it honestly bored me a bit
Zooming and spot directing: 10/10
I really appreciate that you use zooms and spot directing in your story! For that its A++
There wasnt any problem with layering! You totally rocked it!
I like that you dont repeat the same animations over and over again!
Anything else: 8/10
There were a few scenes that you straight up included and sometimes i was confused example in this scene:
Like in this, you would be wondering why is james here? Oh and i really like how you managed to pause a what seems to be going to drama with this:
I really like your story!