anamae
April 19, 2018, 12:22am
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SILVER (talk_happy_agree)
Exactly.
@transition iris in black
NARRATOR
What color is your Hope?
choice “Light” {
INT. BEDWINDOW - DN WITH SELFIE FEMALE 1
choice “Read New Message” {
} NARRATOR (IRIS)
I haven’t seen you since the fight. lol
What are you up to tonight.
Estefi
April 19, 2018, 12:24am
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You forgot the end bracket which goes after the background.
You need dialogue right before that choice
You also need to put NARRATOR (IRIS) on the next line. It can’t be right next to that end bracket like that.
anamae
April 19, 2018, 12:57am
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SILVER (talk_happy_agree)
Exactly.
@transition iris in black
NARRATOR
What color is your Hope?
Does the NARRATOR not count as dialogue?
NARRATOR
What color is your Hope?
That dialogue is for the choice “Light” { choice.
You need dialogue for the choice “Read New Message” { choice.
Ryan
April 19, 2018, 2:03pm
7
Moved to Directing Help & Tips as that’s where scripting questions live!
Also please feel free to review this tutorial , it has a lot of info about where to organize posts on the forums
Ryan
June 12, 2018, 6:11pm
8
Closing due to one month of inactivity