Feedback of my story?

Hi! I recently published my second story, Rich Girls Cry Too, and I would love to get some opinions and constructive feedback on it! I’ve really worked hard on it, and I’ve been experimenting a lot with the overlays and directing in general. I hope you want to check it out :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:

Title: Rich Girls Cry Too
Author: Ava Josefine
Genre: Drama
Plot/Summary: Vera’s dream of becoming a famous musician feels closer than ever when a new, big TV-show about her school is being made. But things don’t turn out the way she expects them to.
Style: Limelight
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5455460943921152

Thanks in advance!

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This story is really good, idk why is so underrated

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Thank you so much, Stella! It makes me so happy :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:

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Np :blush: just stating the truth :smile:

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