So this is the scene where it say that { doesn't gave a matching }, I checked it a lot of times, and I can't seem to find a mistake here, so can somebody help me? Thank you for your time.
NARRATOR
A/N: I advise you to pick longer version in order to understand everything. Plus the longer one will give you a few flashbacks! But the choice is yours!
choice “Short - shorter episode” {
&zoom on 809 106 to 751% in 1
music music_tickingbeat_lp @speechbubble reset @JIM is think @JOLINE is shiftweight @pause for a beat @zoom on 818 121 to 1039% in 0
JIM (talk_happy_agree)
It’s not like we are on someone’s private area… @zoom on 797 119 to 1322% in 0 @speechbubble is 172 203 to 100% with tail_top_left
JOLINE (eyeroll)
Just say you want the short version. @JOLINE is deepbreath
JOLINE (talk_happy_smile)
This is the house of my niece. @zoom on 818 121 to 1039% in 0 @JIM is startled_surprised @speechbubble reset @speechbubble is 133 180 to 100% with tail_top_right
JIM (talk_awkward)
I didn’t know you had a niece.
&zoom on 797 119 to 1322% in 2.2 @JOLINE is idle_happy @pause for a beat @speechbubble is 196 214 to 100% with tail_top_left
JOLINE (talk_forward)
Neither does She.
JOLINE (talk_angry_arms_crossed)
Her dad is really good at hiding her… @pause for a beat
readerMessage New important character revealed: Joline.
JOLINE (talk_sad_timid)
Ever since Ashley died. He hates our family…
JOLINE (talk_sad)
He thinks we are responsible for Ashley’s death. @zoom on 814 129 to 1303% in 0 @JIM is startled_surprised @pause for a beat @JIM is idle_sad @zoom on 797 119 to 1322% in 0
JOLINE (talk_sad)
He also, blames music for Ashley’s death.
JOLINE (talk_arms_crossed)
Ashley died on her way to the tour. The plane crashed, it was all an accident which Richard can’t seem to accept. @speechbubble reset @JOLINE is deepbreath @zoom on 818 121 to 1039% in 0
JIM (talk_awkward)
Wow… @JIM is idle_sad
music off
&zoom on 812 93 to 633% in 1.3
}
“Long - longer episode” {
music juvie_radiosong
JIM (talk_happy_smile)
Longer version, please! @JOLINE is eyeroll @pause for a beat @zoom on 799 119 to 1327% in 0.3 @speechbubble is 198 245 to 100% with tail_top_left
JOLINE (talk_gesture)
This is the house of my niece [FIRSTNAME]. @zoom on 819 129 to 1327% in 0.3 @JIM is startled_surprised @pause for a beat @speechbubble is 128 212 to 120% with tail_top_right
JIM (talk_excited)
I didn’t know you had a niece. @speechbubble reset @zoom on 799 119 to 1327% in 0.3 @JOLINE is laugh_giggle @speechbubble is 174 246 to 105% with tail_top_left
JOLINE (talk_happy_smile)
Well I do, I just… @zoom on 825 184 to 525% in 1.2 @JOLINE is idle_sad AND JIM is think
&zoom on 799 119 to 1327% in 1.1 @JOLINE is deepbreath
JOLINE (talk_sad)
I just don’t know her. @JOLINE is idle_sad @pause for a beat @pause for a beat @speechbubble reset @zoom on 819 129 to 1327% in 0.3
JIM (talk_think)
How? You are family, right? @zoom on 825 184 to 525% in 0 @JOLINE is nod_loop @zoom on 799 119 to 1327% in 0.3 @speechbubble is 187 222 to 100% with tail_top_left
JOLINE (talk_apathetic)
Just not the close one…
JOLINE (talk_neutral_forward)
It all started when Ashley died. @zoom on 819 129 to 1327% in 0.3 @speechbubble reset
JIM (talk_awkward)
Ashley? @zoom on 799 119 to 1327% in 0.3 @speechbubble is 187 222 to 100% with tail_top_left
JOLINE (eyeroll)
My sister. @pause for a beat @speechbubble reset @transition fade out white 3
music off @zoom reset
INT. JANIS DORM ROOM - NIGHT @cut to zone 2
&YOUNG JOLINE spot 0.541 81 319 AND YOUNG JOLINE faces right AND YOUNG JOLINE is talk_gesture_rear
&YOUNG ASHLEY spot 0.990 375 137 AND YOUNG ASHLEY faces left AND YOUNG ASHLEY is idle @speechbubble is 158 402 to 97% with tail_top_left
music music_meanpop
NARRATOR (JOLINE)
It was the summer of 2003. @speechbubble reset @JOLINE is talk_rear @zoom on 387 175 to 596% in 1.6 @speechbubble is 156 269 to 98% with tail_top_right
NARRATOR (JOLINE)
Or the summer when puberty hit me like a truck. @speechbubble reset
&zoom on 379 321 to 596% in 1.2 @speechbubble is 151 143 to 97% with tail_top_right
readrMessage Joline’s face changings will be explained in the future.
