Facetime script help

[Jazzimay25]

I am trying to get this face time script to really look as if these two characters are face timing, but can’t get it exactly how I need for it to look. Hoping for a little help here. Please and thank you!

INT. GHAMALI BEDROOM - NIGHT
@cut to zone 2

@zoom 471 486 to 240% in 0

@MARIAH stands screen center

    NARRATOR (MARIAH)
An all evenings are spent the same way.
Speaking with the man who just so happens to be my mate.

@MARIAH starts read_phone_neutral_loop

@pause for 1

@MARIAH starts text_phone_neutral_loop

@pause for .5

    MARIAH (film_phone_energetic_loop)
Hey baby!!

INT. CEO OFFICE - DAY with PHONE DAY
@zoom reset

@DOMINIC changes into DOMINIC_suit_1

@DOMINIC spot 2.117 154 -398
@DOMINIC faces left

    DOMINIC (talk_flirt_charming)
Hola mi amor.

    NARRATOR (MARIAH)
His accent makes me melt every time

    DOMINIC (talk_neutral)
    How was school?

INT. GHAMALI BEDROOM - NIGHT
@cut to zone 2

@zoom v471 486 to 240% in 0

@MARIAH stands screen center

@MARIAH starts read_phone_neutral_loop

@pause for 1
MARIAH (talk_sheepish_rubneck)
It’s been good.

    MARIAH (talk_agree_happy)
    I feel like I'm getting on okay.

INT. CEO OFFICE - DAY with PHONE DAY
@zoom reset

@DOMINIC changes into DOMINIC_suit_1

@DOMINIC spot 2.117 154 -398
@DOMINIC faces left

    DOMINIC (talk_neutral)
    That's great amor.
    
    DOMINIC (talk_flirt_charming)
    Ready for my visit next week?

INT. GHAMALI BEDROOM - NIGHT
@cut to zone 2

@zoom 471 486 to 240% in 0

@MARIAH stands screen center

@MARIAH starts read_phone_neutral_loop

@pause for 1

    MARIAH (talk_excited_happy)
    I can't belive its already time for your presentation.
    
    MARIAH (talk_explain_neutral)
    I know your going to do well.
    
    MARIAH (talk_explain_neutral)
    I'll be working at the registration table, but by end before your presentation begins.

INT. CEO OFFICE - DAY with PHONE DAY
@zoom reset

@DOMINIC changes into DOMINIC_suit_1

@DOMINIC spot 2.117 154 -398
@DOMINIC faces left

    DOMINIC (talk_excited_happy)
    That's awesome, after let me take you out on a offical date?

INT. GHAMALI BEDROOM - NIGHT
@cut to zone 2

@zoom 471 486 to 240% in 0

@MARIAH stands screen center

@MARIAH starts read_phone_neutral_loop

@pause for 1

    MARIAH (talk_sheepish_rubneck)
    That sounds great.

[Farah_DeSantis]

[Jazzimay25]

Yea I watched the video and mines didn’t end up how his looked.

[Farah_DeSantis]

ok let me check your script then

[Farah_DeSantis]

please show me your phone overlay

[Jazzimay25]

[Farah_DeSantis]

so far I see there several mistakes

you missed “on” in the zoom - its in all your zooms as it seems - do not write the zooms by hand simpy use the copy\ button and copy it from stace to your script - this will avoid you will mix up the code

@zoom on 471 486 to 240% in 0

[Jazzimay25]

Oh man thanks so much I didn’t even notice that!

[Farah_DeSantis]

I would do it like that:

INT. GHAMALI BEDROOM - NIGHT
&cut to zone 2
&zoom on 543 343 to 147% in 0
&MARIAH stands screen center
&MARIAH faces right
NARRATOR (MARIAH)
An all evenings are spent the same way.
Speaking with the man who just so happens to be my mate.
@MARIAH starts read_phone_neutral_loop
@pause for 1
@MARIAH starts text_phone_neutral_loop
@pause for 3
MARIAH (film_phone_energetic_loop)
Hey baby!!

INT. CEO OFFICE - DAY with PHONE DAY to 1.540 0 0 at layer 10
&zoom reset
@DOMINIC changes into DOMINIC_suit_1
&DOMINIC spot 2.117 154 -398
&DOMINIC faces left
DOMINIC (talk_flirt_charming)
Hola mi amor.
&DOMINIC is flirt_wink_happy
NARRATOR (MARIAH)
His accent makes me melt every time

    DOMINIC (talk_neutral)
How was school?

INT. GHAMALI BEDROOM - NIGHT
&cut to zone 2
&zoom on 488 415 to 323% in 0
&MARIAH stands screen center
&MARIAH faces right
@MARIAH starts read_phone_neutral_loop
@pause for 1
MARIAH (talk_sheepish_rubneck)
It’s been good.
MARIAH (talk_agree_happy)
I feel like I’m getting on okay.

INT. CEO OFFICE - DAY with PHONE DAY to 1.540 0 0 at layer 10
&zoom reset
&DOMINIC spot 2.117 154 -398
&DOMINIC faces left
DOMINIC (talk_neutral)
That’s great amor.
DOMINIC (talk_flirt_charming)
Ready for my visit next week?

INT. GHAMALI BEDROOM - NIGHT
&cut to zone 2
&zoom on 488 415 to 323% in 0
&MARIAH stands screen center
&MARIAH faces right
@MARIAH starts read_phone_neutral_loop
@pause for 1
MARIAH (talk_excited_happy)
I can’t belive its already time for your presentation.
MARIAH (talk_explain_neutral)
I know your going to do well.
MARIAH (talk_explain_neutral)
I’ll be working at the registration table, but by end before your presentation begins.

INT. CEO OFFICE - DAY with PHONE DAY to 1.540 0 0 at layer 10
&zoom reset
&DOMINIC spot 2.117 154 -398
&DOMINIC faces left
DOMINIC (talk_excited_happy)
That’s awesome, after let me take you out on a offical date?

INT. GHAMALI BEDROOM - NIGHT
&cut to zone 2
&zoom on 488 415 to 323% in 0
&MARIAH stands screen center
&MARIAH faces right

@MARIAH starts read_phone_neutral_loop

@pause for 1

    MARIAH (talk_sheepish_rubneck)
That sounds great.

[Jazzimay25]

I see. Thanks again!