Im working on a story and I tried directing a choice
and got the ERROR unexpected block
can someone help me and tell me what is wrong with it?
choice
“This is not an apocalypse movie”{
readerMessage Oliver appreciates you for taking his side
@MC starts talk_armscrossed_neutral_loop AND ASHLEY starts idle_armscrossed_awkward_loop AND OLIVER starts flirt_coy
MC
Well this isnt an apocalypse movie
@MC starts talk_armscrossed_neutral_loop
MC
I think the grocery store is a good idea
@MC starts idle_loop AND ASHLEY starts sigh_disappointed
@pause for a beat
@ASHLEY starts talk_apathetic
ASHLEY
Ai ai captain
@MC starts talk_awkward_loop
MC
Shouldnt we get a Weapon first?
@ASHLEY starts talk_armscrossed_shrug_neutral
ASHLEY
I mean… does a pair of keys count?
@OLIVER starts talk_armsraised_neutral
OLIVER
If we can find a Newspaper i can make an Millwall Brick
@transition fade out black
EXT. HOLLYWOOD MUSIC STORE - DAY
}
“Ashley is right”{
readerMessage Ashley appreciates you for taking her side
@MC starts talk_armscrossed_neutral_loop AND ASHLEY starts flirt_shy AND OLIVER starts idle_handsonhips_neutral_loop
MC
I think we should go to the cafe
@MC starts idle_armscrossed_neutral_loop AND OLIVER starts talk_neutral
OLIVER
Youre probably right
@MC starts talk_awkward_loop
MC
Shouldnt we get a Weapon first?
@ASHLEY starts talk_armscrossed_shrug_neutral
ASHLEY
I mean… does a pair of keys count?
@OLIVER starts talk_armsraised_neutral
OLIVER
If we can find a Newspaper i can make an Millwall Brick
@transition fade out black
EXT. HOLLYWOOD MUSIC STORE - DAY
}
