Feedback for my story

I’m only on the first episode and I’m an amateur. I feel like I can improve but I’m not sure where. Help is definitely appreciated.

Yay!! That’s fine with me. Do I need to have 3 episodes because I only have one and i’m not done with it.

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I do. it’s skittleslover94

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I sent you a dm on instagram

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Hi there! Would you be interested in doing a review for review? I am very thoughtful in my reviews and provide screenshots proving that I actually read the chapters :slight_smile:

Closing due to one month of inactivity :slight_smile: