Episode Story Reviews!

Are you a first time writer? Do you think your story is not good enough? Would you like feedback on your story? Well then… KEEP READING!

I’m doing story reviews! If you would like for me to review your story then read below:

  • Reply to this thread with the title of your story, the genre, the description, and the small cover!
  • I will read a only ONE episode (if i REALLY like it, I might read all of it!)

Be patient as I have a life as well (surprise)!

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I would love to!

Genre: Adventure/Fantasy/Comedy (If that makes sense)
Title: Save Me, Hero!
Plot/Summary: After powerless Hero moves from a town where everyone has superpowers, she gets kidnapped by a group of fugitives who are forcing her to join them. What will she do?
Cover:

HERE’S THE LINK!
I hope you enjoy! Thank you!

Can I create a banner for you?

Title : My Freedom
Author : AZN
Style : INK
Genre : Romance
Description : He’s an actor and he’s successful. That doesn’t stop Grey from chasing a shy girl like Ophelia, while being engaged to her cousin.
Instagram : @azn.stories
Link : http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5828647379402752

Small cover :

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Title: Ocean’s 5
Genre: Action
Description: Five highly skilled and most dangerous people on Earth are brought together for the biggest heist ever seen. What can go wrong?

Title: Behind Closed Doors
Author: JessDeBest
Genre: Drama/Mystery
Style: INK
Story Description: College is all fun and games until you discover what’s behind closed doors. Students disappear one by one, and you’re going to get to the bottom of it.
Instagram: @iwrite.stories
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6459913677111296

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Save Me, Hero!

The Good Things:
-I think the overall plot of this story so far is pretty good and doesn’t really have any times where it’s like “Where did this come from?” Ya know?
-The directing was spot on!
-I love the subtle comedy!

The Bad Things
-The only thing that stood out to me where some parts that just didn’t make sense and/or went to fast for it to make sense.

OVERALL RATING- 9/10

-kathlyn:)

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Thank you so much for the review!:heart:

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I’m still working on this story and I haven’t published yet but maybe you might be a able to review what I have up to now.

Title: His Property
Author: maya8447
Genre: Drama
Btw, Episode 2 isn’t done yet.
Could you please DM me the review?
Link:

I’m not really sure what you mean by that lol sorry im new to the forums!

-kathlyn:)

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A picture or cover to attract audiences. I’ve done a few, I’ll link you the thread

My Freedom

The Good Things
-I love the cover! Both of them!
-Personally, I think sometimes character customization takes away from the whole setting of the story, so I, in my opinion, like the fact that you didn’t let us customize!
-The beginning was EVERYTHING!
-The plot is so good and so is the writing!
The Bad Things
-nothing much to say here!

OVERALL RATING:10/10

The first episode is all flashbacks, so you might feel it is rushed if you don’t read 2&3!

Title: Blades of Desire

Author: Giselle C.

Genre: Mystery

Style: LL

Small cover:

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Large cover:

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Description:

A rose, caught in the fire. Will you let that fire burn you to ashes, or will you fight to put it out? The choice is yours. |CC, CM, LGBTQ option|

IG; gisellepisode :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:

Feel free to check out my story.

My story: © Tribe of Malapinchi
Author: Jannah Jackson
Genre: Thriller/Mystery/Horror/Fantasy/Adventure
Story style: Secret Surprise :wink:
Description: Toss into a land of the sun, magic, lies and dark secrets in Asia. Can you make sense of the havoc you were tossed into and save everyone before it’s too late? CharacterCustomization
Episodes: 5/6
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5909308359180288

Cover still in Review: (One of my new covers… still havent decide haha)

My episodes are rather long… 20 mins about there just to give a heads up

Tittle : Search for love
Author: S.writes
Genre: Drama
Description: Your life turns upside down when you try to escape from a toxic situation.Can you find the love you’re looking for trying to escape?
Link : http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5548786201264128

Ocean’s 5

The Good Things
-the girl is such a badass :joy: i love her
-the plot is pretty good!
-directing = :money_mouth_face:

The Bad Things
-what bad things?

OVERALL RATING: 10/10

-kathlyn:)

Sorry for being slow on reviews! I’ve been working on my own story!

-kathlyn:)

Tysm! I appreciate it! :two_hearts::two_hearts:

Title: A Woman In The Yakuza
Author: Elle
Genre: Action
Style: LimeLight
Description: Your name is Mayumi Yamamoto, you’re part of an all men organization, the Yakuza. Your life is already a mess, then everything turns upside down.