NARRATOR (JOLINE)
Directly into my face. @speechbubble reset @YOUNG JOLINE faces left AND YOUNG JOLINE is yawn_bored
NARRATOR (JOLINE)
At that time Ashley was pregnant. And both of our hormones were just causing big fights. @pause for a beat
&zoom on 588 1 to 369% in 2 @YOUNG ASHLEY walks to spot 0.990 243 131 in 2.1 AND YOUNG ASHLEY faces left AND YOUNG ASHLEY is walk_exhausted
&zoom on 577 356 to 369% in 2.5 @speechbubble is 117 179 to 100% with tail_top_right
YOUNG ASHLEY (talk_exhausted)
Joline, have you seen my lipstick anywhere? @speechbubble reset @YOUNG JOLINE faces right AND YOUNG JOLINE is talk_awkward @YOUNG ASHLEY is startled_surprised @pause for a beat @YOUNG ASHLEY is arms_crossed_angry @zoom on 389 326 to 767% in 0 @pause for a beat @zoom on 394 334 to 1378% in 0 @pause for a beat @zoom on 401 322 to 3660% in 0 @pause for a beat @zoom on 401 322 to 786% in 0 @YOUNG JOLINE is idle_awkward @speechbubble is 201 220 to 100% with tail_top_left
YOUNG JOLINE (talk_awkward)
No? @speechbubble reset @zoom on 553 342 to 420% in 0 @speechbubble is 118 205 to 100% with tail_top_right
YOUNG ASHLEY (talk_angry_accuse)
It’s right on your lips! @speechbubble reset @zoom on 401 322 to 786% in 0 @speechbubble is 195 232 to 100% with tail_top_left
YOUNG JOLINE (talk_awkward)
But It was so fetch I couldn’t resist it! @speechbubble reset @zoom on 553 342 to 420% in 0 @speechbubble is 143 229 to 100% with tail_top_right
YOUNG ASHLEY (talk_angry)
What the heck is fetch? @speechbubble reset @zoom on 401 322 to 786% in 0 @speechbubble is 182 205 to 100% with tail_top_left
YOUNG JOLINE (talk_preen)
Fetch will happen one day! Don’t mess with THE fetch! @speechbubble reset @zoom on 553 342 to 420% in 0 @speechbubble is 123 213 to 100% with tail_top_right
YOUNG ASHLEY (talk_angry_accuse)
Oh would you just give me my lipstick back!? @speechbubble reset @zoom on 401 322 to 786% in 0 @speechbubble is 176 225 to 122% with tail_top_left
YOUNG JOLINE (talk_angry_arms_crossed)
NO! @speechbubble reset @zoom on 553 342 to 420% in 0 @speechbubble is 150 230 to 100% with tail_top_right
YOUNG ASHLEY (talk_angry_arms_crossed)
Then what I am about to do will be a lot easier! @speechbubble reset
&zoom on 396 218 to 208% in 2.3 @YOUNG ASHLEY walks to spot 0.581 128 307 in 2.4 AND YOUNG ASHLEY faces left AND YOUNG ASHLEY does it while run_jog THEN YOUNG ASHLEY is idle_wounded @pause for a beat @YOUNG ASHLEY is deepbreath @YOUNG JOLINE is idle_awkward @zoom on 397 332 to 815% in 0 @speechbubble is 190 142 to 100% with tail_top_left
YOUNG JOLINE (talk_exhausted)
Are you okay? @speechbubble reset @zoom on 438 335 to 815% in 0 @YOUNG ASHLEY is deepbreath @pause for a beat @zoom on 397 332 to 815% in 0 @speechbubble is 196 163 to 100% with tail_top_left
YOUNG JOLINE (talk_sad)
I’m sorry I took your lipstick. @speechbubble reset @zoom on 438 335 to 815% in 0 @speechbubble is 129 178 to 100% with tail_top_right
YOUNG ASHLEY (talk_exhausted)
I’m sorry too. I overreacted. @speechbubble reset @zoom on 397 332 to 815% in 0
YOUNG JOLINE (talk_happy_smile)
I love you. @zoom on 438 335 to 815% in 0 @speechbubble is 147 196 to 102% with tail_top_right
YOUNG ASHLEY (talk_happy_agree)
I love you too. @speechbubble reset
&YOUNG JOLINE is idle_happy
&YOUNG ASHLEY is idle_happy @zoom on 401 292 to 324% in 0 @speechbubble is 162 168 to 100% with tail_top_right
readerMessage This scene is weird for a reason.
