Feedback Needed On Scene For A Future Co-Written Story

Info: Olivia is the heir to a financial empire, and Azzy and Mary are her sisters and Azzy is furious at Mary for this!

OLIVIA (MC from story where MC takes a bullet for her sister) is bullying AZZY and MARY because her parents haven’t given her any love since them

MARY
You’re horrible! MARY Go jump off a bridge!

OLIVIA falls silent as tears roll down her cheeks

OLIVIA
Fine.

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That’s AMAZING so far!

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I think you two would be great writing partners :blush:

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:slight_smile: :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:

Wait is Olivia bullying Azzy and Mary or is it the other way around?

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omg i agree 100%!! @whitney99 @Allie_Diamond_Epy loves getting other views on things and she would love a writing partner!! (maybe hehe)

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Wait nvm

Agreed

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