Faking It Honest read

Hey I’m happy to say my first story faking it is out and I want a honest review for it.


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Nathan is everything Aspen hates. But what happens when she agrees to fake date him because she needs the money. {Full CC} {Art Scenes}

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Faking It: Episode 1

Runtime: 1 minute 24 seconds, excluding CC.

Congratulations on publishing your first story.

I would recommend making your episodes much longer. 1 minute and 24 seconds is not enough time for someone to become invested in your story, in my opinion.

Below there is a list of things that occurred throughout almost all, if not every, scene.

  • Grammatical Errors
  • Lack of Punctuation
  • Lack of Idle Animations
  • Character’s talking animations overlap with one another.
  • Bad speechbubble placement

I would definitely recommend fixing those. For some, myself included, grammatical errors can turn a reader away. In addition, fixing the animations will make your story more visually appealing.

Also, you asked people to follow your Instagram, but I didn’t see your Instagram name anywhere.

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Story:faking it
Love Interest:1
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Art scenes :white_check_mark:
Description⬇️
Nathan is everything Aspen hates. But she agrees to fake date him because she needs the money.
Instagram: jazz.epsidoe01

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Story:faking it
Love Interest:1
Full CC :white_check_mark:
Art scenes :white_check_mark:
Description⬇️
Nathan is everything Aspen hates. But she agrees to fake date him because she needs the money.
Instagram: jazz.epsidoe01


Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5996548597678080

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I’ll check it out

Thank you

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Story:faking it
Love Interest:1
Full CC :white_check_mark:
Art scenes :white_check_mark:
Limelight
Description⬇️
Nathan is everything Aspen hates. But she agrees to fake date him because she needs the money.
Instagram: jazz.epsidoe01

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Hey…do you need proofreader or reviewer ??

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Yes I would love that.

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