I’m gonna read your story and I’m going to bloody enjoy it, I saw bravo for putting your feelings and thoughts out there on such a misunderstood and complicated issue 
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You’re really sweet 
Let me know your thoughts on my story and if you feel like it, if you have any advice for my new story after reading Not to Hot; let me know 
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Seems like the people getting offended by everything are people who aren’t even going through the trouble.
I see a lot of white people attacking everyone like their some form of anti-racism superman.
People are just actively seeking offensive content and then blasting the creator it seems 
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Thank you!
I surely will, and let me just say thank you as well for writing a story that sheds a little light on the greatly dismissed issue of bullying and body dismorphia
I’m glad to have over come my past with these issues, and I hope you are (if not already) on your way to a fully happy life as well
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Back at it again with a brilliant idea!
Zaddy, you never fail to amaze me with your creativity (and if you have not read Not to Hot, read it pronto).
I love this idea of all these districts all of which have different classes and the overall dystopian vibe given off.
Regarding the main character and shedding light on race, I think that is brilliant and would love to see what this story holds. The MC is a gorgeous one for sure and I am sure it is guaranteed she will be smart, brave, tough and strong. It is great you are producing a POC MC and in a dystopian era as well! I was yet to see that in a story.
In regards to writing about sensitive topics/topics which may offend - that is why these topics have to be written about. To raise awareness, to show the readers how important an issue is in a creative and understanding manner.
Yes, some people are like truffle sniffers when it comes to seeking something to be offended by ugh. (Y’all need a new hobby 
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A question: at the beginning of the story, will the war be shown or discussed or would it be revealed later on?
You’re really sweet! OMG
I’m crying rn 
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It’ll be discussed and then discussed further in the story
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Aww you are such a hard worker, you deserve the praise!
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Brilliant! So excited to see what happens!
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I love the fact that it’s an open plan you can literally do anything with this setting alone, the story could literally go on it could even have more main characters all from the different districts and more you’ve created a creativity pool that’ll allow you to turn the story into anything, if you’d like some help or feedback hit me up
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Maybe I can do sequels as well since it’s an entire new universe and kingdom 
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Really there’s so much you could do I really like that and I already see so many plot twists already and all “kingdoms” could have sub stories to
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As I said If you’d like some ideas or help with stories lines I’m available to help
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