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It’s okay. I’ll be waiting :smile:

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Thanks :smile:

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Hi ! Can you review my new story ? :slight_smile:
I would love to hear on what I can improve !
P.S: I don’t do outros, only intros, personal taste lol !

THE WRONG MATCH

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Genre: Romance & Comedy
Description: Married at first sight, uh? Seemed like a good idea until Maya found out that the perfect match she was supposed to be with turned out to be everything but what she dreamed of.
Chapters: 3 (on going)
No CC, Limelight, love interest

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Matter of Fact, Imma just snatch my phone back. Chapter 2 here we come.

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Hey there, I’m @AMagic. I will be reviewing your story today :smile: It’s weird because I know you.

I will be grading.

  • Grammar
  • The Plot
  • Directing
  • Sound
  • Character Devolpment
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lol thank you ! And yeah that was weird but I can’t wait to hear from you :purple_heart::slight_smile:

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Better choice, can’t wait😄

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I just remembered. you don’t do intro nor outros.

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Yours will come after @Hijiko review.

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Alright, I’m already reading her story I kinda liked the description :smile:

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Hi @Hijiko I will be reviewing your story also :blush: I’m going to grade ur story on:

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Has either of you @AMagic or @Forever1201 taken @Rue11’s request?

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Can you take her’s I’m quite busy?

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Of course! Did @Forever1201 not take it?

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No,

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Ok. I will do your request @Rue11 in 15 minutes.

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Okay thanks

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Of course!

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EPISODE 1

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CONS

  • It was a little too long.
  • Speechbubble was off.

PROS

  • It was super funny.
  • I am in love with Maya, she is so likable
  • Poor Max, thinking he has a chance, maybe he does :smirk:
  • Your story should legit be a sitcom.
  • 14 READS, WHAT THE HELL!!

Plot Score: 9.9/10
Sound Score: 10/10
Directing Score: 8/10
Character Devolpment 10/10
Intro Score: 10/10

FINAL SCORE/ 47.9

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Thank you ! I’ll try to keep in mind for the lenght. And for the speech bubbles I thought I had fixed it all but since I have a lot maybe not :joy: I’ll edit it once chapter 4 will be published

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