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INT. WARNING - THEMES
@pause for 3
@transition fade in black in 2.5
INT. STUDY ROOM NO TABLE - DAY
music int_room_silent
@overlay INT. SCHOOL CLASSROOM TABLE - DAY create
@overlay INT. SCHOOL CLASSROOM TABLE - DAY scales to 0.8325 0.8325
@overlay INT. SCHOOL CLASSROOM TABLE - DAY shifts to 20 -20 in zone 2
@overlay INT. SCHOOL CLASSROOM TABLE - DAY moves to layer 6
@overlay INT. RUSTIC BARN RECEPTION DANCE CHAIRS Z1 - NIGHT create
@overlay INT. RUSTIC BARN RECEPTION DANCE CHAIRS Z1 - NIGHT opacity 1
@overlay INT. RUSTIC BARN RECEPTION DANCE CHAIRS Z1 - NIGHT scales to 2.152 2.152
@overlay INT. RUSTIC BARN RECEPTION DANCE CHAIRS Z1 - NIGHT shifts to 269 -41 in zone 1
@overlay INT. RUSTIC BARN RECEPTION DANCE CHAIRS Z1 - NIGHT moves to layer -4
@KEITH enters from left to screen right AND KAI enters from left to screen center AND CEDRIC enters from left to screen left
@add Text Book Open Navy Blue to KEITH
@add Text Book Open Navy Blue to CEDRIC
@KAI walks to back left THEN KAI is tinker_stand_neutral_loop_rear
@KEITH walks to spot 1.280 284 76 in zone 2 AND CEDRIC walks to screen left in zone 2 THEN KEITH is read_sit_book_open_neutral_loop AND CEDRIC is write_takenotes_neutral
@add Bookstack Book to KAI
@KAI walks to spot 1.280 196 26 in zone 2
@pan to zone 2
@KAI is return_object_neutral
@remove Bookstack Book from KAI
@overlay OLDBOOKS create
@overlay OLDBOOKS opacity 1
@overlay OLDBOOKS scales to 0.411 0.411
@overlay OLDBOOKS shifts to 159 147 in zone 2
@overlay OLDBOOKS moves to layer 7
@add Spell Book Open Grey Black to KAI
@KAI is read_sit_book_open_neutral_loop
@KAI moves to layer 3
@transition fade out black
music ambient_thunderstorm_lp
KEITH (talk_sit_shrug_neutral)
Kai, there’s something that I’m curious about
KAI (talk_sit_shrug_neutral)
What is it?
KEITH (talk_sit_shrug_neutral)
How many more years do you have?
KAI (talk_sit_neutral_loop)
About three or four years, how about for the two of you?
KEITH (talk_sit_coy)
Same
CEDRIC (read_book_open_neutral_loop)
Same
@remove Spell Book Open Grey Black from KAI
@add Text Book Open Navy Blue to KAI
KEITH (talk_sit_shrug_neutral)
Could you tell me about your current ride situation?
KAI (talk_sit_shrug_neutral)
Cedric told you the jist of it
KEITH (talk_sit_shrug_neutral)
How much longer will it last?
KAI (talk_sit_neutral_loop)
One more year
@KEITH is idle_sit_leanforward_concerned_loop AND CEDRIC is idle_sit_leanforward_concerned_loop
@CEDRIC spot 1.280 83 36 in zone 2
@CEDRIC moves to layer 3
KEITH (talk_sit_sheepish)
Could you maybe change your carpool ride?
KAI (talk_sit_shrug_neutral)
Why?
CEDRIC (talk_sit_armscrossed_neutral_loop)
First off, its not good even though everybody else may find it funny, and also that carpool ride is only good for one more year, after that, what happens?
@KEITH is idle_sit_neutral_loop
KAI (talk_sit_shrug_neutral)
I’ll just try to find another carpool ride
@CEDRIC is idle_sit_armscrossed_unimpressed_loop
KEITH (talk_sit_doubtful)
Not good enough, you are changing it, starting this evening
KAI (talk_sit_shrug_neutral)
How will I get back?
KEITH (talk_sit_coy)
I’m driving you
@add Notepad White Lined to KAI
@KAI is write_takenotes_worried
@remove Text Book Open Navy Blue from CEDRIC
@CEDRIC walks to back left THEN CEDRIC is spray_spraypaint_stand_loop_rear AND KEITH is write_takenotes_neutral
@transition fade out black
KAI (talk_sit_deny_neutral)
Keith, don’t you work?
KEITH (talk_sit_reassure_happy)
Yes, I do, I work in the evenings and sometimes at night
KEITH (talk_sit_coy)
I work as a part time barkeeper and I work on Tuesdays, Thursdays and Fridays.
KEITH (talk_sit_sheepish)
On those days, Cedric will be driving you back
KAI (talk_sit_sheepish)
I don’t have classes on those days
KAI (talk_sit_sheepish)
Cedric, do you work?
CEDRIC (talk_shrug_neutral)
I am a barista at the cafe here on campus. What do you do with yourself?
KAI (talk_sit_coy)
My condition is a lot of work, I get chronic pain, fatigue, I have hobbies and I’m looking for a job
CEDRIC (talk_think_neutral)
What are you majoring in?
choice (Major)
“English” {
KAI (talk_sit_coy)
I’m majoring in English
} “History” {
KAI (talk_sit_coy)
I’m majoring in History
}“Journalism” {
KAI (talk_sit_coy)
I’m majoring in Journalism
} “Art&Museum_Managment” {
KAI (talk_sit_coy)
I’m majoring in Art and Museum Management
}“Hotel&Resort_Managment” {
KAI (talk_sit_coy)
I’m majoring in Hotel and Resort Management
} “Philosophy” {
KAI (talk_sit_coy)
I’m majoring in Philosophy
@KEITH is react_sit_confused
CEDRIC (talk_confused_mindblown)
What?
CEDRIC (talk_explain_neutral)
You need something better
KAI (talk_sit_doubtful)
I thought of either English or History
KEITH (talk_sit_reassure_happy)
Either one of those is better, not philosophy
}
KAI (talk_sit_coy)
I need to get to class
CEDRIC (talk_flirt_coy)
See you at lunch
@KAI is tinker_kneel_neutral_loop_rear
@remove Notepad White Lined from KAI
@remove Text Book Open Navy Blue from KEITH
@pause for 3
@KAI exits left
CEDRIC (talk_shrug_neutral)
She forgot her books
KEITH (talk_sit_coy)
We can take them with us
@transition fade out black
INT. CAFETERIA - DAY
sound int_cafeteria_busy
@pan to zone 2
@DRIVER stands back right AND PASSENGER stands back left AND PASSENGER2 stands back far right AND STUDENT3 stands back far left
@DRIVER spot 0.394 244 431 in zone 2
@STUDENT3 spot 0.417 200 427 in zone 2
@PASSENGER2 spot 0.434 291 419 in zone 2
@PASSENGER spot 0.401 161 433 in zone 2
@pan to zone 1
@CEDRIC enters from left to back right AND KAI enters from left to back left AND KEITH enters from left to back far left
@CEDRIC faces left
CEDRIC (talk_shrug_neutral)
Those girls from the car ride are here, want to tell them now?
choice (Ride)
“Tell them now”{
@KAI is deepbreath THEN KAI is search_neutral
@pan to zone 2
@zoom on 627 373 to 182% in 3
@pan to zone 1
@zoom reset
KEITH (talk_shrug_neutral)
Would you like me to go with you?
choice “Yes” {
KAI (talk_awkward_loop)
That would be helpful
CEDRIC (talk_shrug_neutral)
I’ll get us some lunch
@follow KAI to back left in zone 2 AND KEITH walks to upscreen left in zone 2
@zoom on 627 373 to 182% in 3
@KAI walks to back left
@KAI walks to spot 0.400 181 434 in zone 2
@KEITH walks to spot 0.430 148 430 in zone 2
DRIVER (talk_think_neutral)
What do you need, community service?
@PASSENGER is laugh_giggle AND PASSENGER2 is laugh_giggle AND STUDENT3 is laugh_giggle
@KAI is deepbreath
KAI (talk_sheepish_rubneck)
I don’t need your services anymore
DRIVER (talk_think_neutral)
How will you get back?
KEITH (talk_reassure_neutral)
I will be driving her from now on
Let’s go, Kai
@KAI exits left AND KEITH exits left
@STUDENT3 is react_angry_shakefists AND DRIVER is react_angry_shakefists AND PASSENGER2 is react_angry_shakefists
@pause for 2.5
} “No” {
KAI (talk_awkward_loop)
I can do it, in fact, I should be the one to do this
@follow KAI to back left in zone 2
@zoom on 627 373 to 182% in 3
@KAI walks to back left
@KAI walks to spot 0.400 181 434 in zone 2
DRIVER (talk_think_neutral)
What do you need, community service?
@PASSENGER is laugh_giggle AND PASSENGER2 is laugh_giggle AND STUDENT3 is laugh_giggle
@KAI is deepbreath
KAI (talk_sheepish_rubneck)
I don’t need your services anymore
KAI (talk_reassure_neutral)
I am now in a different carpool ride
@KAI exits left
@DRIVER is cheer_happy_loop AND PASSENGER is cheer_happy_loop AND PASSENGER2 is cheer_happy_loop
DRIVER (talk_excited_happy)
I’m so happy to be relieved from community service
}
} “Wait til later” {
KAI (talk_awkward_loop)
I’ll wait until later today to drop them the news
CEDRIC (talk_shrug_neutral)
Alright, that’s fine
KEITH (talk_explain_neutral)
I’ll get us some lunch
}
@transition fade out black
if (Ride is “Tell them now”) {
@zoom reset
@pan to zone 1
CEDRIC (talk_shrug_neutral)
If there’s anything that you need to do, you can do so, we will be leaving in three hours from now
} else {
EXT. CAMPUS QUAD EAST OVERCAST - DAY with effect RAIN
@PASSENGER2 enters from left to screen left AND PASSENGER enters from left to upscreen left AND DRIVER enters from left to screen center THEN PASSENGER2 is idle_armscrossed_angry_loop
DRIVER (talk_asif_angry)
I am giving her thirty minutes to arrive, if she does not arrive then we will just leave
@pan to zone 3
@KAI enters from right to back far left AND KAI does it while run_athletic_neutral_loop AND CEDRIC enters from right to back left AND CEDRIC does it while run_athletic_neutral_loop AND KEITH enters from right to back right AND KEITH does it while run_athletic_neutral_loop
@KAI is idle_exhausted_cramp_loop AND CEDRIC is idle_exhausted_loop
KEITH (talk_exhausted)
You should not have to be putting up with this, go ahead, we will wait here
@follow KAI to screen right in zone 1 THEN KAI is talk_clutchchest_sad_loop
DRIVER (talk_asif_angry)
There you are, are you ready to go?
