After months of being hurt and ignored by family, and bullied by peers, Emma became severely depressed. She wears long sleeves to cover her cuts and keeps the thing she does it with at all times.
EMMA is standing on the school roof
Emma: (I wonder what they would say if I jumped…)
Emma: (They probably wouldn’t care.)
Emma: (Whatever the case, this is the end of me…)
Emma stands on the edge as Felix, Sophia and Kai walk onto the roof
(Kai and Felix are Emma’s friends, Felix being her best friend, and Sophia is her twin sister)
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Please can you remove my tag!
Hey sorry can you remove my tag? and you two don’t need to start a fight everybody is not perfect so just leave it have a great day/night!
May you please remove my tag? Thank you!
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I’m sry @Allie_Diamond_Epy i’m finding it hard to continue helping u bc these topics r a little bit too sensitive for me. Pls can u remove my tag, thank u. also, episode if very strict w suicide, self harm, ED. Idk if this story will b approved
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Hey hun, can you please remove my tag? Thank you!
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hey hun, i don’t think i’ll be able to help you with this but i will tell you one thing, episode has strict guidelines on suicide and self harm so if you are going to write a story about it, be careful. i am not trying to be rude just trying to tell you. please read through episodes guidelines, topic’s like this are super sensitive so add constant trigger warnings on the story and be specific. don’t say “may include triggering scenes and topic” say “includes self harm/suicide, read at own risk” do not promote; suicide, self-harm, bullying. i recommend having a person proof read your story to see if it can be published. <3
here are episodes guidelines: https://episodesupport.zendesk.com/hc/en-us/articles/115004082994-Content-Guidelines
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I’m not glorifying it. And this is why I asked for feedback
@Sydney_H can you close this?
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That’s not feedback it’s rude, this was just a draft anyways.
Don’t worry, this was just an draft, that I don’t plan on using.
The story isn’t about suicide, it just includes it But than you.
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since it still includes it i would still be careful, if it’s going to be a big or even a small topic in your story make sure you be as careful as possible and go over your story with other people who can be willing to proof read it and give feedback
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…okay… I’m sry I can’t help u it just triggers me a lot n I imagine it will a lot of ppl
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The story is already published and has been for 4 years. So I’ll just keep the original. And she survives
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@Sydney_H can you close this?
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