Error with mannequins

I have an error. I’ve never done this before, so help would be greatly appreciated; error means there’s an error.

INT. WALKINCLOSET - DAY
@zoom reset
@MANNEQUIN 1 spot 1.118 76 92 in zone 2 AND MANNEQUIN 1 starts primp_neutral
@MANNEQUIN 2 spot 1.118 166 92 in zone 2 AND MANNEQUIN 2 starts think_rubchin
@MANNEQUIN 3 spot 1.118 259 90 in zone 2 AND MANNEQUIN 3 starts idle_handsonhips_neutral_loop
@CELESTIAL enters from left to screen center
label changing_out
CELESTIAL (think_rubchin)
(New mission to Earth. Gotta be trendy right?)
(What should I wear?)
@pan to zone 2
@zoom on 320 342 to 211% in 0.5
NARRATOR (CELESTIAL)
This one?
choice
error “Next outfit -->”{
@zoom on 489 342 to 211% in 0.5
NARRATOR (CELESTIAL)
This one?
choice
“Next outfit -->”{
@zoom on 640 373 to 211% in 0.5
}
“Previous outfit <–”{
@zoom on 489 342 to 211%in 0.5
}
“Choose outfit”{
@cut to zone 1
@zoom reset
NARRATOR (CELESTIAL)
(Am I sure I want this one?)
choice
“Yessssss, gurrll”{
}
“Uh uh, no thank U”{
goto changing_out
}
}
“Choose outfit 1”{
@cut to zone 1
@zoom reset
NARRATOR (CELESTIAL)
(Am I sure I want this one?)
choice
“Yessssss, gurrll”{
}
“Uh uh, no thank U”{
goto changing_out
}
}

You forgot the closing }

Also, get rid of the second word choice or add dialogue before it if you intend to keep the choice right after

There are a couple issues I see. Even if they don’t show up as error, the changes may help
1: change the @MANNEQUIN parts at the begging to &MANNEQUIN. Then they will do it at same time she walks in.
2: You must say @pan to zone 2 in S . You didn’t specify the time it takes to get there. If you’re just tryna get there immediately, use @cut to zone 2
3: Remove the second choice. Right before he second next outfit, there’s another choice which is messing you up.

Enter this code right after

(What should I wear?)
@pan to zone 2
@zoom on 320 342 to 211% in 0.5

Here’s the code I wrote out that should work now:

label outfit1
NARRATOR (CELESTIAL)
This one?
choice
“Next outfit -->”{
@pan to 489 342 in 0.5
goto outfit2
}
“Choose outfit”{
goto chosen_outfit
}

label outfit2
NARRATOR (CELESTIAL)
This one?
choice
“Next outfit -->”{
@pan to 640 373 in 0.5
@goto outfit3
}
“Previous outfit <-“{
@pan to 320 342 in 0.5
@goto outfit1
}
“Choose outfit”{
goto chosen_outfit
}

label outfit3
NARRATOR (CELESTIAL)
This one?
choice
“Previous outfit <-“{
@pan to 640 373 in 0.5
@goto outfit2
}
“Choose outfit”{
goto chosen_outfit
}

label chosen_outfit
@cut to zone 1
@zoom reset
NARRATOR (CELESTIAL)
(Am I sure I want this one?)
choice
“Yessssss, gurrll”{
goto continuestory
}
“Uh uh, no thank U”{
@cut to 320 342 in zone 2
goto outfit1
}

label continuestory

If this still doesn’t work try this instead (in the same spot as the other code):

label outfit1
NARRATOR (CELESTIAL)
This one?
choice
“Next outfit -->”{
@zoom on 489 342 to 211% in 0.5
goto outfit2
}
“Choose outfit”{
goto chosen_outfit
}

label outfit2
NARRATOR (CELESTIAL)
This one?
choice
“Next outfit -->”{
@zoom on 640 373 to 211% in 0.5
@goto outfit3
}
“Previous outfit <-“{
@zoom on 320 342 to 211% in 0.5
@goto outfit1
}
“Choose outfit”{
goto chosen_outfit
}

label outfit3
NARRATOR (CELESTIAL)
This one?
choice
“Previous outfit <-“{
@zoom on 640 373 to 211% in 0.5
@goto outfit2
}
“Choose outfit”{
goto chosen_outfit
}

label chosen_outfit
@cut to zone 1
@zoom reset
NARRATOR (CELESTIAL)
(Am I sure I want this one?)
choice
“Yessssss, gurrll”{
goto continuestory
}
“Uh uh, no thank U”{
@cut to 320 342 in zone 2
goto outfit1
}

label continuestory

Could you go ahead and give me the whole code I need to do so I know what to do in the future.