KAI (talk_armsraised_neutral)
I won’t be going with you
PASSENGER (talk_startled_neutral)
What? Why?
KAI (talk_explain_neutral)
I have another ride for today and I won’t be needing your services from now on
PASSENGER (talk_accuse_angry)
You made us wait all this time in the rain, just to tell us this?
KAI (talk_sad)
I’m very sorry
@DRIVER is slapface_give_angry AND KAI is slapface_receive_angry
@pan to zone 3
@CEDRIC is react_startled_surprised AND KEITH is react_startled_surprised
@pan to zone 1
DRIVER (talk_accuse_angry)
To tell you really, I am glad that I won’t have to drive you around anywhere anymore and you deserve that slap
@DRIVER faces left
DRIVER (talk_explain_neutral)
Let’s go
@DRIVER exits left AND PASSENGER exits left AND PASSENGER2 exits left
@KEITH walks to screen left in zone 1 THEN KEITH faces right AND CEDRIC walks to upscreen left in zone 1 THEN CEDRIC faces right THEN CEDRIC is idle_armscrossed_neutral_loop AND KEITH is idle_armscrossed_neutral_loop
KAI (talk_sad)
I guess you saw that
CEDRIC (talk_armscrossed_shrug_neutral)
Yup
KEITH (talk_explain_neutral)
We will be leaving in three hours from now
}
if (whatnext is “Job_hunt”) {
KAI (think_rubchin)
I guess I could do some job hunting while I’m here
INT. BASIC OFFICE - DAY
@MANAGER enters from right to back right THEN MANAGER is tinker_stand_neutral_loop_rear
sound door_knock
@add Notepad White Lined to MANAGER
MANAGER (talk_read_paper_neutral)
Come in
@KAI enters from left to screen left
MANAGER (talk_read_paper_neutral)
How may I help you?
KAI (talk_explain_neutral)
I’m here to inquire about any opportunities with the school
@MANAGER is search_neutral
MANAGER (talk_explain_neutral)
When hiring students, we think about the student body, the teachers and how they impact each other
MANAGER (talk_sheepish_rubneck)
Considering that the student body should be healthy, I’m sorry but you are not a good fit
INT. PUBLIC LIBRARY - DAY
@KAI enters from left to screen left
@follow KAI to screen right in zone 3
@KAI exits right
INT. CEO OFFICE - DAY
@LIBRARY MANAGER stands upscreen left AND LIBRARY MANAGER faces left THEN LIBRARY MANAGER is deepbreath
sound door_knock
@LIBRARY MANAGER faces right
LIBRARY MANAGER (talk_explain_neutral)
Come in
@KAI enters from right to screen right
KAI (talk_explain_neutral)
Hi, I’m here to inquire about any opportunities in your company
LIBRARY MANAGER (talk_explain_neutral)
We are not currently hiring at the moment
INT. PHILADELPHIA TIMES OFFICE - DAY
@pan to zone 2
@NEWSPAPER AGENT stands back right AND NEWSPAPER AGENT faces right AND NEWSPAPER AGENT is tinker_stand_neutral_loop_rear
sound door_knock
@NEWSPAPER AGENT faces right
NEWSPAPER AGENT (talk_sheepish_rubneck)
Come in
@KAI enters from right to screen right
NEWSPAPER AGENT (talk_explain_neutral)
How can I help you?
KAI (talk_explain_neutral)
I’m here to inquire about any job opportunities with your company
NEWSPAPER AGENT (talk_gossip)
Do you walk into any dangerous situations and would you do it?