NARRATOR (JOLINE)
But we after all we loved each other. @pause for a beat @speechbubble reset @YOUNG ASHLEY is talk_gesture AND YOUNG JOLINE is listen @YOUNG ASHLEY is talk_repulsed @pause for a beat @transition fade out white 3
music off @zoom reset
EXT. PHILADELPHIA HOUSE - DAY @cut to zone 3
&JOLINE spot 0.268 157 260 AND JOLINE faces right AND JOLINE is idle_sad
&JIM spot 0.284 182 259 AND JIM faces left AND JIM is talk_exhausted @zoom on 786 109 to 872% in 0
music music_timepassage @JOLINE is deepbreath @speechbubble is 209 203 to 100% with tail_top_right
JOLINE (talk_happy_smile)
You can ask me some questions, you know that? @pause for a beat @zoom on 810 87 to 584% in 0
}
label ask_question
That is very strange.
So I posted it in a blank portal (don’t worry i’ve deleted it now)
I looked at each choice one at a time
took the story (short story first)
off choice and then tested it for errors.
I then pasted the long story and tested it for errors.
I’ve put them back into choices and it seems to be working now
choice
“Short story- shorter episode”{
&zoom on 809 106 to 751% in 1
music music_tickingbeat_lp @speechbubble reset @JIM is think @JOLINE is shiftweight @pause for a beat @zoom on 818 121 to 1039% in 0
JIM (talk_happy_agree)
It’s not like we are on someone’s private area… @zoom on 797 119 to 1322% in 0 @speechbubble is 172 203 to 100% with tail_top_left
JOLINE (eyeroll)
Just say you want the short version. @JOLINE is deepbreath
JOLINE (talk_happy_smile)
This is the house of my niece. @zoom on 818 121 to 1039% in 0 @JIM is startled_surprised @speechbubble reset @speechbubble is 133 180 to 100% with tail_top_right
JIM (talk_awkward)
I didn’t know you had a niece.
&zoom on 797 119 to 1322% in 2.2 @JOLINE is idle_happy @pause for a beat @speechbubble is 196 214 to 100% with tail_top_left
JOLINE (talk_forward)
Neither does She.
JOLINE (talk_angry_arms_crossed)
Her dad is really good at hiding her… @pause for a beat
readerMessage New important character revealed: Joline.
JOLINE (talk_sad_timid)
Ever since Ashley died. He hates our family…
JOLINE (talk_sad)
He thinks we are responsible for Ashley’s death. @zoom on 814 129 to 1303% in 0 @JIM is startled_surprised @pause for a beat @JIM is idle_sad @zoom on 797 119 to 1322% in 0
JOLINE (talk_sad)
He also, blames music for Ashley’s death.
