Feedback needed on my new story!


Hi guys! I started my story a while ago and I was wondering about your impression on it! Please read my story, give a review if you would like to and leave me some fanmail (if you like it)! It would be very helpful to have honest reviews on my story!
Here’s my first story:
Name: Girl of Deception
Description: Aria Lamar has is all. She’s rich, beautiful and smart. But she’s a selfish arrogant jerk. Little does she know that’s all about to change.
Genre: Adventure
Btw the small cover below is still being reviewed



Would you wanna do an R4R and Promo for each other on IG?



Author Name: Giselle Crescent

Genre: Fantasy

Description: Being the daughter of Zeus isn’t easy. Add responsibilities and your mother having cancer topped on with a forbidden temptation to a boy who can rock your world , literally. CC

IG: gisellepisode

Small Cover:

Large Cover:



Sure! I’ll read the first episode of your story and if you can you can read mine!


Hey there! I would be glad to read your storyy!


Thank you so much!


I saw you frequently around the forums hahaha, I like the title, its very interesting! :heart:


Yeah, I do use it a lot :joy:


Hey @gisellec, I also saw you around the forums. I’m into Greek Mythology so I can’t wait to read it! :heart: P.S. When you’re a child of Zeus you get punished by Hera hahah


Its a cool place, I don’t usually see people in our town playing episode :slightly_frowning_face:. At least here I’m connecting with people :two_hearts:


Same here.


Anyway, I’ll read it after I do school works and I’ll give some thoughts about it too :blush:! See you around the forums! It was nice meeting you btw what’s your instagram?


Thank you! I actually don’t have instagram…


Its fine, I’ll just message you!


I’ll read both of your stories and leave feedback! Btw, the plots sound really cool for both of the stories.


Thank you!


Anytime! :hearts:


So, I just read the first episode of your story and I think it’s super interesting! I hate Gracie, she’s so rude! You’re plot is amazing, I’m definitely going to read the rest of your story!


I’m so glad you’re sticking around!! I’ll read it right after my shower so maybe 30-1 hour!! I’ll write up a thorough review if you’d like?




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