Feedback needed for description/Summary ‼️‼️

Hi I would like some honest feedback about the summary of my Episode Story. Feel free to be as blunt as you want to be.

And I’ve checked and this does fit the word count.


Headstrong twins enter a cruel, unjust world where their lives are constantly at risk because of their identity. Within this lies a twisted web of dishonesty, secrets and betrayal.

I’m just wondering if it’s too vague?? Or something??

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This seems really interesting! I’d totally read it. And don’t worry, it’s not too vague. It builds up suspense so the reader will want to know what happens. I totally suggest using this! :+1:

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Thanks :blush:

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