JOLINE (talk_arms_crossed)
Ashley died on her way to the tour. The plane crashed, it was all an accident which Richard can’t seem to accept. @speechbubble reset @JOLINE is deepbreath @zoom on 818 121 to 1039% in 0
JIM (talk_awkward)
Wow… @JIM is idle_sad
music off
&zoom on 812 93 to 633% in 1.3
}
“Long story- Longer episode”{
music juvie_radiosong
JIM (talk_happy_smile)
Longer version, please! @JOLINE is eyeroll @pause for a beat @zoom on 799 119 to 1327% in 0.3 @speechbubble is 198 245 to 100% with tail_top_left
JOLINE (talk_gesture)
This is the house of my niece [FIRSTNAME]. @zoom on 819 129 to 1327% in 0.3 @JIM is startled_surprised @pause for a beat @speechbubble is 128 212 to 120% with tail_top_right
JIM (talk_excited)
I didn’t know you had a niece. @speechbubble reset @zoom on 799 119 to 1327% in 0.3 @JOLINE is laugh_giggle @speechbubble is 174 246 to 105% with tail_top_left
JOLINE (talk_happy_smile)
Well I do, I just… @zoom on 825 184 to 525% in 1.2 @JOLINE is idle_sad AND JIM is think
&zoom on 799 119 to 1327% in 1.1 @JOLINE is deepbreath
JOLINE (talk_sad)
I just don’t know her. @JOLINE is idle_sad @pause for a beat @pause for a beat @speechbubble reset @zoom on 819 129 to 1327% in 0.3
JIM (talk_think)
How? You are family, right? @zoom on 825 184 to 525% in 0 @JOLINE is nod_loop @zoom on 799 119 to 1327% in 0.3 @speechbubble is 187 222 to 100% with tail_top_left
JOLINE (talk_apathetic)
Just not the close one…
JOLINE (talk_neutral_forward)
It all started when Ashley died. @zoom on 819 129 to 1327% in 0.3 @speechbubble reset
JIM (talk_awkward)
Ashley? @zoom on 799 119 to 1327% in 0.3 @speechbubble is 187 222 to 100% with tail_top_left
JOLINE (eyeroll)
My sister. @pause for a beat @speechbubble reset @transition fade out white 3
music off @zoom reset
INT. JANIS DORM ROOM - NIGHT @cut to zone 2
&YOUNG JOLINE spot 0.541 81 319 AND YOUNG JOLINE faces right AND YOUNG JOLINE is talk_gesture_rear
&YOUNG ASHLEY spot 0.990 375 137 AND YOUNG ASHLEY faces left AND YOUNG ASHLEY is idle @speechbubble is 158 402 to 97% with tail_top_left
music music_meanpop
NARRATOR (JOLINE)
It was the summer of 2003. @speechbubble reset @JOLINE is talk_rear @zoom on 387 175 to 596% in 1.6 @speechbubble is 156 269 to 98% with tail_top_right
NARRATOR (JOLINE)
Or the summer when puberty hit me like a truck. @speechbubble reset
&zoom on 379 321 to 596% in 1.2 @speechbubble is 151 143 to 97% with tail_top_right
NARRATOR
ReaderMessage Joline’s face changings will be explained in the future.
NARRATOR (JOLINE)
Directly into my face. @speechbubble reset @YOUNG JOLINE faces left AND YOUNG JOLINE is yawn_bored
NARRATOR (JOLINE)
At that time Ashley was pregnant. And both of our hormones were just causing big fights. @pause for a beat
&zoom on 588 1 to 369% in 2 @YOUNG ASHLEY walks to spot 0.990 243 131 in 2.1 AND YOUNG ASHLEY faces left AND YOUNG ASHLEY is walk_exhausted
&zoom on 577 356 to 369% in 2.5 @speechbubble is 117 179 to 100% with tail_top_right
YOUNG ASHLEY (talk_exhausted)
Joline, have you seen my lipstick anywhere? @speechbubble reset @YOUNG JOLINE faces right AND YOUNG JOLINE is talk_awkward @YOUNG ASHLEY is startled_surprised @pause for a beat @YOUNG ASHLEY is arms_crossed_angry @zoom on 389 326 to 767% in 0 @pause for a beat @zoom on 394 334 to 1378% in 0 @pause for a beat @zoom on 401 322 to 3660% in 0 @pause for a beat @zoom on 401 322 to 786% in 0 @YOUNG JOLINE is idle_awkward @speechbubble is 201 220 to 100% with tail_top_left
YOUNG JOLINE (talk_awkward)
