Feedback for 2 Comedy and Drama stories


Hey everyone
We’re two writers who work very hard of our stories and in order to get better we need some feedbacks about them😝 they’re both comedy and drama or fantasy

Santa’s Naughty List

MC is a spoiled teen and Santa Claus is a loser who lost Christmas due to his divorce with Mrs. Claus. What will happen when two of the worlds collide?

Name of author: Shiran K
Genre:Comedy and fantasy

Smooth Criminals

Life as a mafia unit’s leader can be very difficult, especially when you’re a girl.
Will Kiara make it through?
Genre: Comedy and drama, a bit romance but it’s not about it.
Author: Shani & Shiran

Thank you in advance​:clap::heart::smile:



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