FEEDBACK NEEDED: Is my story good enough to continue?


#1

Hi everyone!

I have only recently started using EPISODES and read a few stories. I started writing my own, but am really in need of some opinions!

Writing 3 episodes has taken me ages, so before I invest the time and effort, I’d appreciate some (constructive) feedback. Is the storyline worth continueing and is my directing up to a decent level?

Thanks a lot :slight_smile:


#2

I’ll read it. :face_with_monocle:


#3

I’ll pm you my opinion? K? :slight_smile:


#4

Yes thanks! Whichever advie you have would be appreciated, I wanna keep it exciting! :wink:


#5

I’ll read it, and I’ll give you my feedback later. :grinning:


#6

So I just read the first 2 chapters and I like it. The only thing that I don’t like is that Owen and Danielle kissed in the first chapter, in my opinion you should make readers wait for it so it will be more intriguing and interesting. (It’s only my opinion I’m not hating.) :heart:
If you decide to publish it I will definitely read it. :slightly_smiling_face:
I hope my feedback helped you.


#7

Thanks that’s really helpful feedback! :ok_hand::hugs: I might take it down a notch and wait with that till later to keep it more innocent for starters :rofl: And to build more tension :grin:

Thank you :kissing: :heart:


#8

You’re welcome! :two_hearts:


#9

Closing due to inactivity :slight_smile:


#10