No? @speechbubble reset @zoom on 553 342 to 420% in 0 @speechbubble is 118 205 to 100% with tail_top_right
YOUNG ASHLEY (talk_angry_accuse)
It’s right on your lips! @speechbubble reset @zoom on 401 322 to 786% in 0 @speechbubble is 195 232 to 100% with tail_top_left
YOUNG JOLINE (talk_awkward)
But It was so fetch I couldn’t resist it! @speechbubble reset @zoom on 553 342 to 420% in 0 @speechbubble is 143 229 to 100% with tail_top_right
YOUNG ASHLEY (talk_angry)
What the heck is fetch? @speechbubble reset @zoom on 401 322 to 786% in 0 @speechbubble is 182 205 to 100% with tail_top_left
YOUNG JOLINE (talk_preen)
Fetch will happen one day! Don’t mess with THE fetch! @speechbubble reset @zoom on 553 342 to 420% in 0 @speechbubble is 123 213 to 100% with tail_top_right
YOUNG ASHLEY (talk_angry_accuse)
Oh would you just give me my lipstick back!? @speechbubble reset @zoom on 401 322 to 786% in 0 @speechbubble is 176 225 to 122% with tail_top_left
YOUNG JOLINE (talk_angry_arms_crossed)
NO! @speechbubble reset @zoom on 553 342 to 420% in 0 @speechbubble is 150 230 to 100% with tail_top_right
YOUNG ASHLEY (talk_angry_arms_crossed)
Then what I am about to do will be a lot easier! @speechbubble reset
&zoom on 396 218 to 208% in 2.3 @YOUNG ASHLEY walks to spot 0.581 128 307 in 2.4 AND YOUNG ASHLEY faces left AND YOUNG ASHLEY does it while run_jog THEN YOUNG ASHLEY is idle_wounded @pause for a beat @YOUNG ASHLEY is deepbreath @YOUNG JOLINE is idle_awkward @zoom on 397 332 to 815% in 0 @speechbubble is 190 142 to 100% with tail_top_left
YOUNG JOLINE (talk_exhausted)
Are you okay? @speechbubble reset @zoom on 438 335 to 815% in 0 @YOUNG ASHLEY is deepbreath @pause for a beat @zoom on 397 332 to 815% in 0 @speechbubble is 196 163 to 100% with tail_top_left
YOUNG JOLINE (talk_sad)
I’m sorry I took your lipstick. @speechbubble reset @zoom on 438 335 to 815% in 0 @speechbubble is 129 178 to 100% with tail_top_right
YOUNG ASHLEY (talk_exhausted)
I’m sorry too. I overreacted. @speechbubble reset @zoom on 397 332 to 815% in 0
YOUNG JOLINE (talk_happy_smile)
I love you. @zoom on 438 335 to 815% in 0 @speechbubble is 147 196 to 102% with tail_top_right
YOUNG ASHLEY (talk_happy_agree)
I love you too. @speechbubble reset
&YOUNG JOLINE is idle_happy
&YOUNG ASHLEY is idle_happy @zoom on 401 292 to 324% in 0 @speechbubble is 162 168 to 100% with tail_top_right
readerMessage This scene is weird for a reason.
NARRATOR (JOLINE)
But we after all we loved each other. @pause for a beat @speechbubble reset @YOUNG ASHLEY is talk_gesture AND YOUNG JOLINE is listen @YOUNG ASHLEY is talk_repulsed @pause for a beat @transition fade out white 3
music off @zoom reset
EXT. PHILADELPHIA HOUSE - DAY @cut to zone 3
&JOLINE spot 0.268 157 260 AND JOLINE faces right AND JOLINE is idle_sad
&JIM spot 0.284 182 259 AND JIM faces left AND JIM is talk_exhausted @zoom on 786 109 to 872% in 0
music music_timepassage @JOLINE is deepbreath @speechbubble is 209 203 to 100% with tail_top_right
JOLINE (talk_happy_smile)
You can ask me some questions, you know that? @pause for a beat @zoom on 810 87 to 584% in 0
}
label ask_question
It may give you an error when you try it because you cant end your script on a label but I presume you haven’t finished with the lable yet anyway
in all i’m not sure why it gave you errors for the brackets as I couldn’t see the problem with them but hope it works now
Ann just check that too. Thought the narrator was saying that due to not knowing about that feature so I added NARRATOR before that. Other than that nothing has changed