KAI (talk_explain_neutral)
I have not walked into any dangerous situation though, I might consider
NEWSPAPER AGENT (take_object_neutral)
We need someone who is willing to put their life at risk, you can take this application if you change your mind
EXT. CAMPUS QUAD EAST OVERCAST - DAY with effect RAIN
@KAI stands screen left AND KAI faces right AND KAI is idle_sad_loop
@overlay DROPS2 create
@overlay DROPS2 opacity 1
@overlay DROPS2 shifts to 53 360
@overlay DROPS2 scales to 0.123 0.123
@overlay DROPS2 moves to layer 2
@pause for 2
@transition fade out black in 3
@pan to zone 3
@CEDRIC enters from right to back left AND CEDRIC does it while run_athletic_neutral_loop AND KEITH enters from right to back right AND KEITH does it while run_athletic_neutral_loop
@CEDRIC is react_startled_surprised AND KEITH is react_startled_surprised
@follow CEDRIC to screen right in zone 1 AND KEITH walks to upscreen right in zone 1 AND CEDRIC does it while run_athletic_neutral_loop AND KEITH does it while run_athletic_neutral_loop
CEDRIC (talk_startled_neutral)
What happened?
KAI (talk_sad)
I went out on a job hunt, there is a job that I could consider but it means going to dangerous places and dangerous zones
KEITH (talk_afraid)
I would not do it if I were you
KAI (talk_sad)
I really want to work though
@KEITH is sigh_disappointed AND CEDRIC is sigh_disappointed
CEDRIC (talk_explain_neutral)
Lets get out of the rain
KEITH (talk_explain_neutral)
I also have two others that I need to drop off
} elif (whatnext is “Study”) {
INT. STUDY ROOM NO TABLE - DAY with INT. SCHOOL CLASSROOM TABLE - DAY in zone 2
music int_room_silent
@overlay INT. SCHOOL CLASSROOM TABLE - DAY scales to 0.8325 0.8325
@overlay INT. SCHOOL CLASSROOM TABLE - DAY shifts to 20 -20 in zone 2
@overlay INT. SCHOOL CLASSROOM TABLE - DAY moves to layer 6
@overlay INT. RUSTIC BARN RECEPTION DANCE CHAIRS Z1 - NIGHT create
@overlay INT. RUSTIC BARN RECEPTION DANCE CHAIRS Z1 - NIGHT opacity 1
@overlay INT. RUSTIC BARN RECEPTION DANCE CHAIRS Z1 - NIGHT scales to 2.152 2.152
@overlay INT. RUSTIC BARN RECEPTION DANCE CHAIRS Z1 - NIGHT shifts to 269 -41 in zone 1
@overlay INT. RUSTIC BARN RECEPTION DANCE CHAIRS Z1 - NIGHT moves to layer -4
@KAI enters from left to screen center
@KAI walks to back left THEN KAI is tinker_stand_neutral_loop_rear
@add Bookstack Book to KAI
@KAI walks to spot 1.280 196 26 in zone 2
@pan to zone 2
@KAI is return_object_neutral
@remove Bookstack Book from KAI
@overlay OLDBOOKS create
@overlay OLDBOOKS opacity 1
@overlay OLDBOOKS scales to 0.411 0.411
@overlay OLDBOOKS shifts to 159 147 in zone 2
@overlay OLDBOOKS moves to layer 7
@add Spell Book Open Grey Black to KAI
@KAI is read_sit_book_open_neutral_loop
@pause for 2.5
@KAI is type_sit_neutral_loop
@remove Spell Book Open Grey Black from KAI
@add Text Book Open Navy Blue to KAI
@KAI is write_takenotes_neutral
@pause for 2.5
@KAI is tinker_kneel_neutral_loop_rear
@remove Text Book Open Navy Blue from KAI
@transition fade out black
EXT. CAMPUS QUAD EAST OVERCAST - DAY with effect RAIN
@KAI stands screen left AND KAI faces right AND KAI is idle_shiftweight_neutral_loop
@pause for 2
@transition fade out black in 3
@pan to zone 3
@CEDRIC enters from right to back left AND CEDRIC does it while run_athletic_neutral_loop AND KEITH enters from right to back right AND KEITH does it while run_athletic_neutral_loop
@CEDRIC is react_startled_surprised AND KEITH is react_startled_surprised
@follow CEDRIC to screen right in zone 1 AND KEITH walks to upscreen right in zone 1 AND CEDRIC does it while run_athletic_neutral_loop AND KEITH does it while run_athletic_neutral_loop
CEDRIC (talk_startled_neutral)
How long have you been waiting?
