Feedback for feedback?


Hi! @Ramones and I have recently published our story, H & V: Twisted Truth, and we’d love to receive some feedback on it (and I’ll give some feedback on yours in exchange)!

If you could message me on here or on Instagram (@charlottegwrites) with the review, I’ll answer with a review of your story - just send me the link and the name of your story! :hugs:

Here’s the link for our story and a description:
A tragic incident caused you dissociative amnesia. Doctors advise you to take distance from what happened, but someone desperately wants you to remember. Can you handle the truth?

Happy reading, and have a nice day! :sparkles:


Your story sounds amazing :wink:will read it and give you feedback
Here is mine
Title—> Choose!!!

Hope you like it😉


Thanks! Looking forward to hearing your thoughts! :blush:


Thanks for creating this thread! I`d love to do f4f!

Story : Let the demon inside
Gender: Supernatural romance
Description: You have to move back to Dimwood because of your brother. What will you find there? Love, death or supernatural friends?


Name: The Ember Moon Pack
Description: You’re an average highschool girl. What’ll happen to your life when you get kidnapped by a pack of Hybrids that claim that you are their sacred Queen? CC, ChoicesMatter, 5Endings
Chapters: technically 3 bc ch 2 is customization
Genre: Fantasy
Style: Limelight
Instagram: emberpackepisode :smile::heartbeat:


Sounds good! I’ll read it and give feedback as soon as you’ve read Twisted Truth :smile:


Hey, I’d love to read your story and give feedback, but I’d prefer if you could read Twisted Truth first. Thanks :hugs: