I don’t know about instant princess, but episode isn’t just for entertainment, they’re trying to get your money as well. (I don’t know how this is going to work for this one) Anyways, they’re focusing on what the majority of people like (the forums is still quite small and many readers like the love triangles, love squares, love quintagles…)
So far, what I’ve seen is that there are currently a few love interests and Dalton is consistently in the lead, no matter what you do.
Fine, I won’t argue with that, because many readers like this, authors have a bias over a love interest, and well, it’s not my decision to make.Other than that, this happens in a lot of stories, so I can’t argue in this case for something in many stories.
As you can see, I don’t really like the plot line either. SO far, here’s what I see:
A girl meets a hot gu… ahem… man, and they conceive a plot to embarass someone.
Here’s my first problem- no matter how mean she was in high school, no matter how it’s your birthday…
these are not valid excuses to ruin someone’s birthday party. She’s a waitress there. She was HIRED. Therefore this is a horrible thing to do and ruining someone’s birthday- stealing their wardrobe outfits- is even worst. ( according to choices you can choose) Then, the hot man and her go on the beach and strip and sleep.
Fine, it’s a little romantic, I suppose, but that went really fast. From sabotaging a birthday to- then I went to the beach and stripped. A little random, but I suppose we each have our own opinions.
(Oh and in the process, he reveals she’s a princess, and when she asks him why they didn’t get her back sooner, he says because he wanted to see if her life was horrible enough to go)
Here’s the major problem, in my opinion, The plot moves along much too fast, and the excuse is also horrible. Fine, say they watched from a distance and decided to see if she had a family, and was very happy.
Alright, I guess I can’t complain with that.
HOWEVER, have they mentioned her family, even once? Here’s a major problem with many stories: The main character’s (Unless in high school) do not have any parents, (or they do but are never mentioned or seen) or if they are there, when they do horrible things they aren’t there to reprimand their children, or if they do, they’re dead, strict or… anyways- I might be wrong, again, it’s all up to you.
She says yes (without her family’s consent?)
The next day, she leaves for her homeland (and comes with her best friend, who also didn’t have parental consent, I’m afraid.)
This process was fast and confusing- it went from the beach to showing the palace. Fine, if you at least explained how they got there, I would be alright. But they didn’t, and it was too rushed. How did she get into this country?
Then she meets the villain, who is somehow allowed into the palace at all times and at every ball (this does not make sense) Other than that, there’s a lot of drama between her suitors (which, in their defence, makes the story longer and shows a personal side of them)
Still, I haven’t watched many episodes, but Dalton (the hot man) is always a little in the lead.
Yes, you might be thinking, I critiqued it too much. So here are words of praise:
I am pleased they added diversity (not only in love interests colour, obviously, but their gender preferences, such as Jada)
They showed some of the pressure she had (But, not trying to advertise, but I do enjoy the story from Choices: Desire and Decorum, much better)
They showed both the good sides and bad sides of the characters.
And I think, they did well in adding those new outfits, those hairstyles, the backgrounds, Craxi’s lips- the animations, the horses- all very well, and spectacular to the eye. Now this is the reason why I will continue reading it- I love the aesthetic.
Now, if you’re wondering whether they’ll come to us, I’m not sure, but I see many hairstyles are also versions of ink and I do love Sir Asher’s hairstyle,
Last time they added new animations and dresses, and all that, it was for a contest (dirty dancing), so perhaps they’ll slowly come to us as more of the contests come and they incorporate them?) or they might just make us wait for them (they would, as I would, probably want their stories to only have these first, because it’s special, and after awhile and the stories end, give it out. I’m not certain, as you can see there are also featured stories with these hairstyles and all, but they haven’t put it in the hair section, lips section, backgrounds, and outfits.
However, I do realize recently (or might be I didn’t see them) that they added new night versions to many backgrounds, so I am quite pleased.
End of talk and let me go back to my homework.
Thank you for all of you who stayed with me through.