Fantastical Criminals!


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My story: Fantastical Criminals
Author: Saga Instalment
Genre: Fantasy
Story style: Limelight
Description: When you have been captured by a powerful King because of a prophecy, you with the help of the rebellion must end his evil ways. However, this is not an ordinary tale.
Episodes: 3 (more episodes coming soon!)
Twitter: @sagainstalment https://twitter.com/sagainstalment?lang=en-gb
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4657908394033152

:sparkles: I will happily do R4R guys! So if you leave your story title down below and I will try to read as many as I can! Let’s help each other! :sparkles:

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i would be op for r4r. but honeslty i wanna read it anyway it sound very interesting and i have been looking for a good fantasy story

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I would love to read Retrace. Loving the fact that it is two stories in one!

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Hi, would you like to do a read for read? Your story looks interesting? I’ll screenshot when I am done. :blush:
Title: Bad Behavior
Author: Aaliyah Ali
Genre: Drama
Episodes: 4 (more to come)
Summary: How will Alana, Lucas, Ryan and Rachel survive their past and conquer their future…
If bad behavior follows them everywhere, they go?
cc, and choices available!
Style: Limelight
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5778189056540672

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Of course, I am willing to do a R4R. I’m looking for new stories to read all the time. :heart_eyes:

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I want to say, I am not sure if this is your first story, but It’s great, I like it. I’ll keep it in my favorites. It had me intrigued the entire time. I do have some feedback for you.

Feedback

• Make sure to add periods at the end of each sentences. Majority of the sentences lacked that.
• When you use overlays at the start of the scene they look a bit glitchy — to avoid that. try this.
INT. BACKGROUND - DAY
&overlay NAME create
use & instead of @
• Same thing goes when the characters popping into the scene, to avoid characters popping into the scene do this —
INT. BACKGROUNDNAME - DAY
&CHAR stands screen position
or
&CHAR spot #
That way they’re already standing in spot when the scene transitions in.

Other than those minor feedbacks, the story is great, keep up the great work. I can’t wait to read more!
By the way, the way you use overlays are amazing!!!

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Thank you, I am currently watching AD’s to get more passes to read yours! About the feedback, when I was using & instead of @ sometimes the overlay’s just would not show up in the preview and I would panic but as long as I know they are showing up I’ll change them! However thank you! :heart_eyes:

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No problem :heartpulse: & okay!
It’s something you have to fix right away, I would say just play around with it maybe in the later episodes.

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Hello, we could do read for read if you want ? :slight_smile:

But first: For a guaranteed feedback fill in the form

Link below :

Here is the description of my story :

Title : NEVERLAND
Author : Maggy

Genre : Romance/Fantasy
Style : Limelight
Number of episodes : 3 (more episodes coming soon)
Instagram : maggy.episode

Description : Jiselle loves her grandmother’s intriguing fantasy story about a world called ‘Neverland’ that she wishes to discover. Will her wish comes true? Find out!

Link : http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4898085022859264

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I have submitted a form to you! I’m looking forward to giving this a read! Been looking for some more fantasy stories to read on my shelf! :sparkles:

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I’d love to do a r4r with you!
Story: Sorry, Wrong Number
Genre: Thriller
Summary: “And that’s how we’ll get rid of the body. Sorry, wrong number.”
When a text is sent to the wrong person, it leads to a race against time to prevent a murder. TEXT BASED
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5933958626344960

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I am a big fan when it comes to mystery stories so I will be happy to do a R4R. :sparkles:

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Awesome!

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hey there i’d love to do a r4r if yiu’re interested! :grin:

Title: Mystery on Hanging Hill Lane
Author: Marshmallow O.
Genre: Mystery, Romance, Comedy
Style: Limelight
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6250660385652736
Summary: It’s a race against time as you and your friends try to escape the mysterious sleepover that you were invited to… Read to uncover the Mystery on Hanging Hill Lane.

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Chapters: 4 (More to come)

Create your own characters and Choices Matter!:blush:

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Of course I would love to do a R4R. :sparkles:

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Thank you I hope you’ll like my story ! And I’ll let you know when I’m done with yours :blush:.

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Your story looks really interesting, and I have a hard time staying away from fantasy, so I’ll happily give it a read!

If you’re interested, you could check out my story. It’s more of a sci-fi, but perhaps you’re into that :grin:

Title: Exodus V
Author: Pentorama
Genre: sci-fi, action/adventure
Style: LL

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Description: When an evil force threatens to touch down on Earth, David is given a chance to turn his life around and make a difference. David must help his new group of friends prepare for the onslaught of the evil Rogue. David, however, will soon realize all of the lies, confusion, and heartbreak that comes with the task of saving the world.

Status: Three episodes and ongoing
Release schedule: Wednesdays (I’m releasing the next episode tomorrow)
Link: Exodus V
IG: shane.pentorama

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Luckily I am also a fan of Sci-fi so of course I will read your story and add it to the list! :sparkles:

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Thanks for reading!
Hoped you enjoyed it! :slightly_smiling_face:

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