KAI (talk_explain_neutral)
About ten minutes
KEITH (talk_explain_neutral)
Lets go
KEITH (talk_explain_neutral)
I also have two others to drop off
} elif (whatnext is “Relax”) {
INT. STUDY ROOM NO TABLE - DAY with INT. SCHOOL CLASSROOM TABLE - DAY in zone 2
music int_room_silent
@overlay INT. SCHOOL CLASSROOM TABLE - DAY scales to 0.8325 0.8325
@overlay INT. SCHOOL CLASSROOM TABLE - DAY shifts to 20 -20 in zone 2
@overlay INT. SCHOOL CLASSROOM TABLE - DAY moves to layer 6
@overlay INT. RUSTIC BARN RECEPTION DANCE CHAIRS Z1 - NIGHT create
@overlay INT. RUSTIC BARN RECEPTION DANCE CHAIRS Z1 - NIGHT opacity 1
@overlay INT. RUSTIC BARN RECEPTION DANCE CHAIRS Z1 - NIGHT scales to 2.152 2.152
@overlay INT. RUSTIC BARN RECEPTION DANCE CHAIRS Z1 - NIGHT shifts to 269 -41 in zone 1
@overlay INT. RUSTIC BARN RECEPTION DANCE CHAIRS Z1 - NIGHT moves to layer -4
@KAI enters from left to screen center
@follow KAI to upscreen left in zone 2
@add Text Book Open Navy Blue to KAI
@KAI is write_takenotes_neutral
@KAI moves to layer 3
@transition fade out black
KAI (idle_sit_leanback_tired_loop)
(Wrote a lot down for this story that is coming along)
(Shoot, I got to go meet with Cedric and Keith in about forty minutes, might as well make my way over there)
@KAI is tinker_stand_neutral_loop_rear
@remove Text Book Open Navy Blue from KAI
EXT. CAMPUS QUAD EAST OVERCAST - DAY with effect RAIN
@KAI stands screen left AND KAI faces right AND KAI is idle_shiftweight_neutral_loop
@pause for 2
@transition fade out black in 3
@pan to zone 3
@CEDRIC enters from right to back left AND CEDRIC does it while run_athletic_neutral_loop AND KEITH enters from right to back right AND KEITH does it while run_athletic_neutral_loop
@CEDRIC is react_startled_surprised AND KEITH is react_startled_surprised
@follow CEDRIC to screen right in zone 1 AND KEITH walks to upscreen right in zone 1 AND CEDRIC does it while run_athletic_neutral_loop AND KEITH does it while run_athletic_neutral_loop
CEDRIC (talk_startled_neutral)
How long have you been waiting?
KAI (talk_explain_neutral)
About ten minutes
KEITH (talk_explain_neutral)
Lets go
KEITH (talk_explain_neutral)
I also have two others to drop off
}
EXT. CAMPUS QUAD EAST OVERCAST - DAY with INT. COMPACT CAR BACKSEAT BLACK - DAY at layer 1
music ambient_thunderstorm_lp
@pan to zone 2
@KAI enters from left to screen center THEN KAI is idle_sit_serious_loop
@KAI spot 1.533 164 -27 in zone 2
@pan to zone 1
@CEDRIC enters from left to screen center THEN CEDRIC faces left AND CEDRIC is idle_sit_neutral_loop
@CEDRIC spot 1.583 243 -7 in zone 1
@pan to zone 3
@RAY enters from right to screen center THEN RAY faces right AND RAY is idle_sit_neutral_loop
@RAY spot 1.540 93 3 in zone 3
sound car_leaving
RAY (talk_sit_armscrossed_neutral_loop)
Who is this bar girl?
@pan to zone 2
KAI (talk_sit_deny_neutral)
Bar girl?
NARRATOR (KEITH)
Since I work as a bartender, when we say bar guy or bar girl, it means that they’re drunk and need a lift back
Usually, I wouldn’t do it unless if I know the person
@KAI is idle_sit_sad_loop
NARRATOR (KEITH)
Ray, she is not drunk, she has a medical condition that causes her to have those bruises
Also, we are not to talk about Kai that way, if you guys continue to do so, then your going to have to go through me or Cedric
@pan to zone 3
RAY (talk_sit_doubtful)
What’s so special about her?
NARRATOR (KEITH)
I was friends back in high school with her
RAY (talk_sit_deny_neutral)
I’m sorry Keith, but I starting to wonder about your taste in chicks
NARRATOR (KEITH)
If you have any problems with her, then get another carpool ride with someone else
sound car_screech
NARRATOR (KEITH)
Oh shoot
NARRATOR (SAI)
Keith, look out
sound car_peelout
NARRATOR (KEITH)
I can’t move the car, the roads are too flooded
NARRATOR (SAI)
We have to get out
NARRATOR (KEITH)
We have to jump out, the car is sliding into water
@CEDRIC exits left AND KAI exits left AND RAY exits right
EXT. COUNTRY ROMANTIC WATERFALL - DAY with effect HARD RAIN
@CEDRIC stands screen left AND KEITH stands upscreen left AND KAI stands screen center AND RAY stands screen right AND SAI stands upscreen right
@pan to zone 2
@overlay EXT. LUXURY CAR AQUA PROFILE FLIPPED - NIGHT create
@overlay EXT. LUXURY CAR AQUA PROFILE FLIPPED - NIGHT opacity 1
@overlay EXT. LUXURY CAR AQUA PROFILE FLIPPED - NIGHT rotates 350 anchor point 0 0
@overlay EXT. LUXURY CAR AQUA PROFILE FLIPPED - NIGHT shifts to 16 -114 in zone 2
@pause for 2.5
@CEDRIC is search_neutral AND KEITH is search_neutral
CEDRIC (talk_gossip)
I think I see a small cottage nearby
KEITH (talk_gossip)
I think I see a cave
label location
CEDRIC (think_rubchin)
Where should we go?
