Feedback Needed On Story!

Hey there! I could really use some feedback on my (new) story called: The Dangerous Fight. I’d really appreciate it if you would take your time to do this :blush: . Here’s the link http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5702242260877312

Thank you in advance! Much love <3

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If anybody could do that for me then I would really appreciate it! <3

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At the airport a strange offers your character money to carry mysterious package into the plane .The stranger assure your character that it’s nothing illegal and points out that it already been though the security check .your character has serious doubts but needs the money and therefore agrees …

Huh?

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I am still look for more idea for story ok

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@epi.lynne444
Hey! I can do it if you want!

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Can you please help her good story idea.

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Sure

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I did give her one story idea .

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That’s good!

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She want danger fight

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No no no, I think you got it wrong. I ment feedback on my story, I already have a story plot but I just need people’s opinion’s on my story :grin:

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Ok I did not know

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That be good story .

It’s okay :blush: But thanks anyways! If you want, you could still help out by reading my story and tell me what you think though :smile:

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That be great love to read your story

I would be grateful :blush: Thank you.

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