Fantastical Contest Entries Only-Review Requests

Hi lovelies!

I wasn’t prepared for the amount of review requests I received. I do love reviewing stories but given my new schedule, I decided that I’m only reviewing stories that are entered into the Episode Contests.

So any genre is accepted but I do have some rules.

  1. Your story must be published on the platform

  2. Your story must be a contest entry so the title should be whatever Episode states

  3. I’m only reading the first episode simply because I want to give reviews back ASAP. My one read will NOT affect your ranking. It only matters if a ton of people stop reading past episode 1.

  4. I’m going to be publishing reviews regardless of their score both on the forum and on my instagram. If you have a low score, please don’t be discouraged. In most cases, it was a good idea that wasn’t executed to the best of its ability, in my opinion. I do not bash people. If it’s a story I absolutely can’t read then I’ll let you know.

  5. Following policy: My instagram is public, so if you’d like to follow me, you can.

  6. 2nd Review Request: Due to time constraints, I’m unable to review stories twice.

  7. I don’t evaluate cover art or special art as I feel that’s too subjective.

  8. I post the review here and on my Instagram page for published reviews only so please be ok with that when requesting a review. My Instagram page is @penspaperanddreams. If you want a shoutout, please include your Instagram.

  9. This post is only for the fantastical contest entries. After that contest ends, I’ll create another thread for the next contest. Please don’t ask for review requests outside of this contest.

Sorry about all the changes! This review structure won’t change :blush:


Bump. Would love to read some entries!

I have just published my story. This is the link would love to get feedback’s. My instagram profile is @shuba_the_real_me_

Hi! I’d love to read your story. Thanks for sharing! I’ll post my review here and instagram

:grin: Thanks much :slight_smile:

Your review will be posted soon

Hey there, @Penspaperanddreams1! I just glanced through all the rules and I hope you’re still taking requests, because I’d love some honest feedback on my story! Here are the details:

Title: Fantastical: Silhouettes
Author: aprilish
Genre: Romance/Fantasy
Style: Ink
Blurb: Arion’s ready to risk it all to make her dreams come true. Leslie sees him every day, yet fails to recognize who he is. Watch them fall in love…without ever meeting each other.
My Instagram: @aprilish.episode (And yes, I’d love a shoutout!)

Thanking you in advance! Hope you like my story! :rofl: :orange_heart:

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Hi yes I am still accepting! Thanks!

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Name of story: Fantastical: Silhouettes
Author: Aprilish
Genre: Romance/Fantasy

Summary of story: Arion’s ready to risk it all to make her dreams come true. Leslie sees him every day, yet fails to recognize who he is. Watch them fall in love…without ever meeting each other.

Link to story: Episode Writer Portal


Visuals-I think that was done well. I enjoyed the use of overlays and backgrounds. There was a lot of customization so I think readers will enjoy that as well. (4/4)

Story: It is interesting but I didn’t feel that it was fantasy related at all which is the contest theme. So I felt a bit disappointed by that. That being said I really like how you dove right into the story and started it off with something shocking. Immediately engaged my interest. Definitely potential here. (2/4)

Choices- I feel like this was done well. Plenty of options, especially for a first chapter. (4/4)

Language- There weren’t any errors. (4/4)

Total score: 14/16
*This review was also posted on Instagram.

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Thank you so much for your feedback! :slightly_smiling_face::two_hearts:

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Current status: I have one that will be posted this week and another on the waiting list. Feel free to comment here, DM or also reach out to me on instagram

Hey, is the reviewing still ON? because I’m waiting for my review to be done and of course a shout out on Instagram. My account is @shuba_the_real_me_ . I follow you too, Thank you.

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Hi! Yes it is! Your review is done and expect it this weekend!

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I just published mine two days ago… Looking for feedback!
Title: Fantastical: SHC
Author: Jayda M.
Genre: Fantasy
Style: INK
Instagram: @epi.jayda
Description: The SHC controls all beings with meta-human abilities. Unfortunately, Amaya is one of them. After faking her death, how long is it until they find out she’s still alive?


Here is my story link;

Thanks much :slight_smile:

Hi! Your review is below and is also on instagram. Thanks for sharing your story!

Title: Fantastical: Eternal
Author: @shuba_the_real_me_
Genre: Fantasy

Description: What will happen when you find out about you superpowers? Also two men have caught their eyes on you. Find out. CC


Visuals- I think the directing is perfect and I really think the limelight style compliments this story. It’s visually gorgeous. I would have liked to have had some fantasy element in the first chapter though.

Story- I enjoyed the premise and think the story is unique. I’m really interested to know more about their powers and how the fantasy side will manifest itself. The writing is strong and interesting and I felt myself immediately wanting to go to the next chapter.

Language- It’s a little stiff in some parts but otherwise engaging and without any major grammatical or spelling errors.

Choices- I think this was done quite well. I felt engaged.

Overall Score: 14/16

Hello, I would like to have a review for my story :blush: It’s caalled Fantastical: The God’s Escort by Royal.chic99. It’s also my instagram handle :slight_smile:

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Hi! Can you include the description and link here please?


To show the connection of the two realms, a God asks you to be his escort. What happens when Zeus has underlying plans to it? (CC & 3 Styles include Classic, Ink, and Limelight)

Hello! Could you review my story?

:heavy_check_mark:Title: Fantastical: Single Species

:heavy_check_mark:Author: April

:heavy_check_mark:Share Link:

:heavy_check_mark:Description: After a tragic event in your school leaves you blind, a mysterious nymph attempts to revive her species…starting with you. (Customize Characters)

:heavy_check_mark:Instagram Handle: Don’t have one

Thanks a lot!