choice (location)
“Cabin” {
EXT. CABIN - NIGHT with effect HARD RAIN
@DRIVER stands screen left AND PASSENGER stands upscreen left AND PASSENGER2 stands screen center AND DRIVER faces right AND PASSENGER faces right AND PASSENGER2 faces right
@CEDRIC enters from right to screen right AND KEITH enters from right to upscreen right
@pan to zone 2
@KAI enters from right to screen left AND RAY enters from right to upscreen left AND SAI enters from right to screen center
@pan to zone 1
DRIVER (talk_accuse_angry)
You and your crew should leave, we have ownership over this little cabin
DRIVER (talk_complain_angry)
Also, that person over there, community service, why didn’t she die?
KEITH (talk_angry)
Screw this, we are not even going to stay here
goto location
} “Cave” {
EXT. CAVE - DAY
@CEDRIC enters from right to screen right AND KEITH enters from right to upscreen right AND KAI enters from right to screen center AND RAY enters from right to upscreen left AND SAI enters from right to screen left
@KAI spot 1.20 150 0
@KAI moves to layer 1 AND KAI faces right
KEITH (talk_armsraised_neutral)
At least will be warm and dry
SAI (talk_armscrossed_neutral_loop)
How are we going to get warm and dry?
CEDRIC (talk_think_neutral)
Me and Keith, we intend to take our clothes off, and use body heat for warmth
CEDRIC (talk_flirt_charming)
Of course we will get it from Kai
KEITH (talk_flirt_coy)
Kai, would you be willing?
choice “Keith and Cedric” {
@KAI is deepbreath
KAI (talk_armsraised_neutral)
I’ll do it for the two of you
@KEITH faces left AND CEDRIC faces right AND KEITH is tinker_kneel_neutral_loop AND CEDRIC is tinker_stand_neutral_loop_rear
@pause for 3.5
@KAI changes into KAI_nudebruised
@CEDRIC is dustoff_neutral_loop AND KEITH is dustoff_neutral_loop
@CEDRIC changes into CEDRIC_nude
@KEITH changes into KEITH_nude
@CEDRIC is hug_neutral_loop_rear AND KEITH is hug_nervous_loop AND KAI is hug_nervous_loop
@KAI spot 1.20 211 -9
@KEITH spot 1.280 176 5
@RAY is dustoff_neutral_loop AND SAI is dustoff_neutral_loop
@RAY changes into RAY_nude
@SAI changes into SAI_nude
@RAY is hug_neutral AND SAI is hug_neutral_loop_rear
KEITH (hug_talk_serious_loop)
Don't worry
We won't do anything to hurt you
Think of this as survival 101
@KEITH is hug_nervous_loop
@pause for 3
} “All four” {
@KAI is deepbreath
KAI (talk_armsraised_neutral)
Alright, I’ll do it for all of you
@KEITH faces left AND CEDRIC faces right AND KEITH is tinker_kneel_neutral_loop AND CEDRIC is tinker_stand_neutral_loop_rear AND SAI faces left AND SAI is tinker_stand_neutral_loop_rear AND RAY faces right AND RAY is tinker_kneel_neutral_loop
@KAI changes into KAI_nudebruised
@SAI is dustoff_neutral_loop AND RAY is dustoff_neutral_loop AND CEDRIC is dustoff_neutral_loop AND KEITH is dustoff_neutral_loop AND KAI is idle_awkward_scratch_loop
@CEDRIC changes into CEDRIC_nude
@KEITH changes into KEITH_nude
@RAY changes into RAY_nude
@SAI changes into SAI_nude
@SAI is hug_neutral_loop_rear AND RAY is hug_nervous_loop AND CEDRIC is hug_neutral_loop_rear AND KEITH is hug_nervous_loop AND KAI is hug_nervous_loop
@CEDRIC spot 1.280 234 -5
@SAI spot 1.280 87 5
KEITH (hug_talk_serious_loop)
Don’t worry
We won’t do anything to hurt you, me and Cedric will make sure of that
Think of this as survival 101
@KEITH is hug_nervous_loop
@pause for 3
@transition fade out black
@KAI is deepbreath
KAI (talk_exhausted)
Is it working?
@CEDRIC faces left
CEDRIC (talk_explain_neutral)
Yeah, I’m actually a bit warmer now
KEITH (talk_agree_happy)
Same here
@KAI is deepbreath
@SAI faces right
SAI (talk_awkward_loop)
Kai, thank you
@SAI is idle_sad_loop AND KAI is deepbreath
RAY (talk_gossip)
Are you alright?
@KAI is deepbreath
KAI (talk_gossip)
I…
KAI (talk_gossip)
I…
@KAI is faint
@RAY is deepbreath AND CEDRIC faces right AND KEITH faces right AND KEITH is reach_kneel_neutral
CEDRIC (talk_gossip)
What happened?
