Feedback needed on chapter

I would love some feedback on what ive wrote so far since im trying a new genre. Its going to be comedy/drama!

I may need tips and ways to make it better i still have i edit some things in chapter 1 just a FYI. Please dm me 🩵✔️


I can proofread!

Always happy to help! I love this genre.

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