INT. WALKINCLOSET - DAY
@zoom reset
@MANNEQUIN 1 spot 1.118 76 92 in zone 2 AND MANNEQUIN 1 starts primp_neutral
@MANNEQUIN 2 spot 1.118 166 92 in zone 2 AND MANNEQUIN 2 starts think_rubchin
@MANNEQUIN 3 spot 1.118 259 90 in zone 2 AND MANNEQUIN 3 starts idle_handsonhips_neutral_loop
@CELESTIAL enters from left to screen center
label changing_out
CELESTIAL (think_rubchin)
(New mission to Earth. Gotta be trendy right?)
(What should I wear?)
@pan to zone 2
@zoom on 320 342 to 211% in 0.5

label outfit1
NARRATOR (CELESTIAL)
This one?
choice
“Next outfit -->”{
@pan to 489 342 in 0.5
goto outfit2
}
“Choose outfit”{
goto chosen_outfit
}

label outfit2
NARRATOR (CELESTIAL)
This one?
choice
“Next outfit -->”{
@pan to 640 373 in 0.5
@goto outfit3
}
“Previous outfit <-“{
@pan to 320 342 in 0.5
@goto outfit1
}
“Choose outfit”{
goto chosen_outfit
}

label outfit3
NARRATOR (CELESTIAL)
This one?
choice
“Previous outfit <-“{
@pan to 640 373 in 0.5
@goto outfit2
}
“Choose outfit”{
goto chosen_outfit
}

label chosen_outfit
@cut to zone 1
@zoom reset
NARRATOR (CELESTIAL)
(Am I sure I want this one?)
choice
“Yessssss, gurrll”{
goto continuestory
}
“Uh uh, no thank U”{
@cut to 320 342 in zone 2
goto changing_out
}

label continuestory

If that one doesnt work, try this

INT. WALKINCLOSET - DAY
@zoom reset
@MANNEQUIN 1 spot 1.118 76 92 in zone 2 AND MANNEQUIN 1 starts primp_neutral
@MANNEQUIN 2 spot 1.118 166 92 in zone 2 AND MANNEQUIN 2 starts think_rubchin
@MANNEQUIN 3 spot 1.118 259 90 in zone 2 AND MANNEQUIN 3 starts idle_handsonhips_neutral_loop
@CELESTIAL enters from left to screen center
label changing_out
CELESTIAL (think_rubchin)
(New mission to Earth. Gotta be trendy right?)
(What should I wear?)
@pan to zone 2
@zoom on 320 342 to 211% in 0.5

label outfit1
NARRATOR (CELESTIAL)
This one?
choice
“Next outfit -->”{
@zoom on 489 342 to 211% in 0.5
goto outfit2
}
“Choose outfit”{
goto chosen_outfit
}

label outfit2
NARRATOR (CELESTIAL)
This one?
choice
“Next outfit -->”{
@zoom on 640 373 to 211% in 0.5
@goto outfit3
}
“Previous outfit <-“{
@zoom on 320 342 to 211% in 0.5
@goto outfit1
}
“Choose outfit”{
goto chosen_outfit
}

label outfit3
NARRATOR (CELESTIAL)
This one?
choice
“Previous outfit <-“{
@zoom on 640 373 to 211% in 0.5
@goto outfit2
}
“Choose outfit”{
goto chosen_outfit
}

label chosen_outfit
@cut to zone 1
@zoom reset
NARRATOR (CELESTIAL)
(Am I sure I want this one?)
choice
“Yessssss, gurrll”{
goto continuestory
}
“Uh uh, no thank U”{
@cut to 320 342 in zone 2
goto changing_out
}

label continuestory

thanks.

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no problemo :stuck_out_tongue:

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