KEITH (talk_kneel_neutral_loop)
Kai has another condition called POTS which is called Postural Orthostatic Tycardia Syndrome, its where her heart and blood pressure changes from lying to standing
Standing is the worse for her and anything could happen when she stands up, especially for long periods of time, she could faint, black out, get lightheaded or dizziness
RAY (talk_exhausted)
Sheeesh, just watching and hearing all of this makes me feel bad for her
RAY (talk_gossip)
Is that why you both are friends with her?
CEDRIC (talk_think_neutral)
Nope, I just wanted to get to know her, I started talking to her since she seemed lonely
CEDRIC (talk_think_neutral)
Keith has been friends with her since high school, so its obvious he knows more about her
@CEDRIC is deepbreath
CEDRIC (talk_exhausted)
It all makes sense as of why she is so lonely
KEITH (talk_kneel_neutral_loop)
Back in high school, I was her only friend, everyone thought of her as bad luck, or in a family situation that is abusive
I was the first and the last to know anything about her
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RAY (talk_think_neutral)
Looks like the rain is starting to lessen
SAI (tinker_kneel_neutral_loop_rear)
Our clothes are not completely dry, more like damp
KEITH (talk_think_neutral)
I might have some clothes in the car, if the car is still there
choice (leaveCave)
“Get clothes from car” {
EXT. COUNTRY ROMANTIC WATERFALL - DAY with effect LIGHT RAIN
@overlay CAR TRUNK RED create
@overlay CAR TRUNK RED opacity 1
@overlay CAR TRUNK RED rotates 350 anchor point 0 0
@overlay CAR TRUNK RED shifts to 16 -114 in zone 2
@pause for 2.5
@KEITH enters from left to screen right AND CEDRIC enters from left to screen left AND KAI enters from left to screen center AND SAI enters from left to upscreen left AND RAY enters from left to upscreen right
@follow KEITH to screen center in zone 2 THEN KEITH faces left AND KEITH is tinker_kneel_neutral_loop
@pause for 2.5
@add Moving Box to KEITH
@follow KEITH to screen right in zone 1
KEITH (talk_sheepish_rubneck)
I hope that you don’t mind wearing some donor clothes
KEITH (talk_explain_neutral)
I have this box for instances with difficult customers that do stupid things and I have to help them
CEDRIC (talk_gossip)
Its better than nothing
@KEITH is return_object_neutral
@remove Moving Box from KEITH
@KAI is dustoff_neutral_loop AND SAI is dustoff_neutral_loop AND RAY is dustoff_neutral_loop AND CEDRIC is dustoff_neutral_loop AND KEITH is dustoff_neutral_loop
@KAI changes into KAI_car-clothes
@SAI changes into SAI_car-clothes
@RAY changes into RAY_car-clothes
@CEDRIC changes into CEDRIC_car-clothes
@KEITH changes into KEITH_car-clothes
KEITH (talk_explain_neutral)
The car has sunk into the water and the mud some, I don’t think we can pull it out
SAI (talk_think_neutral)
We could try, we have a female with us and she could press on the gas pedal and let the car go in reverse while we try to pull it
SAI (talk_explain_neutral)
What do you think?
CEDRIC (talk_think_neutral)
We can try
choice “Pull car out” {
@follow KEITH to screen right in zone 2 AND CEDRIC walks to screen left in zone 2 AND KAI walks to upscreen left in zone 2 AND SAI walks to upscreen left in zone 2 AND RAY walks to upscreen right in zone 2
@KEITH spot 1.208 14 -60 in zone 3
@RAY spot 1.280 79 -20 in zone 3
@KEITH spot 1.280 0 -98 in zone 2
@SAI spot 1.280 270 -30 in zone 1
@KEITH faces left AND RAY faces left
@overlay STRING2 create
@overlay STRING2 opacity 1
@overlay STRING2 rotates 225 anchor point 0 0
@overlay STRING2 scales to 2.145 2.145
@overlay STRING2 shifts to 275 364 in zone 3
@overlay STRING2 moves to layer 2
@overlay STRING3 create from STRING2
@overlay STRING3 opacity 1
@overlay STRING3 rotates 325 anchor point 0 0
@overlay STRING3 scales to 1.985 1.985
@overlay STRING3 shifts to 151 -89 in zone 2
@overlay STRING3 moves to layer 1
@KEITH is idle_box_carry_neutral_loop AND RAY is idle_box_carry_neutral_loop AND CEDRIC is idle_box_carry_neutral_loop AND SAI is idle_box_carry_neutral_loop
KEITH (talk_box_carry_neutral)
Kai, while the car is a bit steady, I need you to go in, put the car in reverse and press on the gas pedal
@remove KAI
@pause for 3.5
