Hey I’m happy to say my first story faking it is out and I want a honest review for it.
Description
Nathan is everything Aspen hates. But what happens when she agrees to fake date him because she needs the money. {Full CC} {Art Scenes}
Hey I’m happy to say my first story faking it is out and I want a honest review for it.
Description
Nathan is everything Aspen hates. But what happens when she agrees to fake date him because she needs the money. {Full CC} {Art Scenes}
Faking It: Episode 1
Runtime: 1 minute 24 seconds, excluding CC.
Congratulations on publishing your first story.
I would recommend making your episodes much longer. 1 minute and 24 seconds is not enough time for someone to become invested in your story, in my opinion.
Below there is a list of things that occurred throughout almost all, if not every, scene.
I would definitely recommend fixing those. For some, myself included, grammatical errors can turn a reader away. In addition, fixing the animations will make your story more visually appealing.
Also, you asked people to follow your Instagram, but I didn’t see your Instagram name anywhere.
Story:faking it
Love Interest:1
Full CC
Art scenes
Description⬇️
Nathan is everything Aspen hates. But she agrees to fake date him because she needs the money.
Instagram: jazz.epsidoe01
Story:faking it
Love Interest:1
Full CC
Art scenes
Description⬇️
Nathan is everything Aspen hates. But she agrees to fake date him because she needs the money.
Instagram: jazz.epsidoe01
I’ll check it out
Thank you
Oh, and if you want another more reveiws, here’s a list of shops that do them:
Story:faking it
Love Interest:1
Full CC
Art scenes
Limelight
Description⬇️
Nathan is everything Aspen hates. But she agrees to fake date him because she needs the money.
Instagram: jazz.epsidoe01
Hey…do you need proofreader or reviewer ??
Yes I would love that.
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