Error in script


#1

  SILVER (talk_happy_agree)
Exactly.

@transition iris in black
NARRATOR
What color is your Hope?

choice “Light” {
INT. BEDWINDOW - DN WITH SELFIE FEMALE 1
choice “Read New Message” {
} NARRATOR (IRIS)
I haven’t seen you since the fight. lol
What are you up to tonight.


#2

You forgot the end bracket which goes after the background. :blue_heart:


#3

You need dialogue right before that choice

You also need to put NARRATOR (IRIS) on the next line. It can’t be right next to that end bracket like that.


#4

What she said.


#5
  SILVER (talk_happy_agree)
Exactly.

@transition iris in black
NARRATOR
What color is your Hope?

Does the NARRATOR not count as dialogue?


#6

NARRATOR
What color is your Hope?

That dialogue is for the choice “Light” { choice.
You need dialogue for the choice “Read New Message” { choice.


#7

Moved to Directing Help & Tips as that’s where scripting questions live!

Also please feel free to review this tutorial, it has a lot of info about where to organize posts on the forums :slight_smile:


#8

Closing due to one month of inactivity :slight_smile:


#9