@RAY is walk_box_neutral_loop AND KEITH is walk_box_neutral_loop AND CEDRIC is walk_neutral_backward_loop AND SAI is walk_neutral_backward_loop
sound car_breakdown
@overlay CAR TRUNK RED shifts to 58 -156 in zone 2
CEDRIC (talk_box_carry_neutral)
No…
KEITH (talk_box_carry_neutral)
If we lose the car, then we lose Kai as well
@overlay CAR TRUNK RED shifts to 58 -156 in zone 2
@overlay CAR TRUNK RED clear
RAY (talk_sad)
It’s nt use, we lost the car, its too strong for us
@CEDRIC is tinker_stand_neutral_loop_rear AND KEITH is tinker_kneel_neutral_loop
CEDRIC (talk_explain_neutral)
Sai and Ray, watch the ropes, me and Keith are going to get Kai out of the water and out of the car
sound body_splash
@remove CEDRIC
sound body_splash
@remove KEITH
EXT. BLUE - DAY
@KEITH changes into KEITH_nude
@CEDRIC changes into CEDRIC_nude
@CEDRIC stands screen center AND KEITH stands screen right
@CEDRIC is talk_treadwater_sad AND KEITH is talk_treadwater_sad
@KEITH spot 1.280 264 521
@CEDRIC spot 1.280 150 512
@CEDRIC is idle_treadwater_worried_loop AND KEITH is idle_treadwater_worried_loop
@KEITH walks to spot 1.280 94 262 AND KEITH does it while talk_treadwater_sad
@CEDRIC walks to spot 1.280 237 258 AND CEDRIC does it while talk_treadwater_sad
@pause for 2
@CEDRIC faces left AND CEDRIC is swim_loop_rear AND KEITH faces left AND KEITH is swim_loop_rear
@pause for 2
@CEDRIC exits right AND CEDRIC does it while swim_loop_rear AND KEITH exits right AND KEITH does it while swim_loop_rear
@overlay EXT. LUXURY CAR AQUA PROFILE - NIGHT create
@overlay EXT. LUXURY CAR AQUA PROFILE - NIGHT opacity 1
@overlay EXT. LUXURY CAR AQUA PROFILE - NIGHT rotates 315 anchor point 0 0
@CEDRIC enters from left to back far left AND CEDRIC does it while swim_loop_rear AND KEITH enters from left to back left AND KEITH does it while swim_loop_rear THEN CEDRIC faces left
@KEITH spot 0.668 81 353
@CEDRIC spot 0.649 208 363
@KEITH is punch_fight_give_angry_loop AND CEDRIC is punch_fight_give_angry_loop AND CEDRIC moves to layer 4
sound glass_shatter
@KAI stands back left
@KAI spot 0.625 159 533
@KAI is idle_treadwater_worried_loop AND KAI moves to layer 4 THEN CEDRIC faces right AND CEDRIC is holdwaist_give_idle_rear AND CEDRIC moves to layer 5 AND KEITH is idle_treadwater_worried_loop
@CEDRIC spot 0.649 155 362
EXT. COUNTRY ROMANTIC WATERFALL - DAY with effect RAIN
@KEITH enters from right to upscreen right AND CEDRIC enters from right to screen right AND KAI enters from right to screen center THEN KEITH is idle_exhausted_cramp_loop AND KAI is idle_exhausted_loop AND CEDRIC is idle_exhausted_cramp_loop
CEDRIC (talk_exhausted)
Those i****
KEITH (talk_exhausted)
I told them to watch the ropes and all they did was leave us
KEITH (talk_exhausted)
At least, they left our clothes and our school stuff
@CEDRIC is dustoff_neutral_loop AND KEITH is dustoff_neutral_loop
@KEITH changes into KEITH_car-clothes
@CEDRIC changes into CEDRIC_car-clothes
CEDRIC (talk_exhausted)
We need to get back
} “Leave the car” {
KEITH (talk_explain_neutral)
The car is gone anyway, lets just leave it and go back home
@KEITH exits left AND CEDRIC exits left AND KAI exits left AND SAI exits left AND RAY exits left
EXT. PHILADELPHIA HOUSE - NIGHT with effect
@KEITH enters from left to screen right AND CEDRIC enters from left to screen left AND KAI enters from left to screen center AND SAI enters from left to upscreen left AND RAY enters from left to upscreen right
RAY (talk_armscrossed_condescending_loop)
Not that I’m complaining
RAY (talk_complain_angry)
However, I don’t want or need to be here, I’m going back to my house
RAY (talk_complain_angry)
I never asked for this, I didn’t even want to be in the car with this bar girl
@SAI is listen_nod_happy_loop AND CEDRIC is idle_armscrossed_angry_loop AND KEITH is idle_armscrossed_angry_loop
RAY (talk_complain_angry)
So, I’m leaving
RAY (talk_complain_angry)
Sai, are you with me?
SAI (talk_agree_happy)
Yup
SAI (talk_gossip)
If you are going to continue giving her rides, I don’t think I continue
SAI (talk_gossip)
We will find another carpool ride
@SAI exits left AND RAY exits left THEN CEDRIC is deepbreath AND KEITH is deepbreath
}
} “Go home nude” {
} “Go to cabin” {
}
ok i did a quick skim through and spotted this:
Happy Holidays to both of you as well 
